I'm a Hokage in Tokyo

Can this plot and writing get a score of more than 8 points? It's all a defense. I have no idea what I'm looking at.

It seemed okay at first, but when I wrote about a woman, I either pretended to be a bitch or tried to provoke her. It was a super defense. It was poisonous for you. You had to write like this.

Writing novels is meant to arouse emotions. The only things that were fun at the beginning were the solitary approach and the behind-the-scenes approach. The solitary approach is basically difficult to establish after the monsters come out. Why does the monster not have a corresponding cultivation system? The behind-the-scenes reveal his true face in front of the woman is gone. At least there should be a cool point connecting the following to let readers read on. The one who goes to save the girl is not considered the cool part of the one who takes the girl in. There is too little shaping, the character traits and attraction points are not shown, and then the protagonist directly exposes himself, which is a real failure. I am a harem party member.

I hope there will be no female protagonist, less emotional drama, and a female supporting role. No, there will be a poisonous point later where the protagonist spreads extraordinary power, betrays the protagonist, and the protagonist has no counterattack. I hope it will be improved later, best wishes to the author👍👍👍

The head is big and the routine is really old, as if it was the same as ten years ago. The key is to pretend not to be able to pretend, but to pretend to death. Both pretentious and erect. If she is a woman, she will be teased by a drunkard, and then the male protagonist will follow. Ah, big head

Obviously the protagonist only has three magatama, but the clones that appear later are stronger than the last. Where did this ability come from? Are you really just writing something high and making it out of thin air?

The stupid and middle-aged boy spent a frustrating life in Japan unable to let go of his hands and feet.

All the holes that need to be filled in are filled in, but the main plot of this book is a bit strange. Why does it keep deceiving the world? It's not a system that requires others to be shocked. There is no reason to deceive. The protagonist just told a lie and then told a bunch of lies to hide it. Although Although the finale is over, the main plot is still a bit strange. It is quite exciting, but it lacks a little meaning. In fact, the protagonist can be given a fun persona, just to see the whole world become exciting and dance on his hands. This way I personally feel it is more perfect.

If you have extraordinary abilities, you will have extraordinary abilities. Why should you write a script to act like a folk legend? The protagonist does not need the so-called reputation value lottery or anything. It feels so embarrassing😳

After reading Chapter 32, I couldn't hold on anymore and passed away due to poison. I don't want to say anything anymore. It's only been over thirty chapters, and I've received more than thirty fatal blows, many poisonous points. When I looked at the ratings, I thought I quite believed it, but when I looked at it, I thought it was a 6 or 7.