Konoha Was Stunned

1. The author has no concept of time, and the plot develops and the strength increases too quickly. 2. The author added too many things himself, and the style of painting is a bit wrong. At the beginning, when the plug-in was not activated, the protagonist was really weak. But as soon as the plug-in is activated, the iconic ultimate move "Electromagnetic Cannon" is directly given, and the protagonist develops a set of skills by himself in a short period of time. Then everything happened faster and faster, especially after graduating from the ninja school, intrigues, intrigues, and adventures came one after another without any buffer. The protagonist's strength also expanded rapidly, and the Susanoos were beaten casually. But playing a secondary role will result in him being defeated over and over again. The process of playing a small role also fully reflects the author's lack of concept of time. For the first time, the protagonist stabbed the sidekick. Then it seemed like a long time passed, but in fact it was only the next day, the supporting actor was fighting the protagonist again vigorously, and was stabbed again. This time, there was no need to wait the next day. After a while, the supporting actor was fine and confronted the protagonist head-on. In the end, the protagonist was so angry that he cut off his hand, but he couldn't kill the supporting character. In the end, the supporting actor died from the AOE of the copy BOSS... Therefore, I felt quite happy at first, and I somewhat admired the author's imagination. But something feels more and more wrong. Looking back, I can see that such a series of events, although very long, actually happened one after another in a very short period of time. Then I thought about the age of the protagonist, and I guess he is only 10 years old... Suddenly something happened... After all, the protagonist is cheating, which is acceptable, but it is difficult to accept that even the original characters who are the same age as the protagonist and appeared earlier are also cheating. The protagonist is in the same class as Kakashi and Asuma. In the original book, Terumi Mei and Kakashi are the same age, so Terumi Mei is about 10 years old at this time, but she has released all her ultimate moves in the later period. In the setting of this book, Shisui is in the same class as the protagonist. The kaleidoscope has been opened early, and the teleportation technique has also been formed. He has just graduated not long ago... So it felt very awkward. It may have taken the author two months to write these plots, but in fact these plots took place within two days.