A Book List of Drug Testing and Demining (Mainly for Naruto Fans)

The writing is so childish. Even for "shounen comics" like Naruto's original novel, the plot begins when you graduate from elementary school and enter junior high school. If you write a fanfic and start writing it in kindergarten, who are you planning to write it for...

1. The author has no concept of time, and the plot develops and the strength increases too quickly. 2. The author added too many things himself, and the style of painting is a bit wrong. At the beginning, when the plug-in was not activated, the protagonist was really weak. But as soon as the plug-in is activated, the iconic ultimate move "Electromagnetic Cannon" is directly given, and the protagonist develops a set of skills by himself in a short period of time. Then everything happened faster and faster, especially after graduating from the ninja school, intrigues, intrigues, and adventures came one after another without any buffer. The protagonist's strength also expanded rapidly, and the Susanoos were beaten casually. But playing a secondary role will result in him being defeated over and over again. The process of playing a small role also fully reflects the author's lack of concept of time. For the first time, the protagonist stabbed the sidekick. Then it seemed like a long time passed, but in fact it was only the next day, the supporting actor was fighting the protagonist again vigorously, and was stabbed again. This time, there was no need to wait the next day. After a while, the supporting actor was fine and confronted the protagonist head-on. In the end, the protagonist was so angry that he cut off his hand, but he couldn't kill the supporting character. In the end, the supporting actor died from the AOE of the copy BOSS... Therefore, I felt quite happy at first, and I somewhat admired the author's imagination. But something feels more and more wrong. Looking back, I can see that such a series of events, although very long, actually happened one after another in a very short period of time. Then I thought about the age of the protagonist, and I guess he is only 10 years old... Suddenly something happened... After all, the protagonist is cheating, which is acceptable, but it is difficult to accept that even the original characters who are the same age as the protagonist and appeared earlier are also cheating. The protagonist is in the same class as Kakashi and Asuma. In the original book, Terumi Mei and Kakashi are the same age, so Terumi Mei is about 10 years old at this time, but she has released all her ultimate moves in the later period. In the setting of this book, Shisui is in the same class as the protagonist. The kaleidoscope has been opened early, and the teleportation technique has also been formed. He has just graduated not long ago... So it felt very awkward. It may have taken the author two months to write these plots, but in fact these plots took place within two days.

Why do so many fans like to start writing in kindergarten? Either the plot is childish and boring, and the pretentiousness is disgusting; or it is forced to participate in the original plot, which seems particularly outrageous. This book is ridiculously cheating, and someone who is less than 6 years old has the ability to participate in the plot of the Night of the Nine Tails. The problem is, the author wants to go back and make up for it later, saying that Itachi's talent is also very good, almost catching up with the protagonist. What's even more outrageous is that Kabuto is so awesome. His main skills have already been developed at the age of 6, and he has even started working as a spy. It's really Kakashi per capita... Also, in everything written from kindergarten onwards, Danzo and the top management of Konoha will fight over the little kid, as if they can rule the world if they master this little kid who can be slapped to death. Just crazy...

After watching half of it, I felt that it was not a pity at all to be a eunuch. The reasons are as follows: 1. There is no particularly interesting idea. The process of accumulating strength is to level up the shadow clone, but the problem is that just after leveling up, at the age of eleven or twelve, the combat power system seems to have collapsed. The author does not dare to say that the protagonist is invincible, but he dares to say that Kushina is invincible, and that is without the use of the Kyuubi. Hehe. 2. The only idea is not very convincing. He actually figured out how to get rid of the caged bird by using Konan's paper ninjutsu to become immune to physical damage. Well, barely. But the author later said that "some method" could be used to temporarily resist the caged bird and kill the clan. But this "certain method" has never been able to be explained. 3. The character is very mentally retarded. After the protagonist killed the Sand Ninja gang, Kazekage actually started to recruit the protagonist in front of the battle, and the two of them chatted back and forth in a serious manner. If Feng Ying was really so mentally retarded, it would be understandable that he would be killed by Scorpion later. The protagonist is very caring in cooperating with the sand sculpture performance so patiently. 4. The protagonist's character is disgusting. At the beginning, the author clearly portrayed the protagonist as an extreme egoist, who contacted some people purposefully, and treated both giving and reward as transactions. But I mention it occasionally, but I actually mean it, it's really disgusting. 5. The author is really verbose. He repeats the same paragraph every few chapters. It is exactly the same. It may be to improve the word count, but it is also incomprehensible to start to reduce the word count before it is published. I was too busy to read a fanfic about the Hyuga family whose main character is the main character. I thought the author had just stopped reading and might be able to continue it in a few days, so I gave it a try. Now I wonder why the author didn't cut it off earlier...

The writing is barely passable, and the sentences are fluent... The author always likes to add commas to break sentences inexplicably, like this... He also keeps writing "scroll" as "revolver", I don't know why... In terms of imaginative settings, it's okay, and it can be justified... The attributes of the protagonist are a bit interesting. In the early stage, before the "field" mentioned in the introduction is formed, it is quite embarrassing, and I can't learn any ninjutsu... But my strength has grown very fast. I became a special jounin in about half a year, and the eight-door Dunjia opened directly to the seven-door... The plot is a bit disgusting... The struggle for survival at the beginning may have been carefully planned and written like that, but it fell apart as soon as he entered the village... Sometimes the protagonist is written as a stable and tolerant adult, and sometimes the protagonist is written as a childish child, especially when he is written about him acting coquettishly with others... Ugh~ It makes my skin crawl all over the place... Some plots are really incomprehensible according to my logic... For example, why did you save Kushina's life but not let her show up? ... She said it was to protect her own secret, but you can ask her to hide herself from her son, but you can't ask her to keep it secret?

There are many people in the book circle who have tried poison to remind me, but I don't believe it and insist on trying it myself... The author said that he first watched the Naruto fanfic before watching the Naruto anime, and what he said was that he "watched most of Naruto one after another"... Do you dare to write a fanfic just like this? ! No wonder there are bugs everywhere, even the settings of the Rasengan and the Shunjing Technique can be wrong... Maybe it's because people complained a lot. The author changed some previous chapters, but he didn't finish them. It's a mess, and it's inexplicable... The writing is passable, after all, the sentences are fluent... But I still can't distinguish between "discord" and "dirty"... Personally, I feel that the plot is too slow... It may be for foreshadowing or something, but it is obviously not suitable for the rhythm of online novels... It is too depressing in the early stage, and no one can beat it. It keeps running for life, and the protagonist is too bad. He kneels down every time when the group starts. Maybe it is to give serious command [dog head] ]... Looking at what others said later, it seems that there is some illogical plot... It may be because the Iwagakure Village where the protagonist is located does not have a role in the original work, but the protagonist has to interfere with the original plot after all, so he forcefully intervened, and then it probably cannot be explained...

The writing is mediocre and the logic doesn't make sense. The author always likes to give additional explanations, which means that he also realizes that the writing is inappropriate... But he finds the problem and does not solve it in the text. Instead, he explains it again and again. What's the use? Your article itself still makes people feel unreasonable and cannot withstand scrutiny... The protagonist has not done anything serious in the past 7 years, but he can say some flirty things to tease Minato and Kushina. Do you think he can change the plot? Can you who write novels first look up what the "butterfly effect" means? Then the protagonist realizes that he failed to affect the "plot", so he becomes enlightened? Do you think the world is distorted? Crazy...

The author always likes to write some complaints that are long-winded, nutritious, not funny, embarrassing and funny... The protagonist has traveled through time and has a funny personality. You can write it like this... But every character, whether it is original or in the original work, whether his character is calm and serious or sinister and cunning, everyone's psychological activities are like this... It's okay to occasionally complain about one or two sentences, but the author's writing is stinky, long and frequent... If the effect of the complaint is good, then forget it, but the jokes are bad, vulgar and not funny, and they don't even match each other. It's hard to complain... Can you bear it if you have to keep fast forwarding while reading a book...

It felt pretty good before, but since the appearance of the substitute user created by Orochimaru, it has completely collapsed. It doesn't mean that other substitute messengers cannot appear, nor does it mean that the substitute's ability is too strong, but it is inconsistent and illogical. This book is mainly about stand-ins. In terms of combat effectiveness, you can accept how you strengthen the stand-in and weaken the ninja. But I can't stand it if you forcefully lower your IQ. The protagonist is a Kage level, plus five chuunin jounin from the Hyuga family. Faced with a stand-in messenger who was born as an ordinary person, he was so threatened that he did not dare to move, cried, made trouble, and exchanged hostages. At this time, he was already very mentally retarded. A group of chuunin and jounin, after locking onto the enemy, would not surround, retreat, or make a surprise attack, so they were coerced by an ordinary person. It's also strange that the Hyuga family ninjas don't know genjutsu... And don't they also know the teleportation technique? Not to mention empty palms, you can't even throw shurikens? When I was writing at a fast speed before, I couldn't see anything, couldn't react when I saw it, and even when I reacted, my body couldn't keep up. Now, an ordinary person can see, react, and keep up with the Jonin. It's okay, after all, there is always something special about (forcing) a substitute. If you later write that the enemy's double has more unexposed abilities, I will tolerate it. But here comes the more retarded one. When they were about to be forced to exchange hostages, help came from the side. A sneak attack with a shuriken directly cut off the enemy's hand. The reason given is that if you attack from outside the enemy's field of vision, the enemy is an ordinary person and cannot react when he hears the sound. Damn it! So what was the whole chapter about crying and fussing about? To set the stage, are all the ninjas in the Hyuga family mentally retarded? Then the more mentally retarded ones came again. After catching the enemy, let him use his ability to escape! He slipped away under the noses of so many chuunin and jounin! During the interrogation process, the enemy was still not surrounded, and the enemy almost managed to escape when he activated his ability for the first time. The enemy activated his ability for the second time, but the ninjas didn't react... Sigh, maybe the ninjas are all mentally retarded... After all, they believe the enemy's words so easily and give the enemy a chance to send abilities... The more retarded one comes again. The enemy who slipped away was easily caught by others. The weak point is that when he activated his ability this time, others were able to react and caught him immediately. Maybe Konoha's chuunin jounin is really not very good. After all, it's up to the genin to save the world...

The writing is not good, there are many typos, and some words I just made up because I couldn't remember them. The process of pregnancy is called "pregnancy", and giving birth to a child is called "childbirth". I don't know these two words, so I made up my own word "any childbirth", and I got it wrong from beginning to end. The author is a typical "I thought I could speak Japanese after watching two episodes of anime". Halfway through the sensationalizing, a transliterated Japanese sentence suddenly came out... Arigado... Awkward! Your level is not that good, but you still play this? Some of the details are really baffling. At first I asked someone for a knife, but there was no scabbard. The knife seller doesn't have a scabbard? The knife was given as a gift, but not the scabbard? Oh, it turns out it's to let others see how awesome this knife is. As soon as this episode was over, the sword was scabbarded immediately. And why do you have to drag this knife around? Dragging the knife on the ground even when it's not in the scabbard? If you can't hold a knife, how can you practice swordsmanship... Later, you inexplicably put the knife on your waist... I don't understand the point of writing this detail? I didn't do any serious research on the setting of the original work, so I just said it. This is the first time I heard that the bloodstain boundary of attribute fusion must involve the participation of yin and yang attributes. The plot unfolds too slowly. Originally, fandom is about brainstorming, imagination, and creativity. Dozens of chapters have passed, and I still don't see how the idea will develop. The setting at the beginning is quite awesome, so you should start talking about it. Just a "genius" plug-in, what's the point of slowly leveling up by yourself?

A series of sick sentences and a running account writing style. The punctuation marks are used indiscriminately, the double quotation marks are reversed, and there is no paragraphing, which makes me confused just looking at it. I always use periods as ellipses. Are you chatting or posting on Moments? Maybe all the periods were used as ellipses, and there was a whole page of paragraphs without a single period. It hurts to look at it, so I gave up...

In order to get rid of Orochimaru, he forced Orochimaru to lose his intelligence and turned him into a second-rate person. In order to get close to Tsunade, she forced Kimimaro to look like Kato Dan. When Tsunade saw him, she pounced on him and regarded him as her son. The problem is that Tsunade and Kato Dan were not childhood sweethearts since childhood. Did she know Kato Dan when she was a child? Originally, fan fiction didn't require writing skills, it was mainly based on imagination. But you can't mess around with your imagination. Even if you add some secondary assumptions, as long as it's not too outrageous and can be justified, I'll accept it. But if the characters in the original novel change their temperament, become blind, and have plastic surgery, then this is no longer a fanfic. It's too dramatic. When we arrived in Konoha, the most disgusting and mentally retarded Hokage fan story was staged. All the high-level officials in Konoha came to see a little kid's early graduation exam, and Danzo interfered with it and came to steal people... It made me want to vomit... An outsider with connections who didn't even show the limits of blood succession, Konoha took it as seriously as "Jinchūriki + Rinnegan"... The people in Konoha are so idle and have never seen the world...

The author just wants to "forcibly" create the image of an extremely self-interested old bastard. He just arranges for the character what he thinks is a steady, dog-fighting, and self-interested behavior at the expense of others. He completely ignores the situation the character is in at the time and normal logic. Anyway, he just wants to hurt others and betray his teammates, regardless of whether it is beneficial to himself or not... For example, a team of three people finds it difficult to pass a level, so I want to sell a teammate first... Anyway, no matter whether I can win or not, I want to sell my teammates first... (Black Question Mark. Jpg) Another example is saying that people cherish their lives, but then asking others to gamble with their lives. In a situation where you can win in a fight, you deliberately get injured and lose your combat effectiveness, and completely hand over the initiative to the enemy and old teammates... God™ cherishes your life... The old cunt is written down as an old retarded person...