Sasuke: Abducting Little Naruto at the Beginning

First of all, Shikamaru was written as a normal person. Shikamaru asked weakly: Where to go? It feels very abrupt. Shouldn't this be a question Choji would ask? What's more, Hinata and Hizu are directly written as Danzo. What to say (and all kinds of things to appease the group of dogs in the separation family), there is one thing to say, no matter how miserable Hizu is, he will not think about these words in his heart. The following is the reason why the author subjectively wrote Hinata Hizashi as Danzo The original words of Chapter 42 (of course, more of this is the reason why Sasuke felt that these ninjas were terrible when he watched Naruto in his previous life) The author crazily brought in private goods and provoked the Hyuga clan. I was completely speechless. It's none of your business if it sucks. The plot is too retarded. It really feels like a primary school student is having a temper rather than a creator creating. The collapse of the character caused a strong sense of fragmentation, making it impossible to continue reading.

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Ahem, ahem, Naruto and Sasuke are united =? ? ?

It's a bit slow. I say it's slow because of the protagonist's strength.

Will you accept Kushina? Become Naruto's father and spend the rest of his life with the Sage of Six Paths (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia

The writing is good. As a Hokage, I only watch two types of stories, one of which develops slowly with the plot. One way to go straight up is to use a set of combos like the Explosive Hammer Otsutsuki. To make money, fight, and girls, writing more is the way to go.