The Demon Refining Master's Mortal Cultivation System
About This Novel
Qin Yun, the most powerful surgeon, took the body of Dr. Mo and traveled with the system to the world of mortals cultivating immortals. He was reborn as the protagonist Han Li, refined the devil, saved the Mo Mansion, and unified the world! Resist the devil, destroy the Spirit Beast Mountain, establish a sect... And start the most powerful immortal cultivation!
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Official(6)Scraped 16d ago
very good book
The plot is very innovative and real, so go for it, author!
The more I write, the more interesting it becomes.
It's pretty well written. The author should take some time to straighten out the previous sentences and correct some typos.
Different choices, different ways of cultivating immortality
Immortal cultivators can also feel compassion, or they can try to change cruelty.
A good book about cultivating immortals that is constantly improving, but the protagonist is a bit too ruthless
I have been following the update from the beginning until now. Although there are only about 120,000 words now, I can clearly feel the author's progress in writing, plot, and character structure. Many things about the original work are also well analyzed. The author also works very hard to write his own things based on the original work. The shaping of the protagonist is the type I like, without too much. The fighting and killing are more about the exchange of interests, but it is a little too calm in the early stage, and the sudden attack in the later battles is a little abrupt, and some are too dependent on external objects and do not pay attention to the improvement of one's own strength. The emotional lines with other characters are a bit... Well, I just don't feel that the protagonist has feelings for other characters, they are all used, a little too cold-blooded, and it is difficult for people to substitute. Other changes in the plot are very innovative and reasonable. The fact that the Spirit Beast Mountain and the Yan family were wiped out at the same time is a bit unexpected, but it feels reasonable. However, the items issued by the system are a bit too advanced and difficult to grasp. Moreover, the system has gradually been weakened later, and it feels like a classical cultivation of immortality. Overall, the writing is good, but the portrayal of the characters' emotions needs to be improved.
Can the author be a little more detailed? Is the puppet in the pill forming stage in the early or middle stage? It's still a later stage. If the system produces a product that must be a high-quality product, then I will consider it to be a late stage. Although I haven't read The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality, I quite like to read fan fiction.
It would be better if there was no system and the protagonist was not Han Li.
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Community(0)
Official(6)Scraped 16d ago
very good book
The plot is very innovative and real, so go for it, author!
The more I write, the more interesting it becomes.
It's pretty well written. The author should take some time to straighten out the previous sentences and correct some typos.
Different choices, different ways of cultivating immortality
Immortal cultivators can also feel compassion, or they can try to change cruelty.
A good book about cultivating immortals that is constantly improving, but the protagonist is a bit too ruthless
I have been following the update from the beginning until now. Although there are only about 120,000 words now, I can clearly feel the author's progress in writing, plot, and character structure. Many things about the original work are also well analyzed. The author also works very hard to write his own things based on the original work. The shaping of the protagonist is the type I like, without too much. The fighting and killing are more about the exchange of interests, but it is a little too calm in the early stage, and the sudden attack in the later battles is a little abrupt, and some are too dependent on external objects and do not pay attention to the improvement of one's own strength. The emotional lines with other characters are a bit... Well, I just don't feel that the protagonist has feelings for other characters, they are all used, a little too cold-blooded, and it is difficult for people to substitute. Other changes in the plot are very innovative and reasonable. The fact that the Spirit Beast Mountain and the Yan family were wiped out at the same time is a bit unexpected, but it feels reasonable. However, the items issued by the system are a bit too advanced and difficult to grasp. Moreover, the system has gradually been weakened later, and it feels like a classical cultivation of immortality. Overall, the writing is good, but the portrayal of the characters' emotions needs to be improved.
Can the author be a little more detailed? Is the puppet in the pill forming stage in the early or middle stage? It's still a later stage. If the system produces a product that must be a high-quality product, then I will consider it to be a late stage. Although I haven't read The Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality, I quite like to read fan fiction.
It would be better if there was no system and the protagonist was not Han Li.
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