I Have Some Tips for Cultivating Immortality
About This Novel
[There is a magical medicine three hundred meters ahead. Lin Xu collected it calmly. [There is a secret cave five hundred meters ahead. Lin Xu received the inheritance from an expert. How simple will it be when a person's life has reminders. Please take a look at Lin Xu's cheating life. Passerby A: "I'll report you for cheating!" Lin Xu gave him a big fireball and spread the ashes. "Child, reporting is useless!"
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Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
There is a reason why there is no one. . . . .
"Black Desire Pill?" Jiang Shoukun was confused in his heart. Wu Changlong also threw his clothes aside and explained: "The Black Desire Pill is a human pill that is made by killing a person when he is extremely angry. Every pill is very precious." Jiang Shoukun seemed to think of something when he heard this sentence. He looked up suddenly and saw Wu Changlong kneeling beside Le Yuzhu's legs. "Wu Changlong!!!" Jiang Shoukun shouted instantly, the blood in his heart kept washing over his body, and the emotions in his heart were filled with anger! Wu Changlong laughed and said, "Be angry!!!" ... An hour later, Wu Changlong slowly left here.
It feels like the main character is just a virgin bitch and is gone. In the first ten pictures, I think the protagonist is too kind.
Is the author stupid? In the world of cultivating immortals, if a person from a small town changes his life, how could he still not change his mind? Abandon the book, abandon the book. If you write like this, you will never make much money.
The weak and the strong
Is the world of cultivation still so holy? Can't you learn from Old Demon Han? If you don't have the strength, you won't know what to do!
I'm so speechless. Can the protagonist be more stable? It's all about rules. If you give him six spirit stones, he'll be fine. He also likes to cause trouble.
Can you be a little more naughty and stop causing trouble by yourself?
Just that talisman inheritance
I don't believe that one sect leader, senior brother, can't protect two outer disciples, and they still have the talisman inheritance. And that long dragon, the sect has covered the sky with one hand. The sect leader hasn't found out yet, so there is something wrong with what you wrote.
Toxic-⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
After thinking about it, Lin Xu gave up the idea of using the aura of stone milk to rapidly increase his cultivation. Although it was tempting, the foundation was more important.
good guy
You've died once and you still don't know how to cherish your life, ah, giving it away indiscriminately? I don't understand. You just traveled through time and you have nothing to do with that group of people.
The prompts are too frequent and the prompt content is not brief.
Obviously the introduction prompts are very short, but when you click on it, you will find that the system prompts too frequently, prompting you every time, even if the protagonist is practicing. It's like taking three steps and a prompt will pop out. And the prompt content and the style of the introduction are completely different. The prompts in the introduction are short, and the prompts in the chapters are as long as human speech. The author forgot his original intention for the sake of word count, and the introduction does not match the content. It would be better if it only hinted at opportunities. But for the sake of word count, the system gives prompts for every little thing and teaches the protagonist how to do it. This will lead to watery content and make the protagonist have no independent character.
There is a reason why no one is watching.
You have the talent to write pornographic books. If you write pornographic books, I will definitely read them.
Immortal cultivation is really weak... "I should be able to reach 100 meters and eight seconds using the light wind technique now, and the duration is one minute. When I reach the magic state
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Community(0)
Official(35)Scraped 20d ago
There is a reason why there is no one. . . . .
"Black Desire Pill?" Jiang Shoukun was confused in his heart. Wu Changlong also threw his clothes aside and explained: "The Black Desire Pill is a human pill that is made by killing a person when he is extremely angry. Every pill is very precious." Jiang Shoukun seemed to think of something when he heard this sentence. He looked up suddenly and saw Wu Changlong kneeling beside Le Yuzhu's legs. "Wu Changlong!!!" Jiang Shoukun shouted instantly, the blood in his heart kept washing over his body, and the emotions in his heart were filled with anger! Wu Changlong laughed and said, "Be angry!!!" ... An hour later, Wu Changlong slowly left here.
It feels like the main character is just a virgin bitch and is gone. In the first ten pictures, I think the protagonist is too kind.
Is the author stupid? In the world of cultivating immortals, if a person from a small town changes his life, how could he still not change his mind? Abandon the book, abandon the book. If you write like this, you will never make much money.
The weak and the strong
Is the world of cultivation still so holy? Can't you learn from Old Demon Han? If you don't have the strength, you won't know what to do!
I'm so speechless. Can the protagonist be more stable? It's all about rules. If you give him six spirit stones, he'll be fine. He also likes to cause trouble.
Can you be a little more naughty and stop causing trouble by yourself?
Just that talisman inheritance
I don't believe that one sect leader, senior brother, can't protect two outer disciples, and they still have the talisman inheritance. And that long dragon, the sect has covered the sky with one hand. The sect leader hasn't found out yet, so there is something wrong with what you wrote.
Toxic-⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
After thinking about it, Lin Xu gave up the idea of using the aura of stone milk to rapidly increase his cultivation. Although it was tempting, the foundation was more important.
good guy
You've died once and you still don't know how to cherish your life, ah, giving it away indiscriminately? I don't understand. You just traveled through time and you have nothing to do with that group of people.
The prompts are too frequent and the prompt content is not brief.
Obviously the introduction prompts are very short, but when you click on it, you will find that the system prompts too frequently, prompting you every time, even if the protagonist is practicing. It's like taking three steps and a prompt will pop out. And the prompt content and the style of the introduction are completely different. The prompts in the introduction are short, and the prompts in the chapters are as long as human speech. The author forgot his original intention for the sake of word count, and the introduction does not match the content. It would be better if it only hinted at opportunities. But for the sake of word count, the system gives prompts for every little thing and teaches the protagonist how to do it. This will lead to watery content and make the protagonist have no independent character.
There is a reason why no one is watching.
You have the talent to write pornographic books. If you write pornographic books, I will definitely read them.
Immortal cultivation is really weak... "I should be able to reach 100 meters and eight seconds using the light wind technique now, and the duration is one minute. When I reach the magic state
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