
Naruto: You Call This Guy a Savior? !
by Dirt Slime
About This Novel
Keiichi was reborn and returned to the beginning of Naruto's story. In his last life, he had gone to the extreme, going from "Naruto" to "Boruto" abruptly. As a result, the Otsutsuki clan invaded and the entire Konoha village was wiped out. After rebirth, he was no longer strict and wanted to let himself go. Teach Naru Sasakura and make them stronger than the previous life. Even if Kaguya is reborn, she will have to hide away. Make up for the shortcomings, let those tragedies no longer happen, the damned people will not die well, and the emerging Konoha will be great again. The plot is magically changed, and every time the plot changes, Keiichi can receive system rewards and his strength will skyrocket. Secretly arranged to increase the intensity of the four battles, the reincarnation of the dirty soil does not matter, only the chaotic dance of gods and demons can fight out a bunch of Gu kings. There is no need to wait for the Otsutsuki clan to come and kill them. It is time to release the natives of the ninja world and give these powerful aliens a little shock. Peace in the ninja world? No, our goal is the stars and the sea. "The ninjas of Konoha are so rude." Otsutsuki, who had his eyes marked, said while wiping his sweat. The million-word completed work "Naruto: Life in Konoha from the Time Loop" has been completed
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Official(9)Scraped 17d ago
Make the characters who think that kind of thing the protagonist look like brainless people. Shikamaru's family is also included
The protagonist feels that he is very smart, but in fact he has no brains. The people he recruits are all useless people, because he has cheats and he fights big civil engineering projects, which cannot be interfered with by Kage-level ninjas. Can't even help And the people he roped in should have some brains. But what he wrote was totally mindless. It seems that Orochimaru is smarter. I have no idea about the rest. Sometimes the information is important, and sometimes the information is unimportant. Sometimes strength is important, and sometimes strength is not. What on earth are you writing? The purpose of recruiting them is to fight aliens together. But they were useless. Those people didn't have the strength to intervene at all. Only Naruto and Sasuke were somewhat useful.
Why do the time travelers feel so different? Some are very embarrassed. They have to be interrogated for everything, but they still care about Konoha. If it were me, there would definitely be a chance that I would take Konoha with me when I come out. No brainer, I don't need to write this paragraph at all. Why write this paragraph? There are also situations where time travelers are not very powerful and threaten Uchiha Obito, so is this considered a serious polarization?
A very thoughtful author can present the future and past he wants to see in writing. Isn't this a manifestation of illusion? Chapter 2, whether it's a foreshadowing or a new storyline of the Minato family's reunion (although Naru's mother hasn't been rescued yet), it still fulfilled a dream that I had cried about because of Minato's death in the battle. I highly recommend it.
A bit of a sadist, he has always been forced to hide his strength, and has repeatedly used his strength to interrogate his fellow villagers. She has also been working as a nanny behind the scenes.
Timeline binding is too poisonous. The ninja world is not prehistoric. If such a function really exists, the protagonist should not exist anymore.
From the moment Kaduo comes out, I can write whatever I want and let the collective wisdom come to me.
The logic doesn't make sense. It's a bit uncomfortable and easy to write to death.
I have read more than 200 chapters, and a Hyuga Neji appears. Author, you will not tell me that the protagonist is carrying these things? Go to fight the magic modified version of Datong wood board with high configuration
New ideas but the writing is a bit poor
Start as an orphan, gain various abilities, cooperate with the Fourth Hokage to create a good ninja village. I haven't finished watching the last part, and I have forgotten the plot. I have an idea, I want to write a new plot, but the writing is not good. Later, I help Neji find the moon passage and reshape the Hyuga family. After returning from the moon, aliens are coming? The more I write, the more confusing it becomes. What a pity.
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Official(9)Scraped 17d ago
Make the characters who think that kind of thing the protagonist look like brainless people. Shikamaru's family is also included
The protagonist feels that he is very smart, but in fact he has no brains. The people he recruits are all useless people, because he has cheats and he fights big civil engineering projects, which cannot be interfered with by Kage-level ninjas. Can't even help And the people he roped in should have some brains. But what he wrote was totally mindless. It seems that Orochimaru is smarter. I have no idea about the rest. Sometimes the information is important, and sometimes the information is unimportant. Sometimes strength is important, and sometimes strength is not. What on earth are you writing? The purpose of recruiting them is to fight aliens together. But they were useless. Those people didn't have the strength to intervene at all. Only Naruto and Sasuke were somewhat useful.
Why do the time travelers feel so different? Some are very embarrassed. They have to be interrogated for everything, but they still care about Konoha. If it were me, there would definitely be a chance that I would take Konoha with me when I come out. No brainer, I don't need to write this paragraph at all. Why write this paragraph? There are also situations where time travelers are not very powerful and threaten Uchiha Obito, so is this considered a serious polarization?
A very thoughtful author can present the future and past he wants to see in writing. Isn't this a manifestation of illusion? Chapter 2, whether it's a foreshadowing or a new storyline of the Minato family's reunion (although Naru's mother hasn't been rescued yet), it still fulfilled a dream that I had cried about because of Minato's death in the battle. I highly recommend it.
A bit of a sadist, he has always been forced to hide his strength, and has repeatedly used his strength to interrogate his fellow villagers. She has also been working as a nanny behind the scenes.
Timeline binding is too poisonous. The ninja world is not prehistoric. If such a function really exists, the protagonist should not exist anymore.
From the moment Kaduo comes out, I can write whatever I want and let the collective wisdom come to me.
The logic doesn't make sense. It's a bit uncomfortable and easy to write to death.
I have read more than 200 chapters, and a Hyuga Neji appears. Author, you will not tell me that the protagonist is carrying these things? Go to fight the magic modified version of Datong wood board with high configuration
New ideas but the writing is a bit poor
Start as an orphan, gain various abilities, cooperate with the Fourth Hokage to create a good ninja village. I haven't finished watching the last part, and I have forgotten the plot. I have an idea, I want to write a new plot, but the writing is not good. Later, I help Neji find the moon passage and reshape the Hyuga family. After returning from the moon, aliens are coming? The more I write, the more confusing it becomes. What a pity.









