Jiulu Travels

Jiulu Travels

by Ikari Mountain

Length:
56Kwords12chapters
Latest:
Ch. 12First Encounter: the Mystery of the Holy Weapon
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About This Novel

Coming from a different world destroyed by false gods, he traveled alone in the collapsing apocalypse and set foot on the nine continents that had not yet decayed. The future intersects with the past, magic and machinery coexist. Eight holy weapons born from the souls of the old world appear in the world at this moment, triggering turmoil and competition for power. The Twelve Apostles are still wandering around the world. The false god has not yet awakened, but his will has already spread in the dark, waiting for the door of destiny to open again. No one noticed that the myth had already begun to quietly resurrect The trip to Jiulu is not to save the world, but to prove the value of existence.

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User 1202819319919mo ago

The background setting is special and some minor flaws deserve improvement.

The story builds a large-scale fictional world, but only a corner of the curtain has been unveiled so far. As a novice, the author may be a little verbose in describing certain scenes, and the dark tones may be a bit too heavy. Pay attention to adjusting the narrative atmosphere.

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To Ice_ed9mo ago

The world view is grand and there is a lot to expand on.

The world view looks quite big, but it hasn't been developed yet so it's hard to say. Some paragraphs are a bit long, it seems a bit difficult, and the writing is a bit too depressing. In short, it's a new author.

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