Naruto: Awakening Corpse Veins at the Beginning
by Outing Book
About This Novel
Gurgling blood flowed out from between Jing Ming's fingers. He lowered his head and tasted it. "Yeah, it smells like Uchiha." As a time traveler, Jing Ming gained a very abnormal ability. He can gain other people's abilities, talents, and memories by swallowing blood and chakra. Starting from the night of the genocide in Kirigakure Village, Imei gradually grew from a little assistant under Orochimaru to a shadow that controlled the ninja world. "Actually, blood doesn't taste good at all." Jing Ming opened his reincarnation eyes and looked at his ancestor Kaguya in the sky. The corners of his mouth curled up, not hiding his greed at all. "But chakra is much more delicious."
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Official(8)Scraped 7d ago
This is a rubbish novel. It originally had good ability settings, but suddenly it turned out to be a complete failure.
It's a rubbish novel. It had a very good setting but was defeated by himself. Do you just write about escaping and following Orochimaru out and then follow the development of the plot? You have to escape the failure of a white water, do you understand the three chapters of Spirit Crystal? The first few chapters are the most important. You have to attract readers to continue reading. Drinking so much blood is quite annoying. Another failure like Shirasui. How awesome is this Shiraizu? What are the limits of his blood inheritance? Even Orochimaru's snake clone can run away. A good setting is ruined by a character. You, the author, are really enough. Can you disgust readers by writing this character specifically? What kind of childhood sweethearts are you talking about for me? You can forget about it if you create this character. What kind of feelings can you bring out? Are your childhood sweethearts and childhood playmates evil and disgusting? It's fine if you get a Kirikage ANBU to kill him, but if you have to get a childhood sweetheart to kill him, that's a big mistake.
Chapter 50: What can't be changed? It's only over fifty chapters, so it can still be improved upon with a major overhaul.
Otherwise, if you continue writing, you won't be able to change it even if you want to. You can't give up, otherwise the plot will easily collapse and you won't be able to continue writing. Many authors who have written more than 200,000 words have made major revisions and small revisions constantly. It is like this at the beginning of the novel, so you must persist.
Not bad, I feel it's okay, please cheers, author.
So-so
I don't want to read it anymore. I need ten words to post it. Old fire.
Even if you drink all the blood of ninjas in the ninja world, you won't be able to reach the level of Six Paths, right?
And it cannot integrate the power of all things.
Another pretentious and mentally retarded novel. The protagonist knows everything and everyone looks down on him.
The more I watch, the more boring I become
As long as the author does not enter the palace, it will be fine
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Community(0)
Official(8)Scraped 7d ago
This is a rubbish novel. It originally had good ability settings, but suddenly it turned out to be a complete failure.
It's a rubbish novel. It had a very good setting but was defeated by himself. Do you just write about escaping and following Orochimaru out and then follow the development of the plot? You have to escape the failure of a white water, do you understand the three chapters of Spirit Crystal? The first few chapters are the most important. You have to attract readers to continue reading. Drinking so much blood is quite annoying. Another failure like Shirasui. How awesome is this Shiraizu? What are the limits of his blood inheritance? Even Orochimaru's snake clone can run away. A good setting is ruined by a character. You, the author, are really enough. Can you disgust readers by writing this character specifically? What kind of childhood sweethearts are you talking about for me? You can forget about it if you create this character. What kind of feelings can you bring out? Are your childhood sweethearts and childhood playmates evil and disgusting? It's fine if you get a Kirikage ANBU to kill him, but if you have to get a childhood sweetheart to kill him, that's a big mistake.
Chapter 50: What can't be changed? It's only over fifty chapters, so it can still be improved upon with a major overhaul.
Otherwise, if you continue writing, you won't be able to change it even if you want to. You can't give up, otherwise the plot will easily collapse and you won't be able to continue writing. Many authors who have written more than 200,000 words have made major revisions and small revisions constantly. It is like this at the beginning of the novel, so you must persist.
Not bad, I feel it's okay, please cheers, author.
So-so
I don't want to read it anymore. I need ten words to post it. Old fire.
Even if you drink all the blood of ninjas in the ninja world, you won't be able to reach the level of Six Paths, right?
And it cannot integrate the power of all things.
Another pretentious and mentally retarded novel. The protagonist knows everything and everyone looks down on him.
The more I watch, the more boring I become
As long as the author does not enter the palace, it will be fine
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