Rainbow Moon Seeking Immortality
About This Novel
The world of mortals is colorful, and the clouds and waterways are long at the end of the world. At this moment, the wind returns to heaven and earth, and it is incomparable to the bright moonlight in the water. The summer wind was beautiful, and in the bamboo forest, a wail suddenly broke out. Looking around at the pool of blood on the ground, Jiang He looked at the stern and indifferent young man and asked lightly: "Is it intentional or accidental?" "It's intentional!" ... It seems a bit far for him that the Blue Star social animal can show his talents in this chessboard where the ten great sages and God's will jointly hold the pieces after traveling to another world... Because, he suddenly discovered that the person he traveled through was a passerby from the Novice Village in the early stage! "Escape from Qingmao Mountain is considered a victory!" Ps: Do not kill model workers
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Official(22)Scraped 3d ago
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Everything is description. All I can say is, how many times do you have to describe a mountain?
The character of the protagonist is not likable, just like a villain with no big ambitions. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that it is okay, but the protagonist is not likable.
Do you have an outline?
I just kept following the original plot and suppressed the development. I didn't even consider the Humanity, Painting, and Dreaming schools that would rise later. I forgot about my own Demon from Beyond the World and always inherited others'. Apart from the plot in my memory, shouldn't the biggest trump card be the Demon from Beyond's talent and knowledge? How can I become an eminent person without my own things? Have you read the Ancestors of Human Beings carefully?
Gu has become a bit popular recently. It's better to make a new one
When looking at the small picture on the cover of the novel, I looked like an insect seeking immortality🤗
Are there any other fans? Recommend a few books
The writing is okay, better than most books
To be honest, it is almost impossible for Fang Yuan not to kill you. Not to mention Blood Furnace Gu, Fang Yuan was a blood path Gu Immortal in his previous life, so it is impossible to keep his relatives alive. Later, Heavenly Court asked Fang Zheng to use the blood path killing move against Fang Yuan. Even if he is not a biological brother, the Gu Yue clan has blood ties and can be useful, so it is impossible to keep you alive.
Fan fiction?
The writing is too homogeneous. I don't have a sense of empathy at all with what you wrote. If I hadn't read the original work, I would have to read it again to understand your book. I wrote so many words in vain and I can't understand it at all. I mean, it's too niche.
The description is too watery, it's underrated, and the plot is retarded. . . . . . .
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Official(22)Scraped 3d ago
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Everything is description. All I can say is, how many times do you have to describe a mountain?
The character of the protagonist is not likable, just like a villain with no big ambitions. After reading dozens of chapters, I feel that it is okay, but the protagonist is not likable.
Do you have an outline?
I just kept following the original plot and suppressed the development. I didn't even consider the Humanity, Painting, and Dreaming schools that would rise later. I forgot about my own Demon from Beyond the World and always inherited others'. Apart from the plot in my memory, shouldn't the biggest trump card be the Demon from Beyond's talent and knowledge? How can I become an eminent person without my own things? Have you read the Ancestors of Human Beings carefully?
Gu has become a bit popular recently. It's better to make a new one
When looking at the small picture on the cover of the novel, I looked like an insect seeking immortality🤗
Are there any other fans? Recommend a few books
The writing is okay, better than most books
To be honest, it is almost impossible for Fang Yuan not to kill you. Not to mention Blood Furnace Gu, Fang Yuan was a blood path Gu Immortal in his previous life, so it is impossible to keep his relatives alive. Later, Heavenly Court asked Fang Zheng to use the blood path killing move against Fang Yuan. Even if he is not a biological brother, the Gu Yue clan has blood ties and can be useful, so it is impossible to keep you alive.
Fan fiction?
The writing is too homogeneous. I don't have a sense of empathy at all with what you wrote. If I hadn't read the original work, I would have to read it again to understand your book. I wrote so many words in vain and I can't understand it at all. I mean, it's too niche.
The description is too watery, it's underrated, and the plot is retarded. . . . . . .
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The writing is pretty good, not too toxic. The protagonist's development is too slow, I really don't know how he will become a hero in the future. The author will stop updating for a while
Real person fanfic The protagonist travels through time and becomes a member of the Gu Yue clan The protagonist walks the path of the moon
Gu Zhenren fanfic
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