Daojun, Start from Penglai Foundation Building

Killing a tiger requires a lot of chirping

At the beginning, it was said that Qingxiu looked down on the county magistrate, but he accepted Tian Ming'an, the mayor of Tian Town, as his apprentice? Does the apprentice have to take care of the Tian family? Does the protagonist want to help the Tian family? Relationship interests are intertwined. Speaking of interests, wouldn't it be more beneficial to accept county honors? Talking about fate, are the grandfather and grandson saved by the ruined temple more destined? Why doesn't the protagonist accept it? The protagonist is an orphan who was rescued by the elders of the sect, and is also a reborn person who has cultivated to become an immortal? If you are successful in this kind of cultivation, it is unjust. It can be seen that the author is not solid in his work and the plot is boring.

The mighty Tang Dynasty embraced hundreds of rivers, had a vast territory, abundant resources, and outstanding people. Now recruiting Datang characters. Datang Fang: Dao Palace, Academy, Qin Tianjian, County Governor, Prince's Affiliation Rich families: Cui family on Huainan Road, Su family on Jiannan Road, Lu family on Jianghuai Road, Gao family on Lingnan Road, The Xiao Family of Jiangdong Province, the Wei Family of Jiangnan Province, the Qin Family of Hebei Province, and the Wu Family of Henan Province (for the time being, eight families are provided) Allied forces: aristocratic families, sects, spirits, aquatic tribes Neutral Party: The format is as follows: Faction: Datang Name: Li Tai Realm: Transformation into God Identity: Second Prince of the Tang Dynasty Exercise: XXXX (can be written or not) Magic weapon: XXXX (can be written or not) Faction: Jushi Name: Cui Boping Realm: Transformation into God Identity: Elder of Cui family in Huainan, Jiedushi of Xinnan Province Kung Fu: XXXX Magic weapon: XXXX

The beginning of "Lianxu" is just like those cool short stories, and there is nothing to look forward to later on. The author is not suitable for writers of the immortal cultivating school. He can't control the scene when it is big, and he is not good at foreshadowing the plot. The more people practice, the clearer their true intentions will be. Later, your true intentions will change, and you will forcefully pretend to be cool, without any feeling. The first part is okay, two stars.

The rest of this book is useless. You are a piece of trash jumping around in front of the big boss. You would have been crushed to death if the author had not tried hard to make up for it. Even if you can barely justify it, it is still false. If you always think about writing big scenes and big actions, you should first think about whether the protagonist is physically capable of sustaining it. If you don't have that ability, don't write the protagonist in. Just keep improving your realm and fight at the same level, as long as there is a tall person on top to support you. Are all the people in the sect dead? Without the protagonist, the sect will collapse? . In a word, the positioning of the protagonist is not well written, and the protagonist's world will no longer change. He has a hand in everything, and his hands are really long.

The portrayal of the protagonist's character is a bit fragmented, and he is both serious and independent. When the protagonist of the Zifu cultivator showed the Penglai Order, persuaded the cultivators to keep silent, and turned into a god to bow down and give gifts to apologize, this book was really unreadable.

After slaying the clone of the River God with his sword, he learned that three years after the River God, the golden elixir was coming. With normal thinking, shouldn't the foundation-building pig's feet run away immediately? Staying where you are, this is not the rhythm of seeking death. You are stupid. After Zifu, you wanted to cross a realm to challenge the river god in the early stage. This pig's foot is simply brainless. The rhythm of pure death, shouldn't it be a cautious heart?

The protagonist is worse than an evil cultivator. At least the evil cultivator didn't kill tens of thousands of people. How can he tolerate others just for the sake of being on the side of the bed? , You good guy, you have already extended taxes to 500 years later. Don't talk about it. It has nothing to do with you. Without you, this thing would not happen. I don't have the mental construction to read a novel and be indifferent to killing tens of thousands of people. I have no sense of substitution at all.

I don't know what to say later. If you join forces and kill someone else's practice, will the People's Mahayana come to kill you? In such a big melee, I still don't understand. Since these alliances have united, why don't they all just push over, Chunyang fights hard, Dongtian Taoist If the two masters of Zhenyang don't kill those Daoists directly, let the Kaiyang enter the master's path, wipe out the pure yang, and kill the Mahayana, leaving the combined body to sharpen it. If you are fighting like this in a melee, Linyuan is still the leader, and everyone says that it is safe to enter the pure yang, and people haven't gathered the fire to kill Linyuan. , They are not little miscellaneous fish, Chunyang leaks a little energy at every turn, and the combined Mahayana will die. Then Chunyang comes out, why should these be mixed, wait for Chunyang to decide the winner, but it cannot be determined. They are fighting for luck, and let the people below push it little by little. Chunyang starts fighting on the battlefield, and I don't know why their hearts are so big.

Why do you still want perfect attendance when you are lazy? Post one chapter every day and get paid out at 23.59. If you post or not, you are really invincible. I suggest you stop writing.