Pirate's Immortal Flame

This book is quite novel. The protagonist is Marco, but he didn't lick his white beard. I'm optimistic about you ヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬

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He was originally just an ordinary Chinese boy from Earth. As always, he was in his room, facing the computer screen and watching a very pornographic and violent anime video produced by an island country. He was the kind who would fight with all his strength and fists if he didn't agree with his words. There were many paper towels piled on the table, and there was a lot of unknown liquid on them. At that time, he had already seen the most exciting climax, when thousands of people took turns bullying that group of young-looking people. I've already raised his cat's knife, just show me this.

It's too verbose and a bit watered down. I hope the author can change this.

Brother, I'm here to join in the fun and wish you a great fire. 😶

Apart from anything else, I think the most poisonous part of this book is that Marco went to the Shampoo Islands and then joined the navy. I know what the author means is that he wants to establish a friendly relationship with Whitebeard but not with the ship But you didn't handle this part particularly well. The protagonist is only 13 or 14 years old. Even if he eats a devil fruit, how much fighting power will he have? Obviously with Whitebeard as a big backer, you can definitely learn domineering on his ship. After you have a certain level of strength, it's not too late to go out and have a career. During this period, Whitebeard recruits the protagonist. The protagonist can yell, I want to be the Pirate King. Then with the spirit of Whitebeard, he will not look for the male protagonist again. He even admires the protagonist very much and will take care of him more in the future. The protagonist also goes to the Naval Academy, and he goes to the elite class. I don't know if this is a foreshadowing that the author wants to use to judge the navy. I also want to talk about it here When you go to the Navy, do you become the intelligence organization of the Navy or the CP organization of the World Government? If you go to the elite class, you will definitely become a mainstay in the Navy after graduation. Is there no problem in checking your identity at this time? Then an investigation revealed something was wrong. It was found that you had been on Whitebeard's ship for a while. If you went to the Navy at this time, the Navy might think you were a spy. And as for Whitebeard, as a big boss of the pirates, there are spies keeping an eye on Whitebeard's fleet all the time. Is there anything wrong with this? Whitebeard returns from danger with one more person by his side. This kind of thing will definitely be reported to the police. Aspect. As for the Navy, no matter what, if the protagonist is not killed because of his super talent, then at least someone will be watching him. It is even more likely that the elite class will not be admitted. After all, the elite class is the mainstay of the future of the navy. It is impossible for a person with serious suspicion to enter. So where does the protagonist get the courage? He dares to go to the navy, and his behavior is not like a time-traveler who has watched the plot. It feels like he is forcibly subduing his intelligence. Of course, the poisonous points I mentioned are generally aimed at old bookworms. If you lose your mind and don't pay special attention to the setting, then this book is okay.

Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water.

The timeline of this book is a poisonous point, but it is understandable in order to prevent the protagonist from joining the Whitebeard Pirates. However, the pirate information has to be changed. The fact that the Chambord Islands do not know the fruit is incomprehensible. Moreover, the author, there are many typos in your book. At present, I have only read the front and back. I will tell you after reading it.

The writing is quite unique, but there are too many typos, which makes me feel embarrassed.

It's just that updates are too slow and there are too few chapters! ! !