I! the Wine Sword Immortal, Signed in Shushan for 500 Years

Chapter 29, directing Ye Bingning and He Taichong to fight, one action is a bit speechless. For example, in the second action, if you say a left dodge or a left palm, it is probably too late. What's more, your hundreds of words of action explanations, analysis, listening, and understanding will probably be gone by the time it's all finished. It feels like the last second of a TV series. You can say goodbye to tens of thousands of words in that second, and it ends after taking a bath and eating hot pot or something.

Are you thinking wrong? Hahahahaha

In fact, very few people drink alcohol in Shushan. Even now, no one is known to be addicted to alcoholism near Shushan. The author probably has never been to Shushan. It is recommended that the author visit Shushan more and learn more about the culture before writing. There are not many novels or TV series about alcoholics. . . . In fact, seeing as the author loves wine so much, I might as well change the name to "Drunkard Sword Sect". I personally think it is more suitable for what you describe. . .

I couldn't stand it when I was helping Liu Bingning. Wouldn't that be harmful to others? If you lose in the arena, you lose. Why would you help others cheat? Besides, is that cheating? That is harmful. A cultivator does not have a firm heart and cannot achieve success. If she loses, she will lose completely and cannot hold her head up from now on. But if she survives, that will be her motivation. She has a strong Taoist heart and determines her lower limit. If the protagonist helps her win, she will only have a good impression of the protagonist after knowing it. It is just a shameless win for Shushan. The leader of the righteous path? After doing this, is Shushan still worthy of being called the leader of the righteous path? Joke

Pinyin nine keys, the ninth key, click seven times in a row, pronounce it and see.

This is it, this is it, this is it

Ask the author, what type of book is this? If it's that kind of thousand-layer cake, just say so.

After reading the first chapter, the setting is quite weird, letting people with no cultivation skills forcibly guard emmmm3x as he floats by.

Note: This book is worth reading, although it is a bit unfinished. There are 10 realms in total: Qi Refining Realm, then Foundation Establishment Realm, Golden Core Realm, Nascent Soul Realm, Divine Transformation Realm, Fusion Realm, Dharma Realm Realm, Tribulation Overcoming Realm, and finally Ascension Realm! But the Dharma Realm was not written until the end, and the subsequent plot of the New World ended before it even started. What a pity! The book is a good book, but the author's mentality is not very good. The toxic comments from readers generally fall into three categories: one is hired by other writers to criticize you; the other is those readers who do not agree with the way you write; the third is those who criticize you because your writing is not good enough. In these three categories, writers are hired to mess with you. You can tell by reading the comments which ones are here to mess with your mentality. If you can't survive this, I suggest you change your job. The second type is that readers don't agree with your writing in this way or that. After all, if you are the originator of the book category, no matter how innovative or imitative you are, all the novels written after you will not be what readers want. Everyone has their own ideas after reading a novel, but what they think and say does not affect how you write. After all, everyone defines cultivation novels differently! The third category is that it is actually a good thing for readers to write vicious reviews for you, because those who can write like this have carefully read your novels and point out where your writing is not good. In other words, I think you should thank the other person for pointing out your shortcomings. Because for readers who are obsessed with novels, they have read at least hundreds or thousands of novels. Although they are not the material to write novels, it is easy to find the advantages and disadvantages of a novel. If they say your writing is not good, just improve it in the future. What's the point? Finally, the worst thing you can do as a writer is not to have a eunuch. You can forgive me for discontinuing the novel. If you read the novel "The Eunuch", I probably won't read your novels in the future unless you change your pen name. No matter how poorly written it is, you still have to finish it! If you feel that you are not capable enough, don't set your training level so high at the beginning! In addition, the techniques of immortality are very imperfect! In the beginning of the novel, the skills are all top-notch, but the skills given in the later sign-in are quite perfunctory in your own opinion. The titles of martial arts novels are also used in the fairy tale genre, making them nondescript. In addition, when writing novels about cultivating immortals, they usually have 1,000 chapters. After all, you have to become immortals. If you only write about things that don't ascend, you don't have to write about martial arts or urban martial arts with supernatural powers. Better work hard, there are fewer and fewer good novels nowadays...

You are trying to make up the word count for this book, are you so good at it?