Mixed Martial Arts: Others Practice Martial Arts While I Cultivate Immortality

The introduction of the current novel is very awesome, with golden fingers, and there are various restrictions on the actual operation. People come here to read exciting stories, not depressive stories.

Self-created (modified) idioms in web articles: Blessing comes to the heart (blessing comes to the soul), Quietly (quietly), Unable to comment (non-committal), Learn from the past and learn from the past (a teacher who never forgets the past + learn from the past)

The plot setting is okay, but the realm strength is too confusing. The night demon can beat the ninth grade, the gang disciples can beat the night demon, and the protagonist beats the gang leader. In the end, the protagonist is only the third grade, and he can only compete with the fourth grade, sixth grade, and fourth grade. The more he practices, the weaker he gets.

What I wrote in the front is simple, but in the back I wrote it with force, like a hammer.

It's said to be martial arts, but when you come in and see some pollutants and monsters, you're totally wrong.

The writing was a little good at the beginning, and it felt like the plot was solid and engaging. Although the subject matter was a bit offbeat, it would have been nice to have replaced the pollution demon power with something else. The main thing is that you gave me the Painting Skin Technique out of the box, and then generated the Painted Skin Magic Technique. Now you are so awesome, you have completely changed your style. How good is it to write steadily if you want to start the game steadily? From here I can't watch it anymore. It's the same as a post-apocalyptic theme I've watched. It starts off well, but then I don't know what to think. I just talk about the bullshit and it doesn't matter if it's true or not. The more I look at the back, the more I feel that there is something wrong with the person or the mind. It's incomprehensible what kind of person can write this kind of theme. Forget it, I've read at least 93 chapters. That's it.

1. Earlier, the student who was learning Aoki Kung killed two night monsters at random. The protagonist practiced it to the point where he could no longer improve and could not kill even a single night monster. 2. In order to prevent the male protagonist from leveling up too quickly and losing experience points. He was originally a novice Shuangwen, but he still insisted on wearing layers of clothes to show off. 3. The protagonist's strength is erratic. One moment he feels that he can beat this, and the next moment he is unable to beat him and dares not to fight. Then suddenly he can beat people several times stronger than before. 4. It doesn't feel very smooth when I read it, and I keep emphasizing that in this world, I don't ask others to do anything, and then blah blah blah some nonsense. Then suddenly he said that the world's values ​​​​are distorted and so on. So you will find that the protagonist's position is very strange. Sometimes he just ignores bad things, and when others do bad things, it is the protagonist's excuse for them. It can be said to be the ultimate double standard.

It can be seen that the author is a fan of Get Out. Many plots are borrowed from several of his books. Even the fan comments and complaints outside the book are included. In fact, it is nothing. Some places are quite interesting and the writing is good, especially the world view. The transformation is particularly good, giving people a sense of weirdness and terrifying horror, which is not found in Gunmei's novels. Gunmei prefers to describe the weirdness of the protagonist rather than the world view. If you continue writing like this, you will find your own way, but! ! The point is but! ! But later on, you are still learning from his plot! Especially the daughter country part, it's almost a copy of his new book! And this plot has no meaning at all in your book. Go away and write this plot. It is not very exciting and very boring. I don't know why you copied this section. It is a big failure. After writing it, I started to have a dream again, go in to experience a new life, and started to use the creativity of the Jidao Demon. The parallel world of the Jidao Demon is actually very boring. I abandoned the article in that section, but you, such a good person, started copying that section again! It's not like you don't have writing skills, so why do you keep holding on to plots that you can't let go of? How many good books start by borrowing from great masters, and then find their own way later on? Oh my god, you were getting better and better as you wrote, but I got caught up in it, and then I copied the plot of "Go away!" And they were all very boring jokes! The weird atmosphere you set up is gone. It still lacks the stability and depth of getting away from the protagonist, turning the protagonist into a brainless reckless man. Stop changing the plot, and completely get rid of the influence of Gun Girl. If you can continue to maintain the weird feeling of changing the world view, your book will definitely be better! Alas, I am also angry with him.

What is it about? Others practice martial arts while I cultivate immortality. Is the title of the book written backwards? Also, martial arts is not martial arts, immortality is not immortality, internal strength is not internal strength, and immortality is not immortality. The whole thing is just a messy novel mixed together, but the protagonist cannot be clearly written. The protagonist practices martial arts, but it's just a high level. There is no way to become an immortal even though he changes, it's just a high level of martial arts.

After reading Chapter 80, I can only say what does it have to do with the title of the book? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head