The Starting Point is the Old Monster Yuanshen

Don't you have your own outline? A bunch of stitches, what you wrote is about crossing the flow, and you are stitching together things in the prehistoric flow, which makes people confused. I picked out what I could use and then made my own works, which was a bit messy to be honest. There are a bunch of indescribable feelings. I don't know if the feeling of heaven is from the ancient world or something else. It's like a modified version of the devil plus another world plus my own thoughts. It's an indescribable feeling, but it's not a good feeling, so I'll give you one star.

The whole thing feels nondescript, and it's hard to write something imitative. Can't you just write it in vernacular? If you have to make it look different, if you don't have writing skills, just do something serious. The second thing is that the protagonist is not highlighted and the protagonist is written as a passerby. You are the only time I have read a novel in so many years. Bah bah bah, a lot of them are written about random thoughts, there is no plot, no writing style, and they are not written about characters or scenery, just to make up for the number of words. If it really doesn't work, isn't screwing in the factory better than this?

Come on, your writing is pretty good. I hope your writing will get better and better.

It's a bit like the style of The Illustrated Book of Destruction, and the protagonist also looks a bit like Shi Xuan

The intention of this novel is quite high, the skills and so on are okay, and the level of Yuanshen is also good. The previous one is not obvious, but the writing is a bit poor, and there is a little ink stain. It is Yuanshen at the beginning, and the previous experience in the world is not seen. I suggest that after you finish writing this book, you write a classical novel like this, which can organize and detail your basic knowledge. Don't write other novels. After you finish writing this novel, read it yourself and see where you are wrong! For example, what kind of magic weapon and training method, what kind of forbidden magic weapon to practice, what kind of exercise method to practice what soul, what kind of magical power you have, how to write with depth and humor, life insights, etc., Come on!

I can't say it's bad. I don't like the style. I always feel that the style of novels related to the ancient times is quite old. It's not particularly likable. The fights are righteous and high-spirited, and the rhetoric is one after another.

I've been looking for a book for a day, and this one is the most comfortable to read. It's a bit like Ke Qiyuan and a Mortal's Journey to Immortality. The pace of the book is relatively slow, and it describes some ordinary trivial things and scenes. It's a good read for those who are short of books.

After reading the first few chapters, I have no desire to continue reading.

I really can't stand it any longer. In the realm of Yuanshen, how can I still eat? Especially for ordinary cereals, forget about eating them. It is said that you are willing to go home to visit relatives before you finish. You have been a Yuanshen for more than 200 years. If you don't come back sooner or later, you will come back now. Moreover, when you don't go home and run out to stay in a hotel, you are also a talent. It is rubbish.

I'm really afraid of you, eunuch, with your update speed. . .