I Just Want to Torture You to Death, Don't Force Me to Beat You to Death

There are elements of the Immortality Path and Fruit, but it is not the Immortality Gou Daoliu. Although the writing is good, the comment section is not optimistic. I can only advise the author that there is something wrong with your positioning. Nowadays, some authors think that being stubborn does not mean being a coward, and then they create troubles for the protagonist in various ways. There are many reasons, such as not to give up love, not to be a tortoise, and to have clear ideas about grudges and grudges... In fact, this kind of casual novel does not have a fixed format. But what's the problem? The author must understand that what elements you use will determine the audience. Those who like to read Changsheng Liu just love to read Gou Daoliu. No matter how much truth you make or how perfect the logic is, readers are rushing to read Gou Daoliu. If what you write is not good, then they don't want to read it and the score will be lowered. The reason is that you are targeting the wrong audience. If you think the protagonist should have all kinds of troubles and then the plot will be exciting, don't use the element of Immortality Dao Fruit, because this element is currently tied to Gou Daoliu. For example, I read a novel about cultivating immortals before, and it was all about political struggle. To be honest, the political struggle was very well written and very close to reality, but the score was not high, and the comment section was full of scolds. Why? Because you are writing a novel about cultivating immortals, the readers you attract are all here to learn about cultivating immortals and are not interested in political struggles at all. The readers are all wrongly positioned. Can you get a high score? It's like taking an obscure literary film and showing it in a theater for children during the Chinese New Year. Can it get good reviews? Many authors like to make patches while writing the Immortality Stream, and then the protagonist wanders around. When readers give their opinions, they start to explain what does not mean being cowardly. To be honest, I almost vomited at this sentence. In fact, if it is inferior, readers will not accept it, because readers are not here to discuss right and wrong with you, but to see what they like. As for the plot, if you don't write Gou Daoliu, to be honest, there is no need to bring the Taoist Fruit of Immortality, just an ordinary Xianxia upgrade flow. If you write well, some people will read it. Otherwise, you will really be suspected of selling sheep over dogs. Even if your writing is good, the plot is reasonable, and the love and justice are true, but the readers are wrong, the score will not be very high.

Even the world of gods and demons with such a high upper limit in "Journey to the West" doesn't dare to play like this! The author has no common sense and no basic logic at all! I was hooked after reading the second chapter! Ask boxers and martial arts practitioners in modern society how much money and materials they consume every day! In a world with a higher force value, practicing martial arts and cultivating immortals will consume more resources! Unless you can be full by eating air, all kinds of precious medicinal materials mature every day!

The most disturbing thing in this book is that the author's data is so messy. It feels like it was written haphazardly without any careful calculation. The golden finger of the protagonist is still a data stream of how much power is increased every day. It is often inconsistent and the description does not match. It is really awkward to watch! For example, it is written that the protagonist did not break through the realm for more than two months and only gained 200 kilograms of strength. Later, he added that if he did not break through the realm, he could only gain a minimum of 4 kilograms of strength every day. Then the increase in strength in more than two months must be close to 300 kilograms, right? After practicing martial arts for nearly four years, the protagonist's strength is 2,800 kilograms, not to mention the substantial increase in strength every time he breaks through the realm. On average, he maintains an average of 4 kilograms per day. For more than four thousand days in four years, his strength must be close to 5,000 kilograms, right? Also, it was mentioned earlier that the small achievement of Niu Mojin can sense dark power and become a martial artist. The protagonist has Niu Mojin breaking through the fifth level and Niu Moquan has achieved a small success in breaking through as a martial artist. Then the protagonist's genius classmates have reached the sixth level of Niu Mojin and Niu Moquan must have surpassed Xiaocheng. They are indeed only half-step to the level of martial arts. And later on, a setting of the ninth level of martial arts was suddenly added, saying that the protagonist is now at the ninth level of martial arts, and it will take almost nine years to break through to the sixth level of martial arts and become a general. Then within a few chapters, the protagonist is told that half of the twelve meridians have been opened, and in a year or two he will be able to open them all and become a military commander. The setting of the ninth level of martial arts went from suddenly appearing to being eaten by the author in just a few chapters! This author is too obsessed with settings. The data and settings are written almost randomly. When reading, you can't ignore these problems without delving into the details. It's really awkward!

It is still a good work. As a prostitute for many years, this is the first time I spent money on your book, although it is not much. After reading books for so many years, it is rare to read the last part of the current books. Basically, I just read a different story at the beginning. Your book is generally pretty good, at least I can read it so far. There are some bad points but they are harmless. Let me make some suggestions. I have already set up the matryoshka doll once, and this book will jump or you will end. Either the new picture should have a new story line, which can be used to draw traction. The image of the second protagonist was okay in the early stage, but changed in the later stage. Just like you said, xinxing is very important in the later stages of cultivation. It doesn't mean it becomes stronger, it just changes. . The third early stage was well written mainly because of the profound characterization of the surrounding areas. In the later stage, the soy sauce was too soy sauce and only highlighted one protagonist, which is incompatible with the Hongda world view you wrote. The more grand the worldview is, the more three-dimensional each character should be. Just like those masterpieces, every character has readers who can remember him. For example, as a teacher for the country, you have portrayed a small role in the world, and you have forgotten the surrounding supporting characters. This is the focus of your portrayal. This is just a comment, I hope you write better and better, and I support you.

The protagonist's friends and the heroine are always taken on as apprentices by people of a higher level. It's always the same routine, and it's not interesting at all.

Rubbish, eunuch. There is nothing new in what I write, and I just keep repeating the same routine.

Three sentences that are inseparable from yellow, so disgusting, all yellow waste, fw

Just look at Chapter 31. A bow weighing 1,800 kilograms can shoot an arrow with a force of 20,000 kilograms. He is considered successful. He shot it on the head of the gang enemy Long Duo and stabbed half of his head. You can't say it's too far off. To popularize science, Barrett's kinetic energy is 18,000 joules, and the force level of 20,000 kilograms is 9,800,000 joules at a distance of 100 meters.

Can you read more about netizens' suggestions for new pictures? The world view has been restarted until now, which is okay, but I feel that it will be ineffective. After reaching the Heaven level, it will be a bit boring to go to higher levels. You can break the void and understand the law. How to write the combat power later? . A new story line is needed. Be more imaginative. When a new author comes in, you don't have to follow the classification routine, follow other people's rhythms, and write your own style. For example, the outside of the bubble is not a higher level of immortality, but a race, region or even concept. There are immortality forces. Are there mecha technology forces? Just like the homeland you traveled through is also a small bubble of technology forces? Magical forces? Genetic power? The geographical resources are different, and the development directions of each force are different?

After seeing the additional sects after changing the map, I can only say that just read the first 100 chapters. In the early days of this book, the starting point was to increase strength, and the writing was pretty good. However, it started to go downhill after offending the sect and fleeing. I could have written hundreds of chapters from various angles such as martial arts, power, strategy, etc., But ended up rushing through dozens of chapters. As for what I will watch later, it's okay for a quick look, but it's not attractive.