Asked About the World of Mortals

But I still have to give it one point. You can tell from the introduction that it's a harem stud novel.

Did you read the comments that it was the work of the leader of the harem party? Although I haven't read Ji Cha's other novels, this novel alone can be regarded as excellent even if it only has more than two hundred chapters. The current three female protagonists all have their own characteristics, and there is no repetition. They are either youthful and beautiful, peerless independent, or graceful. I hope the characters will not collapse. In addition, the portrayal of the supporting male characters is also very good. In the early stage, it even overshadowed the protagonist. For most harem readers, this will probably dissuade them... The ending of the first story "The Dragon Slayer Will Become a Dragon" is intriguing. In terms of setting and world view, it is rare to find a novel that breaks away from the routine of killing monsters and upgrading and has a bit of a "fairy" flavor. I hope it can be maintained and look forward to more stories.

When I step into the fireworks place of the world, I am the immortal. I used to think that only the level of realm and the understanding of Tao were the foundation for cultivating immortality. But I was wrong. The way of immortality is like the way of chivalry, and the disputes between sects and the art of external alchemy are not what they are after all. I didn't understand it before, but now I seem to understand it a little better. The road to immortality is long and long. It is not a heretic at first, but actually comes from the heart. To put it bluntly, cultivating immortals is actually Taoist thought in idealism. In fact, true cultivation of immortality has always been a local matter in China. It is just a way for us to constantly understand our own hearts. Those who forcibly become stronger through the so-called system are just fantasy and not immortality. This book is well written, and the protagonist has a normal IQ, but the most important thing is that he lives a decent life. Finally, let me write a short poem for you all. Please don't complain if it's not good. Thank you. Su Muzhe Bamboo rats and green-robed shepherds have to look back on their way to the world. The body does not move, but the inspiration arises. I have had a great dream for three years in the Spring and Autumn Period. Nowadays, people indulge in drunkenness and return to their souls, let alone say that the world is miserable.

I quite like the first volume of this book. It's a bit in-depth and at least it's a book that can be read with your brain. When I read more than 100 chapters, I gave up because the author's worldview was too weak (not against the author, in my eyes, more than 99% of novels have no worldview at all). I recently wanted to read Harem and picked it up again. I felt a little tired after reading more than 200 chapters, so I decided to give it a review. I read this novel quite seriously and wrote a book review. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The author's writing style is very good, and the character of the heroine is also relatively clear. 2. Compared with the entire online novel environment, the author's three views are relatively positive. At least it seemed quite comfortable to me (from the point of view of harem literature). 3. The combat effectiveness is relatively stable, and there is currently no trend of collapse. 4. The author's liberal arts skills are pretty good, and the nouns in the book seem to be relatively high-level. Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. The author has a good foundation in liberal arts, but he definitely knows nothing about sociology and does not recognize the contradictions in society. This directly leads to the intuitive feeling that the world of immortality he created is just a very ordinary bad street-style cultivation. This is also the reason why I gave up writing for the first time. 2. Since the author is not a science student, embarrassing settings and descriptions are inevitable in the article. This is a common problem in online novels. There should not be any requirements for the author, but the author starts to show off his knowledge around the 200th chapter without carefully checking the information. 3. It's still a matter of worldview. The world the author describes is a vast world that is countless times larger than the earth, and has a known development history that is tens of thousands of years longer than the people on the earth. So why can't we see any cultural diversity? This directly affects the amount of information in the entire book. No matter how many zeros are added after the number, it still feels like it is the size of a modern city and makes no sense to me.

First of all, I have to say that the author's writing style is very good. The protagonist is both worldly and fairy-like. The heroines also have their own strengths, but I think some heroines should be better treated as beauties (personal opinion) Secondly, the foreshadowing in the article is a little shallow. Tassel can actually be used as a big foreshadowing (for example, related to the protagonist's life experience) and the Emperor of Heaven has just come out. I believe many people will guess it right away. Such foreshadowing is almost useless. Also, the author's literary talents can be brought into full play. It feels like the recent chapters are all supported by the plot (it seems to be a bit bloody). Author, you can't lose the advantage of your writing.

Harem novels are novels with one man and many women (or one woman and many men) and are mainly about emotional lines. As the plot deepens step by step, the hero and heroine's feelings gradually heat up, and finally they fall in love with each other. Stallion literature The stallion mentioned there usually refers to a male creature that possesses a certain kind of special androgen that is in excess, causing several or more partners to compete with it to mate. Different from harem novels, novels with multiple female protagonists cannot be called stallion novels. There is also a male harem novel. The difference between stallion novels and harem novels is that each of the male protagonists and female protagonists in harem novels has relatively good emotional descriptions. But stallion novels are not. Stallion novels usually have no emotional description and are like a stallion that only knows how to mate. That's why they are called stallion novels.

The harem story is so beautiful, I was disgusted by it anyway! I don't understand how much those who like harem stories like women. I always think it's good to choose one person to end up with. Family affection can be deep or weak. When it comes to love, choosing one person is love, and choosing multiple people is lust. I think some people must say that this is fraternity, but don't you think that human feelings have different degrees of severity? It is said to be fraternity, but it is actually desire. Love is a multiple-choice question. You can only choose one. If it is too much, it is not love. It is lust or greed.

Great book! The shaping of the protagonist's character is perfect! Three correct views! The supporting characters are not just mentioned in passing, they are flesh and blood! The love affair with the princess seems to be poorly explained! But there is evidence to rely on! Whether it's love at first sight or a long-term relationship! Liking someone is always a thought, a matter of a moment! Combined with the age of the two people (the author emphasized age in the article, which chapter forgot that the protagonist is 16 and the princess is one year younger), I personally feel that love at this age is so simple! There is nothing illogical! Regarding Liusu in the stick, in her outlook on life, she has never met such a person in tens of thousands of years. It makes sense that the shock made her heart sway! After reading a hundred chapters, I still don't know what will happen next! Personally I think it looks better! By the way, the book that ranks first on many lists is called Futian or something! Looking at the views on love established by the male and female protagonists in it, it's really not as good as this book!

The reason for slowly warming up to this and that is, firstly, the sense of immersion, and secondly, the plot is attractive. Is there any here? Not to mention this and that, Perfect, Covering the Sky, The Great Master, etc., There are too many, fantasy, urban... I have seen them all. But I don't think this book is any good?

Coming from the starting point, I don't understand why some people... Why do they want to complain without thinking? Is it just because of the harem? If you don't like this genre, don't read it. Why do you complain that this book is not well written?