Zhu Xian: I Am the Master of Fenji Sword, and My Swordsmanship is Unparalleled

The previous author, Wen Qingbing, has always emphasized destiny, destiny and so on in the article. He writes it every few chapters. The poisonous points in those chapters are too frequent, which is not very good. But as long as the author doesn't commit literary youth later, it will be a good book. I hope he can restrain himself.

The protagonist is written like an old man, without any vitality at all. He clearly knew that Qi Hao, a centenary old man, wanted Tian Ling'er. Not only did he not stop him, but he allowed the pursuit. He also said that the massacre of Caomiao Village was destiny. He also persuaded Lin Jingyu to let go of his obsession, saying that he must let go if he wins the Qimai Martial Arts Competition! My whole family was massacred, but I was told that it was fate, and I was told to let go and not take revenge. Awesome, a god-level author!

Any subject where the protagonist is related to "destiny", whether it is about the protagonist obeying fate or about the protagonist fighting against fate, are all extremely poisonous! If you obey your fate, then the protagonist will say "Everything is fate, nothing is up to you" when encountering any unfortunate event (even if the protagonist does not say this, his actions will definitely show this meaning). Readers will be very disgusted with this practice of constantly talking about fate, because in the readers' eyes, this means that the protagonist himself is not good enough, but he blames everything on fate, which is obviously an escape! If you rebel against fate, it will be like fighting against the air, and the plot will be very boring. Because fate is an illusory existence, readers will not get any pleasure at all from watching the protagonist fight with this kind of thing. As for the practice of writing destiny directly into the conscious way of heaven, it is even more poisonous! Because everyone hates this feeling of being pressed over their head by the omnipresent and invincible heavenly law all the time. It is equivalent to a final boss who can only be defeated by the protagonist at the end and has been suppressing the protagonist with malice. Then the whole book must be full of depression from beginning to end. This is a very poisonous and abusive main story. So definitely don't write "destiny"!

There's nothing interesting about dressing up as Zhang Xiaofan. The plot is all over at a glance. At most, it's just a slight change in the plot. This book has Zhang Xiaofan as the protagonist. It's a failure. It's better to create a new character.

The harem is brainless... The brainless black ghost king... Acknowledges the thief as his father (Lin is willing to kneel down without revealing his general wisdom, and even persuades Lin Jingyu to let go of his hatred). In order to open the harem, he said that the Suzaku Holy Envoy does not belong to the Ghost King Sect... He also has a good impression of Li Xun, who stole his wife in the original novel...

It's quite good. I'm the author of Demonic Blood Stained in Blue Clouds. The beginning is much better than mine. I'll promote your book in my book circle.

Ask the author a question. I vaguely remember that the official Gu Jian Qi Tan commented on the decisive battle between Baili Tusu and Zhenren, saying that there was a gap between Baili Tusu's swordsmanship and Zhenren's, and that Baili Tusu would need to practice for a period of time before he could surpass Zhenren in swordsmanship. So I was just thinking, is Baili Tusu's talent so high that he can surpass Zhenren even without the Burning Silence Sword? Zhenren's talent can be said to be the ceiling of the human race. For a land god, does Baili Tusu's talent represent the upper limit of the human race's qualifications? So in this novel, Zhang Xiaofan also inherited Baili Tusu's qualifications, right? If Lu Xueqi's qualifications are 100 (Xiao Ding said it himself, although Lu's actual combat performance is hard to describe), then what is the qualification of Baili Tusu or Zhang Xiaofan now?

The protagonist of your novel is a virgin who still has a chastity arch. The biggest poisonous point is that even a female must be taken into the harem.

For the first time, an author has written a Zhu Xian fan that is both attractive and disgusting.

What a piece of shit. The character of the male protagonist is so outrageous. He didn't want to do this or that, but he did it in the end. He set up an archway as a bastard and became a holy mother.