Black Sand Sword Master

I saw it was about to be released, but I didn't see the protagonist practicing swordsmanship or training. The whole process was about technology and part-time work. Otherwise, he was a clique and a coward who didn't care about going out. I just want to ask, this book is about training. If you don't go out to practice, where will the combat experience come from? In a world where the powerful are already respected, you still don't increase your combat effectiveness and strength? All the stolen skills in that system are auxiliary skills. As a cultivator, please don't tell me that he only has auxiliary skills. There is no way he doesn't have spells, swordsmanship and the like!

I read a hundred chapters, and it said that I had practiced cultivation for less than twenty chapters, and I guess it was less than ten chapters. At the beginning, it said that I wanted to practice desperately, but finally entered the sect and was able to practice, but I ended up working somewhere! Of course, outer disciples need to do chores, but they can't do them all day long, right? Then we won't let people practice? And even though you can build the foundation, you still insist on suppressing it, and you still think that your practice will go backwards! What a genius idea! If you say you need to do this if you get some powerful inheritance, then I understand. The problem is that you just don't want to build the foundation, so you said it's dangerous to enter the inner gate! Then why do you practice? Why enter the sect? Go back and continue being a blacksmith! What kind of small team are you still working in the outer sect to get rich? I am also speechless! Let's talk about the system. You can steal the skills of the boss while working. This setting is good, but the author has used it to waste. Before entering the sect, what kind of forging and cooking did you invest in while working? This is normal. After all, not many people are cultivators! The problem is that since you have entered the sect, since you have not stolen any skills or swordsmanship, you have not practiced at all! I'm convinced too! What do you think, author? Moreover, after entering a sect, isn't the biggest boss the sect leader? Since you can still say that you can't steal without a boss, you need to find a department with a boss to steal, and then go pick up excrement! Isn't it putting the cart before the horse? I don't understand! Even if you are right, the boss of the monster breeding department must also be a cultivator! At least I was still the leader of the front before, so I had some martial arts, swordsmanship, and spells. But what did you steal? Embroidery? I can't stand it anymore!

Although I haven't read all of it and I read it very sloppily, but, this novel is really curious! From what I have seen, I haven't seen many protagonists practicing. They keep working on skills, and then they have no results in training and then develop a lot of skills. Finally, they complain that they are not strong enough and have a lot of skills but cannot use them, dare not use them, and have many worries after using them. From a little peek, I think the whole book must have the same style! Aren't you afraid that if someone is not careful, the protagonist's bones will be rubbed into ashes? The human heart is sinister, not just the villain on paper, but also some unrelated people will mess with you. Because of the conflict of interest, you may not even think about it. How can the protagonist think it through? How can the protagonist dare to rely on such huge technology to seek benefits when he can't think through it? Aren't you afraid of dying on the ground inexplicably when? Take a look at the book "The Prehistoric Investigator". The protagonist just invented the first piece of paper in the world (that piece of paper became a treasure of merit), and was directly killed by an inexplicable person. The reason was to kill people and buy goods. Although this is unreasonable, it is acceptable. But in this book, the protagonist invents all kinds of technologies, but his own strength is not enough. I absolutely want to say this, the blessings of the protagonist are really good blessings! The author might as well explain it by the way when writing the explanation of the novel: the protagonist's blessing system is really a good blessing system that beats workers! You don't have to worry at all, you don't have to worry about others messing with you, it's really great. I don't even dare to write like this! ! I really feel sorry for this book, that's why I say so much. If I were a troll, would I have so many emotions and write so much "nonsense"? Nowadays, when reading Xianxia novels, who doesn't read Cultivation? People who write novels (authors), who doesn't know that the core concept of writing novels now is upgrading? Do you think any novels nowadays are not written around the concept of upgrading (the vast majority)? It has long been no longer the kind of novel that takes plot as the core concept of ancient novels. If you write like this, you are not passionate at all; if you write like this, it is not traditional at all! Anyone who wants to write like this must be as awesome as Master Gu. Master Gu dares to write like this, but no one else dares to write like this! ! If the author has read Master Gu, you should have imagined in this book that novels about novels are not that simple. (Of course, your novel is not as curious as Master Gu. It's just that the protagonist seems a bit naive and sometimes has conflicts of temper. For example, the armor for warriors, the technology is directly cooperated with Jianlu here, and the reason is just because he saw the personal problems of the master Jianlu!). I think the setting of this fairy tale novel is very good, very good, but it is completely opposite to the current fairy tale novels. Most of the current Xianxia novels are about the main character practicing and becoming very good, and then using his own technology to transform the world. But this novel goes in the opposite direction. It does not have enough strength to come up with so many high-end technologies (the source of technology can be blamed on the system). I really can't imagine the audience who likes to read such a book, and I really can't imagine whether the author loves to generate electricity, or is it to make money? To be honest, if you really just want to use love to generate electricity, then it doesn't matter. Just delete my post and pretend I didn't say anything. If you want to make money, please first think about which of the current Xianxia novels is the same as yours. It's not that I'm being harsh, it's just how it is! Readers are not reading novels to see the main character being aggrieved all the time (although I think this novel can be used as a base). This is not called reading a novel, this is called looking for torture! ! Good advice may offend your ears, please think carefully! ! !

I've been doing ink for a long time, but I'm still a newbie. What should I do with the system?

But I can't figure it out, it's not enough to develop properly. There is never a normal part-time job. I am at the bottom, but I am always exposed to things at the top. He is indeed the protagonist.

I can still read the book But your writing is too watery The plot is too bland The protagonist emmm personally feels so useless There are no other poisonous points.

The protagonist's world cultivation level strength is a bit chaotic and a bit poisonous

How many years of old tricks have been used, and this good subject has been blinded in vain

Brother, your writing and title have become flat. What are you writing?

The author has something, he should be someone who has read Zhouyi, not someone who has just started.