Skaven's Bad Lord

Author, what can I say about the book you wrote? It's pretty good for a newbie. But for me personally, your protagonist is not very well written. The protagonist has an obvious false image. Although you clearly wrote that the protagonist is not a good person, the protagonist's all-out evil towards foreign races and the compassion and kindness of his own race. The attitudes and abilities of the two are extremely contrasting. It reminds me of the Virgin Bitch. Whenever the protagonist behaves harshly towards other humans and shows a little bit of the majesty of a superior, I would not think so. Of course, this is just what I say, so you don't have to worry about it (it is recommended that the plot include a small human villain, who will then be brutally killed by the protagonist) Moreover, the name of the protagonist is also poorly chosen. As a book reader, every time I hear the name of the protagonist, I feel an inexplicable feeling of disgust in my heart. I don't have much else to say, just say something, so be it! Well written, keep going!

Your name stands out to me as soon as I see it. I loved the Warhammer world when I was in junior high school, and also the war world of the Eastern World in the original Total War 1, and then the high elves, dark elves, lizardmen, skeletons, and rat men in Total War 2, and then the Eastern and Western worlds of Total War. Combined, and then Total War 3 came out. To be honest, although I have never played it, I really like games like Total War. I watched it from those host anchors, but now that I am in college, I can't watch it anymore and I don't have time to watch it. The author, please come on ＾0＾~ Come on

Dancing on the captain's white sheets

Ah, this, it won't end like this, right?

Author, are you really writing? Don't end it suddenly! 😝

The first part is fine, but the second 50% is written about detailed settings, techniques or training methods. The rest is a little bit of daily life, and I go to fight after training. Development is slow, and plot advancement is even slower. Moreover, the daily roles are not distinct. They are all templates for subordinates. In daily life, the protagonist basically tells you what to do, and then the subordinates work. At most, if there are some technical problems, they will be solved with a long explanation. Not even an interesting soul. . . (The protagonist is not prominent enough either) Fighting should be fun, but it's not fun at all. . Maybe it's because the protagonist was calm throughout the whole process, without any enthusiasm, and he didn't directly crush and kill. The foreshadowing and description of the antagonistic characters are also unclear. . I like to write about action, but there is no corresponding psychology to guide readers to resonate. 1 Killed 2, and 3 was a good friend of 2. When he saw 2's body, he cried in pain and wanted revenge. 3. Looking at the body of 2 in front of him, sadness and anger impacted his reason, and there was more than just hatred in his heart. Why does the author like to use the former way of writing😕😕😕

By the way, isn't Warpstone green?

Send it a little, it's bad

I asked for leave and I just finished the whole book. I really know how to play.

Horned Rat, yesyes Human stuff, diedie (have a reason)