In the Middle Ages, People Drew Cards to Be Promoted to Nobility

Until the two-dimensional woman system of drawing cards came out, the sense of dissonance was suddenly full

Some are too strong, some are too weak. The protagonist's character is a bit like a virgin. She always wants to change the world. The author wants to combine history, but also adds fantasy. It is always a bit confusing to read. There is no hierarchy. Anyway, the characters in it are either very strong or very weak. Three or four people wearing armor can win, but there are not thirty or forty people wearing armor. This is a bit outrageous. Anyway, in general, it looks quite confusing, and there is no clear dividing line between the strong and the weak. I hope the author can improve or modify the content. The resume does not meet the requirements. Since I haven't written much yet and haven't put it on the shelves yet, I need to change the content and general framework.

Author, the summoning character you wrote was a failure. You summoned a young lady at the beginning. Few people who read this type of novel like this kind of chaos. When writing Western fantasy, write it well and don't bring in some useless elements. It will be a bit annoying to read.

Traveling through a different world and facing a group of foreigners, the protagonist is full of internationalist savior spirit. I really can't understand it.

At the beginning, it was written that the attributes of ordinary people are around 5. When the six-star Prajna reaches the first level, all attributes are above 15. Later, after upgrading, in Chapter 69, I went to fight an ordinary assassin three times without killing him. Not to mention the extraordinary power of the setting.

The system directly summons soldiers, and the general is a woman. The character of the key protagonist is very disgusting. One moment he wants to save the world, the next moment he is presented with the opportunity to inherit the earldom and the right to inherit the throne and refuses it directly, and then he has to fight on his own. It is really disgusting. China's thousands of years of historical education have come up with such a joke. I mean, you can choose anyone else. If you have this opportunity, you are willing to meet your adoptive mother directly. You have a system, and then there is a wealthy earldom. If there is any problem that you can't solve, you have to fight with nothing. I guess the author is too full and insists on rubbing the reader's IQ on the ground.

The front is pretty good, but the back is just a mess. I keep using the same routine over and over again, but I don't know how to change it.

Let me give you a suggestion, end the copy as soon as possible. Write less copies and write down the process from princes to kings to overlords with peace of mind. You are a force, and your focus is on the development of the force. Now you are writing so many chapters just for the hero's job change, isn't it putting the cart before the horse? What's wrong, a hero can defeat Egypt and the Middle East after his second turn? What's the point of needing power and soldiers? Anyway, I personally will not subscribe to copy chapters.

Today's thinking is not suitable for any era or world. Our thinking is like a ridiculous bug. It is even more ridiculous that you insist on forcing it into that world. Another point is that I think the characters given out initially are not necessary to cultivate. They are all garbage anyway. They are always more valuable and given for free. In fact, they are all garbage.

Get well soon, author. Don't send it. This is one of the few good medieval novels.