Warhammer: Primarch Zero

How should I put it? It's a bit too idealistic and loses the characteristics of Warhammer. I feel like the four gods in the book are out of character. Warhammer never says that the emperor can defeat the four gods without becoming a god. The reason why humans rule with high pressure in Warhammer is because they can't beat them, can't hold them back, and survive in despair. If you have the qualifications of a new god, even if you have the protection of the emperor, you are more likely to die during your growth period, because the old emperor is forced to sit on the toilet. This is the essence of the emperor, which is similar to the dark godhead of war and conquest. The four gods want him to become a god.

First of all, I think the writing is pretty good, and it fits my idea of ​​seeing the Primarchs working together. However, I think the highlight of this book is the redemption of the Primarch and the Imperium. The author has written too much about space pressure. I admit that your concept of subspace is quite good, but there is no need for you to write so many pages and consume your enthusiasm for reading. It is too procrastinating❗ Also, as a grand space opera, you don't need to worry about too many details. What you wrote is too detailed. There are more grand scenes. The stage is huge, so there is no need to write too detailed. Pace it faster❗ Finally, the title should highlight the original body❗I just came to see the interaction between the original body and the protagonist. With your title, I have no desire to read it. Write more about the original body. The basic title should have the original body. Otherwise, if you write so much, I won't even know if there is a primordial body, which will seriously consume your enthusiasm for reading. Write more about the primordial body! ! ! I am a member and spend money to read books. My writing is better❗

It costs 80 yuan to read the whole book??? It's too expensive.

Someone come quickly~

How about this one, Tencent Yuanbao is generated.

Old man, let's have some fights. There were some fighting scenes when I was looking for the original body. Now you don't act at all. Did I deposit the coins to see you chatting?

The writing is quite good, but I personally feel it is a bit crooked. Warhammer is a miserable world. If you go in and become an ordinary person, what you write is nothing more than struggling to survive and becoming a primarch. The main thing is war. And Warhammer has such a long time span, and you wrote it so hard. I don't know when I will see classic scenes such as the Horus Heresy, Abaddon's 13th Expedition, and the Attack and Defense of Ultramar. And if the protagonist's prophetic vision has changed all these, is it still Warhammer?

Raising a daughter is like eating a piece of shit

Can this book only be read with coins? Can VIPs not be able to read it?

Why was he suddenly given a daughter? A bit strange