
Travel Through Mortals to Cultivate Immortality in a Low-key Manner
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He traveled through time and became Han Li's second brother. With such a fourth brother, it's better to keep a low profile. Fortunately, he brought an awesome golden finger. Keep a low profile, don't be obscene. New book [Cultivation of Immortality through Time: The Strongest Guardian Immortal] Please give me your support
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Official(91)Scraped 11d ago
Bad review, Chapter 146 New vest
Bad review, pig's feet are the last to cause trouble, and they are called low-key. He was supposed to be a formation mage in Tiannan, but he was assassinated. He came to Chaotic Star Sea to show that his formation strength is still so high. Tiao, I wonder if once bitten by a snake, I will be afraid of the well rope for ten years. How can I be so low-key? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔Is the author a lost character? ? ? ?
What are you writing about?
The protagonist has a system. Also selfish. What are you writing about?
So damn poisonous
I was deceived by the title of the book. All kinds of traps. The protagonist is simply an idiot.
Rubbish novel, it makes people's blood pressure almost go up.
The author changed a lot of things
The Qi training method was originally written by the author of Thirteen Levels and changed it to Nine Levels of Perfection. I saw 20 pictures, and there were quite a lot of changes. The Heaven Palm Vase was changed to be able to identify its owner by dripping blood, and then forcibly improve the host's cultivation level, and then it can also be collected in the Dantian. The section of Changchun Kung given by Doctor Mo in the early stage was originally given layer by layer. Then the author wrote that after Doctor Mo directly gave the first six levels to Han Li, the protagonist also obtained the complete nine levels of Changchun Gong from Doctor Mo (the author changed the number of levels of the exercise). Then there are some complaints and more embarrassing psychological activities. There is also the design of certain characters. For example, Zhang Tie, a person who originally had spiritual roots, was written as having no spiritual roots. And Dr. Mo died about two or three years earlier. There are quite a lot of things that have been changed. The timing of the novel is particularly empty. It seems that the author wanted to write the novel "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" into another story according to his own ideas, but he changed many of the original settings and eliminated them. I hope the author can write my words well later. I plan to read them one by one. Just take a look at the next chapter. Come on, author
I would like to make a suggestion. Pig's trotter's character and the writing style of this article are really not suitable for the serious mortal world of intrigues and intrigues. On the contrary, it is more suitable for some entertainment-oriented world. (For example, my senior brother is too stable, the end of the world, etc.)
I hope the author will take a look at my suggestions
It's pretty good. Also, as a time traveler, you should compete with Han Li for the heroine and supporting actress. Otherwise, being a time traveler would be too much. Also, shouldn't the time traveler have to be at a higher level than Han Li to make it look like time travel?
I don't know how those people with a certain social status can live in the world of cultivating immortals. I only know that ordinary people like me have two pursuits when traveling to the past. Immortality and marrying more wives. If you have the qualifications to cultivate immortality, you should work hard to cultivate immortality. If you can, try to marry three or four wives. The kind of god who can block the killing of gods. Anyway, I can't understand those protagonists who, after passing through, only want to marry one person, or don't want one at all, and push them away.
Han Zhu also has a golden finger. This golden finger is very powerful. You can hang up and learn the exercises. Isn't this the same as lying down? Han Zhu's stinking look makes me want to laugh. Maybe it's because you are here.
Read the original work
The writing is good, but I feel like I haven't read the original work. Han Laomo is just playing with time, and many things explained in the original work, you just changed it here. The original work party will express displeasure. After all, it is fan fiction, so respect the original work!
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Official(91)Scraped 11d ago
Bad review, Chapter 146 New vest
Bad review, pig's feet are the last to cause trouble, and they are called low-key. He was supposed to be a formation mage in Tiannan, but he was assassinated. He came to Chaotic Star Sea to show that his formation strength is still so high. Tiao, I wonder if once bitten by a snake, I will be afraid of the well rope for ten years. How can I be so low-key? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔Is the author a lost character? ? ? ?
What are you writing about?
The protagonist has a system. Also selfish. What are you writing about?
So damn poisonous
I was deceived by the title of the book. All kinds of traps. The protagonist is simply an idiot.
Rubbish novel, it makes people's blood pressure almost go up.
The author changed a lot of things
The Qi training method was originally written by the author of Thirteen Levels and changed it to Nine Levels of Perfection. I saw 20 pictures, and there were quite a lot of changes. The Heaven Palm Vase was changed to be able to identify its owner by dripping blood, and then forcibly improve the host's cultivation level, and then it can also be collected in the Dantian. The section of Changchun Kung given by Doctor Mo in the early stage was originally given layer by layer. Then the author wrote that after Doctor Mo directly gave the first six levels to Han Li, the protagonist also obtained the complete nine levels of Changchun Gong from Doctor Mo (the author changed the number of levels of the exercise). Then there are some complaints and more embarrassing psychological activities. There is also the design of certain characters. For example, Zhang Tie, a person who originally had spiritual roots, was written as having no spiritual roots. And Dr. Mo died about two or three years earlier. There are quite a lot of things that have been changed. The timing of the novel is particularly empty. It seems that the author wanted to write the novel "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality" into another story according to his own ideas, but he changed many of the original settings and eliminated them. I hope the author can write my words well later. I plan to read them one by one. Just take a look at the next chapter. Come on, author
I would like to make a suggestion. Pig's trotter's character and the writing style of this article are really not suitable for the serious mortal world of intrigues and intrigues. On the contrary, it is more suitable for some entertainment-oriented world. (For example, my senior brother is too stable, the end of the world, etc.)
I hope the author will take a look at my suggestions
It's pretty good. Also, as a time traveler, you should compete with Han Li for the heroine and supporting actress. Otherwise, being a time traveler would be too much. Also, shouldn't the time traveler have to be at a higher level than Han Li to make it look like time travel?
I don't know how those people with a certain social status can live in the world of cultivating immortals. I only know that ordinary people like me have two pursuits when traveling to the past. Immortality and marrying more wives. If you have the qualifications to cultivate immortality, you should work hard to cultivate immortality. If you can, try to marry three or four wives. The kind of god who can block the killing of gods. Anyway, I can't understand those protagonists who, after passing through, only want to marry one person, or don't want one at all, and push them away.
Han Zhu also has a golden finger. This golden finger is very powerful. You can hang up and learn the exercises. Isn't this the same as lying down? Han Zhu's stinking look makes me want to laugh. Maybe it's because you are here.
Read the original work
The writing is good, but I feel like I haven't read the original work. Han Laomo is just playing with time, and many things explained in the original work, you just changed it here. The original work party will express displeasure. After all, it is fan fiction, so respect the original work!









