
Mortal: Poor Taoist Han Yun, Fellow Taoist, Please Stay
by Panda Who Loves To Eat Melons
About This Novel
My name is Han Yun, a reincarnation who failed in his mission and was reborn into the world of mortals cultivating immortals due to accident. This time, I want to live for myself and see the peak scenery.
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Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
Can't you just write about time travel? If you don't write about the main god's space, people will just read it and they won't want to read it.
I started commenting and then deleted it. Recomment Poisonous Point 1: The first 15 chapters are really poisonous and embarrassing. I don't know the plot of the fanfic yet. Poison Point 2: The girl named Mo is really poisonous, and the protagonist is not controlled by the poison. When Mr. Mo harms you, you don't owe him anything anymore. You have to go to the house and mind your own business. Poison Point 3, the two of them were equipped with awesome equipment, and they fought for a long time to kill a man named Lu. The Holy Mother's Heart in the Bloody Forbidden Land was foreshadowed. Poisonous point 4: He fell in love with a woman named Chen and had a child. He was even more poisonous. Finally, I want to say that the protagonist has experienced so many tribulations in the world, and his character has gone crazy. . . Even more so,,,
This book is the most poisonous of all mortal literature
I have a telescope and a gun. I heard about Mo Juren, Qixuanmen, Han Li, and Zhang Tie. I still don't know what the world is like. The authors are all talented.
Laughing, the protagonist really has a brain💩, the main god's leeks are not known to him, but he still enjoys them
Oh, it's really heartbreaking🙀. I saw that your writing skills are good and I follow you every day. Why did you package up Bai Yueguang and Nangong Wan and send them out today? She has a single heroine... If you don't fight over the pot and bowl, you will probably dissuade a lot of people. Although you don't care, I will never see you again🤠
If your writing style is too poor, don't write emotional dramas. If you don't have much experience, don't strive for perfection in everything.
What is the protagonist's golden finger?
Is the protagonist dead? Don't be that slow-burning cultivator. It's very uncomfortable to watch.
Should Nangong Wan fight for it, or should he just say that he doesn't care?
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Official(28)Scraped 2d ago
Can't you just write about time travel? If you don't write about the main god's space, people will just read it and they won't want to read it.
I started commenting and then deleted it. Recomment Poisonous Point 1: The first 15 chapters are really poisonous and embarrassing. I don't know the plot of the fanfic yet. Poison Point 2: The girl named Mo is really poisonous, and the protagonist is not controlled by the poison. When Mr. Mo harms you, you don't owe him anything anymore. You have to go to the house and mind your own business. Poison Point 3, the two of them were equipped with awesome equipment, and they fought for a long time to kill a man named Lu. The Holy Mother's Heart in the Bloody Forbidden Land was foreshadowed. Poisonous point 4: He fell in love with a woman named Chen and had a child. He was even more poisonous. Finally, I want to say that the protagonist has experienced so many tribulations in the world, and his character has gone crazy. . . Even more so,,,
This book is the most poisonous of all mortal literature
I have a telescope and a gun. I heard about Mo Juren, Qixuanmen, Han Li, and Zhang Tie. I still don't know what the world is like. The authors are all talented.
Laughing, the protagonist really has a brain💩, the main god's leeks are not known to him, but he still enjoys them
Oh, it's really heartbreaking🙀. I saw that your writing skills are good and I follow you every day. Why did you package up Bai Yueguang and Nangong Wan and send them out today? She has a single heroine... If you don't fight over the pot and bowl, you will probably dissuade a lot of people. Although you don't care, I will never see you again🤠
If your writing style is too poor, don't write emotional dramas. If you don't have much experience, don't strive for perfection in everything.
What is the protagonist's golden finger?
Is the protagonist dead? Don't be that slow-burning cultivator. It's very uncomfortable to watch.
Should Nangong Wan fight for it, or should he just say that he doesn't care?










