My Father Was Definitely Taken Away from Him

I've only seen the villains being outwitted. This book, Good Guys, is about giving the protagonists out of their wits. I'm just saying that the author of Good Guys is amazing👍👍

Eunuch Wen, I was deceived by Douyin, it's so confusing

It was okay at first, but then it started to stretch my hips more and more. Doesn't the author have any confidence at all? The inspiration setting is very attractive, and the starting layout is reasonable. Later, there was a section where the protagonist went to someone else's house to read a book, which was particularly mindless. Be more confident, write well, and if you accumulate slowly, you may even get out of the circle. Such fast food is really a waste of good inspiration. What a waste.

You can watch it without thinking, and your IQ is forced to collapse for the sake of the plot. After watching it for a long time, I couldn't bear it anymore. Forcibly destroying the basic logic in order to write a plot will not attract old bookworms, and new readers will feel that something is wrong after reading it for a while. Ignore the brain, what is attractive is only the setting, not the plot and writing. The plot is just the martial arts emotions of the 1990s and 2000s, separation, misunderstanding and oppression, and then working hard to become stronger, interspersed with the innocent and sinister characters of the two protagonists, pretending to be cool and slapped in the face. The author wants to intersperse the whole text with emotional lines. The protagonist is responsible for low-key pretense and being slapped in the face, and his son is responsible for the dark side of the relationship. The lovers are divided, strictly humiliated and then work hard. As a result, the author's writing style is too poor, and he can't grasp it well, can't connect to the line, can't comprehend it, is too hasty, and has no brain. As a result, people feel like an uncle looking at his phone on the subway.

I feel like the foreshadowing of the blood leaf is too far-fetched. Has the subsequent outline been rearranged? This kind of plot feels quite clichéd, and it feels like it is forcibly creating conflicts. Some of the temporary twists and turns on Zhou Jun's side still feel reasonable, but Lu Qingqi's side feels a bit forced. I don't know if the author planned it from the beginning, but in fact, I felt that there was too little foreshadowing, and the plot could not be connected at all later. The first point is that the starting point of the young protagonist is too low, which makes this reversal too far-fetched. Second, the foreshadowing of the Immortality Religion is too huge, which may lead to a difficult ending in the follow-up. Regarding the first point, in fact, the beginning was not well written, some things were not laid out properly, and it passed in a muddle. Later, some things were re-added, resulting in gaps in some details, which could not be continued, and could only be added later. Regarding the second point, whether it is Zhou Jun or Lu Qingqing, the shortcomings of the protagonist are the same, that is, the starting point is set too low, and the starting point of the Immortality Cult is too high. This makes subsequent rebounds difficult to write about. In the future, whether Lu Qingqi or Zhou Jun want to get out of control, there is no other way except to forcefully increase the strength and value. If it were the protagonist who took action again, this would be too redundant. As I write this, I suddenly feel that the plot is probably going to go like this. If this is the case, it cannot hide that this move is a bad move.

The setting is okay, but the logic doesn't make sense, and the dialogue is like a child pretending to be an adult, which is really unbearable.

It's really good-looking, invincible, not bad, not bad

It's a very good book, but for some reasons, it ended a bit hastily, but the outline is out and it's worth reading.

The front part is good, but the back part is full of shit. Recognition of the Master and Bloodshed is okay. Does the author know what refining is? Is it refining just by washing it with drops? The emotional line of the junior is also not well written.

The writing style is really average and there are a lot of poisonous points. I can ignore the rest. But just to write a cheesy suit, I was forced to go to someone's house with an offering order, but no one greeted me. No one else could enter the front door. Even after I entered, I was still considered to have sneaked in. It's poisonous, okay?