Ordinary People: Start Cultivating Immortality by Deducing All Methods

Hanjia Village is stupid. The village is surrounded by 6.25 Million square meters. If you don't plant trees or farm, you have to walk five kilometers to cut firewood. Orion has to walk ten kilometers into the mountains? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? It means that this village is so stupid that they have nothing to do when they are full, and they have learned to walk, right? Twenty kilometers round trip for hunting? ? ? ? ? ? What kind of high-grade pig feed does your family eat? It provides so much energy. Many people who train for marathons now are not as strong as you. You still have to resist firewood and prey, ten kilometers a day? ? ?

It's getting more and more outrageous. It was okay before, but the more I look at it, the more stupid I am.

Even if you are an awesome boss, when I time-travel to when you are weak, then I will be the boss and I will be the protagonist. Even if you time-travel in a future life, don't I have a systematic protagonist?

Golden Finger is very powerful, and the magic weapons created by the deduced techniques are very powerful, but that's the only point of interest. The plot is weak, and the author only relies on creating crises to promote the development of the plot. He can't wait for the protagonist to step into a trap every time he goes to the toilet. The characterization is also not very strong. The protagonist is afraid to abandon the Green Snake Sword because of its devouring ability. Obviously, the protagonist's golden finger can completely solve the problem of backlash. It gives people a feeling of cowardice and strong on the outside but weak on the inside. And the protagonist just wants the whole world to know that he has five spiritual roots, and he openly tells everyone that he has a secret. The author is also very blunt about the main character Gathering Heart Ruyin. The reason is that Xin Ruyin is needed to deduce the formation. However, according to the protagonist's ability, the problem can be solved with a slap on the forehead. He just waits for Xin Ruyin to deduce the spirit gathering formation.

The plot advances too slowly! It's been fifty or sixty chapters, and you're still playing with your internal power in Qixuanmen! ! ! I feel like if I do it this way, I won't necessarily start cultivating immortality even in Chapter 150. Can't stand it anymore, leave! !

Awesome, you need five spiritual roots to become a god, what kind of fanfic are you writing?

The pace is too slow, too grinding, I feel like I can't stand it anymore

From time to time there is a sentence in the text that is illogical. What do you write?

Add some strange fire. There can't be only one dry blue ice flame in the human world. There must be other strange fires.

The plot is good, and Golden Finger is also good, but the author's writing skills are not very good, it is too unfinished and incoherent. More than 140 chapters are still in the training period. I speculate that there may be unfinished eunuchs in the future.