Versatile Mage: I Am Mo Fan's Sister

I'll write a review when I have time.

[Completed, feel free to dive in] Work: "The Versatile Mage: I Am Mo Fan's Sister" Author: Qing Crow Crossing the Cold Pool Genre: Light novel·Derivative fan fiction Elements covered: magic, ancient legends Work status: Completed | 3 million+ words Brief comment: The author sets the protagonist as Mo Fan's sister, and the opening timeline is when Mo Fan has just traveled to the magical world. The protagonist is a high-school girl who is about three years older than Mo Fan (the protagonist is Mo Fan's college entrance examination). While going home to "prepare for the exam", the protagonist not only supervises his younger brother's studies, but also continues to practice magic to enhance his own strength. The strength shown by the protagonist at the beginning is that of an intermediate mage of the wind system, and the awakened fire system has also reached the third level of the elementary level. Such a talent is not terrible. The writing is a bit green at the beginning, and the emoticons that appear from time to time may make people feel that there is a hint of drama, but the wonderful plot is not to be missed and is worth watching. This book is the first novel by a French fan to break out of the circle of three, and it is also the second novel by a French fan to reach 3 million words. I hope you will support it.

1# In Chapter 8, I couldn't stand it any longer and retreated. There was a big problem with the writing. The narrative was a bit streamlined, with no distinction between detail and detail, and some insignificant details were also included; I didn't pay attention to some details. For example, the protagonist and her father called the original protagonist Mo Fan by his first name, as if talking about an outsider. (Although some families are like this in real life, it is quite blunt to create an atmosphere of a loving family in novels); There are a lot of inner dramas for the supporting characters, all of which are unnecessary psychological descriptions. The most terrible thing is that the author's writing style is frivolous and colloquial. It feels like you are not reading a novel, but a netizen posting.

Although it is a female protagonist, it is still very comfortable. In other words, I think it is more comfortable than others I have seen. Of course, it depends on your personal taste.