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Why Don't I, a Slime, Want to Become the Unparalleled Demon King?1

Fengxue Thousand Cat Lanterns

2.1M8.218

In the vast sea of ​​​​dreams, on top of the layers of miracles and magnificence, extraordinary people use their ultimate desire as a beacon to walk on the road of promotion. The supreme beings hold power, shine in all directions because of their majesty, and are elevated to gods. But gods are not the ultimate. They are still striving for greater perfection and ideals, in the void source and above the dream sea, there is no end. "So... Your Majesty Ybor, as the most powerful slime in history, what is the motivation for you to become stronger?" Many years later, when faced with the question from the visiting heavenly messenger, [World Devourer] Ybor, who was already standing at the apex of the dream world, recalled the afternoon when he was just born and was stuffed into a golden toilet by his creator and flushed into the sewer... After a long silence, he said in a sad tone: "It's a toilet. A golden toilet." The messenger: "???"

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10# See Chapter 38 Poison point 1: Chapter 13. As a slime, it is far-fetched to help humans fight monsters, especially when its creator was destroyed by human official forces, and then temporarily lost control of Goldfinger. Of course, it is obviously the author's intention to promote the plot of the protagonist entering the city, but this design is still poisonous. Poison point 2: Chapter 38. The unnecessary sense of responsibility is too heavy. It is obviously the Secret Service's mess, but the protagonist has to clean it up. I was told before that I couldn't report it. Fear of exposure. The co-protagonist wants to quietly solve a boss that is at least 4 levels higher. The top experts of the church's secret service and all kinds of underground supernatural beings, do you, a shady slime, have to worry about you?

I'm Not an Elvish Supporting Character2

Crazy Silence

3.8M8.596

The new book "My Trainer Simulator" has been released, and the bosses are giving a lot of support. Li Xiang, a senior social animal, returned to the age of eleven and found himself in the world of Pokémon that he had dreamed of. But before he could be happy for a long time, he found that he had a best friend named Lin Feng, whose parents were still alive, with pretty features, a younger sister, and a civilian family. Shocked, he combined his own situation and found in disbelief - "I am not a supporting character who has no role in the later stage of the novel, am I?" Unable to accept this, Li Xiang is determined to launch a counterattack against fate! (Pre-viewing reminder: The setting of this book is a combination of games, animations, comics, side stories and personal settings) Keywords: Pokemon, Pokemon, Pokmon, Pokemon, special chapters. There are 2.8 Million words in this old book, and the character is guaranteed

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9# Chapter 32 Abandon There are too many verbose explanations and they are not explained clearly, which is not friendly to non-game players. Chapter 22, the classic martial arts training plot of being late on purpose is used. Do you think it's Kakashi? The master's character is not good. Chapter 24, so what is the expectation of practicing martial arts? It's so strange that you are determined even without seeing the effects? I don't even know how powerful he is (In Chapter 29, after making amends, the master blew up a target) What about a lifetime of pain? It sounds like there are some sequelae. Referring to real-life fitness, are you sure you are not becoming more addicted the more you practice? Chapter 32, what is the protagonist's original intention of practicing martial arts? Isn't it self-defense and life-saving? Isn't it a training class? Why is it now so serious as inheriting the mantle? Not all of those Heavenly King champions are seen practicing martial arts, but competitions and battles are indispensable. The protagonist wants to be a trainer, and there are rewards for winning the goldfinger battle. If he is not allowed to participate, is he putting the cart before the horse? The protagonist is so easily swayed from what he wants to do? (The master later compromised) I just learned martial arts and was just an apprentice. I thought he was my biological son. In what age is there still a feudal master-apprentice system of life dependence? Even Shaolin Wudang has lay disciples.

Zhutian: My Skills Are Not Serious3

Not Mario

2.9M7.692

Martial arts enchanted with magic, painless waist, succubus cultivating magic, licking my immortality skill, anti-two-dimensional soul-moving spell... What kind of magical skills are these? The Legend of the Condor Heroes, Blossoms, Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying, The Eight Parts of the Dragon, Celebrating More Than Years, The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty, Wind and Cloud, The Fighting Sword in the Snow (completed). Dafeng Watcher (in progress)----------------Chu Pingsheng looked at the trembling protagonists and supporting characters in various film and television worlds, trying to release his goodwill: "I won't use my skills on you, really. To put it simply, this is a story about a time traveler letting himself go in the world of heaven. Ps: Book lovers in the book world can read my 6 million-word masterpiece "Wandering in the World of Film and Television"

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8# After seeing Chapter 34, there are three poisonous points: 1. The protagonist reaches out and feeds the medicine into Wang Chuyi's mouth (it's debatable, but is it really appropriate) 2. Mu Nianci's tea smells like tea. In the last chapter, she wanted the protagonist to accompany her back to the palace to make love with Yang Kang. In the next chapter, the protagonist wanted to visit the prime minister's house at night but said he didn't want to risk his life for her to fulfill his filial piety [fn=31] 3. A novice reward task has been tormented in Chapter 34 and has not yet been settled. 4. In Chapter 8, I have realized that I don't know the shortcomings of Qing Gong. By Chapter 34, I still don't know how to do it at all. The protagonist is talented and has learned all kinds of internal skills, swordsmanship, and horses along the way, but he doesn't learn Qing Kung [fn=31] Before I even said anything to personally attack the author, I marked poison point 1.2. If I wanted to say something that would sting the author, maybe it would be "toilet paper reading"? I heard that this author is good at writing about astronomy. I want to say, is this it? The level is not good. After writing for so many years, the mentality is also fragile? [Fn=26]

I Can Only Achieve Nothing and Become the Pirate King4

Tiger Who Loves Salted Fish

2.6M8.5176

Norton Sager has always had a dream, that is, to be a wealthy landowner, with a large territory, so that many people can rely on him for a living, hire a few secretaries, and hire a group of underlings to dominate when he has something to do, and watch dances and listen to music when he has nothing to do... With the "Fist of the North Star" plug-in brought by time travel, he thinks it is not a problem. It's just that I'm a little unlucky... I want to be a farmer, but I won't get anything. Go be the fishing king and have an air force every day. Bodyguard King, Bounty King, Mercenary King... None of them work! Then I can only become the Pirate King!

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7* Chapter 3 abandoned conflicting temperaments The protagonist passively accepts the calculation and "helplessly" takes the blame Some people say that the opening story has a "pirate flavor" and is in line with "the people's simple moral values" The author's writing is very good, and it poisoned me very well, but maybe some readers will take it too seriously.

We Promised to Make a Bad Game, but What the Hell is Titanfall?5

Ibuprofen Warrior

2.3M8.8125

The new book "Let You Cultivate Immortality, Have You Become the Patriarch of the Game?" >>Released! [I, Shen Miaomiao, was forced to take over a game company at the beginning. ]But fortunately, the rebate system wakes up in time. As long as the company loses money, the system will compensate with ten times the rebate! Therefore, the goal of this girl president is to bring down the company! Wealth freedom! [I, Gu Sheng, traveled through time at the beginning and became a game designer. ]But fortunately, the game treasure system has awakened. As long as you continue to produce hit games, you can ascend to the throne of the king of games! Therefore, the goal of this game director is to become bigger and stronger! Create greater glory! ... When the bad CEO met the sixth designer, the company's style gradually became abstract - "No one is playing the promised mecha game? What the hell is your "Titanfall"?" "The market for the promised horror game is not good? What's the situation with your "Escape"?" "The promised second-generation shooter is easy to lose? Are you going to remake "Call of Duty"?" Looking at the profit-making financial report across the board, Shen Miaomiao's head was buzzing. She couldn't lose a penny, so she could only act recklessly! "From now on! Torture the player severely!" She didn't believe it. She couldn't lose the money! Hearing this, Gu Sheng unfolded a stack of plans in his hand: "Well, boss, look at it - black, blood, benevolence, wolf... Which one should we do first?"

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6* Chapter 1 Defeat But it is difficult for a clever woman to make a meal without rice. In addition, the time for application notification is tight. In desperation, he could only hastily produce this "Cat Leo" as an audition work. Traveling through 3 years, you have been fishing for co-authors, and you are not ready until you are notified of the interview? Then a beautiful woman comes to the rescue later, is this all Wanding?

China Entertainment 19976

Fatter

3.4M8.4199

In early 1997, Cao Xuan, who was remembered by later generations of senior entertainment editors, participated in "Water Margin", the last of CCTV's four masterpieces. The most handsome Ximen official in history is revealed...

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5* Chapter 14 Abandoned Book The protagonist "composed" and copied the songs on the spot. The lyrics and music were all copied well, which moved the director so much... I said before that copying songs is only a transitional thing, but after looking at the book review section, copying songs has become part of the main business.

This Text Adventure Game is Absolutely Toxic7

Seven Words And Five Colors

3.1M8.558

It all started when the protagonist downloaded a game called "The Fool (Internal Beta Version)". From then on, his life changed. A text adventure game that is so simple that it has no graphics, no music, only lines of text and countless options. However, every option in the game will affect the player's fate, because on the other side of the game is a real unknown world! Players cannot enter another world, nor can they see the scenes of another world. They can only feel what the game characters see and hear every step of the way in the other world through text. As the game progresses, not only the rewards in the game can be realized in reality, but also various abnormal creatures in the game begin to appear in reality. Until one day, the game was put into global open beta. An era in which everyone is exploring and hunting for treasures in a different world through "text adventure" is quietly unfolding!

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4* Chapter 22: Poisonous Hair. An ordinary shop assistant girl infers from the protagonist's dress that he is going to travel far away. She also thinks that the protagonist is talking a lot during this time (except for the trial plot of getting a pocket watch at the beginning, which is a bit blunt, anyway, I don't see anything unusual in the protagonist's performance). In this way, the protagonist also wants to recruit a smart person as an employee (Chapter 14) For a demon pet that he knows has an owner and the owner has a certain background, the protagonist still wants to "capture" and "train it into a pet". When getting the bow and arrows, the protagonist was surprised that he didn't need arrows. However, in Chapter 21, the decision was made without asking or understanding more. Such details can only show that the protagonist's IQ is high and low (some of the previous details are not bad) In Chapter 20, the official people openly discussed the case information on the street even though they knew that the suspect had anti-reconnaissance awareness and might even be nearby - the only function was to provide the protagonist with information in this way. Chapter 4, choose one of three rewards. The protagonist has not yet determined whether he can exploit the loophole, so he chooses an auxiliary skill without fully considering it, and gives up improving his attack ability.

The Immortal Just Wants to Lie Down8

Pork Heart And Shrimp

2.5M8.3296

When spiritual energy is revived, faith comes first. Some people, Li Daitao, have frozen the Heavenly Father, turned them into Buddhas, and turned them into immortals and gods. They intend to achieve enlightenment through false beliefs. Some people write autobiographies, and they believe that they are legends, so there is no need to pretend to be someone else. Some people have become celebrities, idols, and other things that can be synonymous with people's admiration. They believe that no matter how false their faith is, it is still faith. And Li Yi is also back. He is not reincarnated, he just returned to his own body. Having lived for 5,700 years, he was tired and tired. He has seen all the prosperity in the world, and he has suppressed that there is no equal in the world. He is a living immortal, and he is Li Changsheng. Now that he is Li Yi, he just wants to lie down. Then he became a fairy again in the world. This time he did nothing but lay quietly at home. New Bible, Big Thunder Sound Book, Autobiography of the Sword God, Autobiography of Tianxue, Autobiography of Qingxuan... The deeds written by countless powerful people cannot escape one ending, the living immortal Li Changsheng. No matter how stunning or unparalleled his talents are, they will eventually stop in front of him. Li Yi: Li Changsheng's matter, what do you care about Li Yi?

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3* Chapter 5 abandons the book, Dao Qing's people and Zhao Si are both stupid. Dao Qing wanted to win over people, but ended up directly threatening Zhao Si, the protagonist's friend. Didn't this offend people? He was polite before fighting, and he didn't understand the principle of coercion and inducement. You know that it is a factor of instability, but you still intensify the conflict like this😓And it is not a unified dynasty yet, the protagonist still focuses on winning over the target, are you not afraid of running into the enemy's country? Or maybe the protagonist is so awesome that he will rub you and his soldiers around?

Rebirth of the Great Era 19939

March Mazhu

3.4M8.3155

The new book (My 1991) has been released. Everyone is welcome to collect and read the story of Zhang Xuan becoming a literary giant after his rebirth.

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2* Chapter 33: Defeat, the author is really hard to describe when it comes to women. Du Jingling's girlfriend sister is arrogant, superficial and inconsistent, taking the social structure of the 1920s and substituting it into the 1990s. The protagonist doesn't look like a person who was born again in his 40s. Facing this mysterious woman named Youyun, he always suffers. He chooses to suffer a loss. The author forcibly adds drama, can't he treat her like a passerby? Chapter 26 Lilith confesses that she has experienced profound lessons in her previous life. Is it difficult to say an explicit rejection? I have no feelings for you.

Versatile Mage: I Am Mo Fan's Sister10

The Clear Crow Passes Over The Cold Pond

3.0M8.9

The ancient east... The vast dragon god takes off again! The cry of the Suzaku resounds throughout the world! There is a Heavenly Nest on Kunlun Mountain, where a nine-story demon tower stands, and a jade face smiles in the Yaotai. The roar of the real dragon, the old god of Titan, the Behemoth, and the reappearance of ancient totems. The Gate of Hell, a Nazca painting, the divine eyes are numerous, and the power of the plane appears in the world. Time makes history, how much of the past is buried in the yellow sand of the ancient country? The four seas are causing disasters and are about to overturn the human territory! The rooftops of sea, land and sky gradually awaken, showing their power to change the world. Darkness is coming to this world, and light is about to come as expected. The saint has passed away, the angel has lost his original intention, The ancient prophecy has a different ending, Who can make up for what is missing with just one hand? ! Qingya's little fantasy, to make up for some difficult feelings, a newbie is on the road, chasing dreams, entertaining himself, don't blame me if you don't like it, it's just a fan work~ This book is also called: "My little sister is growing up", "Sister, please love me again", "My brother Mo Fan has the appearance of a Dharma god", "The ordinary life of retired old Mo Fan", "The Legend of the Full-time Mage"... Ugh, Mo Yingge, I love you! Wish you good health and long life, book friends, I love you! ! ! ! ! ! !

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1# In Chapter 8, I couldn't stand it any longer and retreated. There was a big problem with the writing. The narrative was a bit streamlined, with no distinction between detail and detail, and some insignificant details were also included; I didn't pay attention to some details. For example, the protagonist and her father called the original protagonist Mo Fan by his first name, as if talking about an outsider. (Although some families are like this in real life, it is quite blunt to create an atmosphere of a loving family in novels); There are a lot of inner dramas for the supporting characters, all of which are unnecessary psychological descriptions. The most terrible thing is that the author's writing style is frivolous and colloquial. It feels like you are not reading a novel, but a netizen posting.