The Achievement System Obtained at the Beginning of Dou Po:

The early stage was okay. . . Later, in order to follow the plot, I suppressed it to 🐶, and instantly lost the desire to read any more. . . .

At present, it is confirmed that the heroine Xun'er, the little medical fairy, and Yun Yun will be written outside Zhongzhou in the future and two more heroines, Qing Lin and Zi Yan, will be added. After Zhongzhou, I will consider whether to add more female protagonists, just thinking🤔

In the early stage, it usually doesn't work after the plot of the original work begins. The male protagonist's breakthrough in cultivation was too fast in the early stage, which led to the author starting to suppress his development. In order to forcefully follow the original plot, the male protagonist stayed and increased the level. The male protagonist had no idea of ​​cultivating and was promoted without mentioning it. It can be seen that the author has no outline and leaves the original work without knowing what the male protagonist should do. The author likes the routine of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It is easy to appreciate now. Fatigue, in fact, in the early stage, you can extend the system rewards on the timeline, make the male protagonist's cultivation level a bit smoother, and write the special rewards as branch lines and change them to caves that no one has discovered. You can also write about adventure experiences, so as not to follow the original work all the time. It only takes a few plots to intervene in the original plot. After all, they are the same person, otherwise it will look too much like a nanny. If the male protagonist does not have the purpose of his own training, it is equivalent to no main plot. To sum up the above suggestions 1. The progress of the male protagonist's training depends on your expected length. If you can't control it, it is recommended to open a secondary profession, such as changing jobs (weapon refining, spiritual formation, and alien dungeons are also acceptable). 2. If there is no main plot and the story needs to be written around the original work, there will be many additional storylines (take the author's example of shaping this article: the original work did not mention the alien fire belonging to it, so you can set up a system to provide a map for the male protagonist to get it), otherwise it will easily give readers the impression of a nanny flow. 3. If the male protagonist has no training goals and keeps forcing the plot and then accepts girls, he will easily be called a stud. 4. There is a saying that pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger really doesn't have that many audiences now. What's the purpose? A fighting king pretends to be a fighting master and waits for others to find him and enjoy his worship? Is there a possibility that you can get it by showing your cultivation directly?

Well, in the first few chapters, he seems to be a good boy who grew up in a warm family, but after about ten chapters, he turns into a sophisticated egoist. It's too disconnected. Let's not talk about giving back to the family. You didn't give back to your parents either. At least according to the words you described, the protagonist's parents were very good to him, and he didn't suffer any grievances during his growth. Then the protagonist became a fourth-level alchemist in more than ten chapters. After more than a hundred chapters, he didn't see any benefit to his family, and the family didn't get any help from him.

It's very well written, I hope it won't be discontinued.

It's no longer interesting to see someone posting about Xiao Yan. Some people even lick such obscene things. What's the matter? The outlook on things is so messed up.

Generally speaking, the later part is more intelligent. A genius from the Xiao family can kill so many people in the Qianhun Palace and settle down in the Jiama Empire. Why don't you want to die?

Updates will resume in May and June. About 900,000 words officially arrived in Zhongzhou.

The writing is very beautiful, but what you wrote is so broken. I hope you won't finish it.

The author's update is too slow.