Everlasting Fairy

It's outrageous. My mother even thought that her eldest son might be related to her second son. In the end, she turned her second son's childhood sweetheart into a widow. When I watched it, I just felt sick and uncomfortable. I couldn't understand or comprehend it.

It's the kind of assembly-line writing that counts as fairy grass before it's put on shelves. After it was put on the shelves, it was obviously written by someone from the studio. The part about entering Fucheng was inexplicable. It was said before that the identity should not be revealed, otherwise the 17 or 18-year-old Wu Jing would be caught, skinned, and tortured. After all, everyone in the wonders knew him, but he revealed his identity without even pretending. In the previous article, Xian Sheng will also approve a well-known vest. The effect is quite good and it is very comfortable to look at. Later, when it becomes popular, he will ignore what I said in the previous article and directly reveal his identity. What about treating readers as zz? Why do you need someone to write it? This book had good results before it was put on the shelves. There is no doubt about the fairy grass. After it was put on the shelves, it started to trick people into getting on board, right? What about the pig-killing plate?

The requirements are as follows: 1. Types of demons and their names 2. The Birth Sutra compiled 3. Distinctive characteristics in personality, appearance, etc. Also, please read it~please vote~

There are demons in this world and they are murderous. Yu Lu's sister-in-law would be very scared if she were alone at home. But Yu Lu had to endure it by himself if he wanted to learn martial arts. Yu Lu didn't like going to that temple to study and thought it was too cold.

There are many unreasonable things, and the character changes are too blunt. Emotional scenes are not very good There are some typos in the book Some data are very confusing and inconsistent.

Yu Lu is a warrior monk. He is a bald man and he doesn't dare to be bullied. He was practicing boxing in the temple. The Buddha's head was blown by the wind and turned to him. He felt uncomfortable. After practicing boxing, he didn't expect to get a golden finger.

Why write a character like a sister-in-law who shows off her coquettishness? I feel like my expectations were suddenly lowered. .

I was persuaded to quit by the emotional drama and I really couldn't bear it. Originally a childhood sweetheart who was supposed to be a couple with the protagonist, Yu Dalang forced a marriage and snatched a woman and then died. This is nothing to say. It's okay for Yu's mother to have resentment against the protagonist and Qingmei because her eldest son died, which ruined their reputation and opposed them. This is normal. But Yu's mother is dead, and she's still like a grandson. She was originally the protagonist's wife, and she's still called sister-in-law? The two of them liked each other but didn't make any moves at all. Everyone who got in the way was dead, and no one could affect them and they still pretended. I'm afraid that my reputation has long been gone, and besides, we were childhood sweethearts who liked each other. I'm speechless.

Next time you write a book, please note the system flow. It is very important. The opening chapter is very good, but I still quit when I saw the system.

I am really speechless as to what I wrote about all the poisons