Immortal Immortal

I have read the latest chapter, and I have read the novel for a long time. I just decided to abandon this book today. Let me share my feelings. The chapter on the Heart Beast Sect can be used as fairy grass, and the chapter on the Sub-Archive Sect can be used as food. I don't need to read the rest. It is at the average level of online articles. One word is watery, the paid ones are not as good as the free ones, and the plot becomes more and more boring as it goes on.

The previous article was pretty good, but after I subscribed to it, it started to feel weird. Not to mention the plot, the main character is completely floating, a bit like a nouveau riche, everything he does seems to be right, and the supporting characters have an aura of intelligence. The protagonist is amazed at every turn, and all the supporting characters are envious, jealous, and hateful, and they all feel like templates... Oh, and the kindness that the protagonist exudes saves lives, gives exercises, and gives money to a woman whom he has only met a few times. The master really made a mistake.

What can I say, it looks pretty good in the early stages, but becomes mediocre later on. Especially in the Nascent Soul stage, the protagonist has almost maxed out his attributes, but his external performance is really mediocre. It is difficult to surpass the level with the magic weapons that are said to be all over the place. To fight a group of people who don't have any magic weapons, it's just a matter of having the right skills. Shouldn't the Nascent Soul with the flawless golden elixir be beaten casually at the Nascent Soul stage? There are still some distractions to equip with some magic weapons. As a result, three bug-level Nascent Souls plus a bunch of buffs and even the first-level invincibility can't be achieved. I don't want to read it anymore. It must still be crazy about the accumulation of knowledge, and then there is no obvious improvement in combat power.

No, why would you delete your comments if you support me so much?

It was normal before the age of 8, but no physical function at the age of 20. Assuming that an average person can live to be 60 years old, he or she will age about 4.5 Years in one year. A woman's childbearing years range from 16 to 35 years. So here it is almost 10-15. Your development and aging are different concepts. How do you maintain the numerical balance of a race? Within a few generations there would be no more left alive.

It's a mess. There's nothing exciting about online writing. Internet writing without it won't be popular. The realm of creation is messy. I don't know what it is. It doesn't give full play to the advantages of being a time traveler. A fox drawn is actually not a nine-tailed fox. There is no innovation.

Not particularly to my personal taste. After reading more than sixty chapters, the content is very bland and not very attractive. There was no climax, no ups and downs, and no attractive suspense. The plain and direct way of telling the story, coupled with the description of the content, made it feel very vague, so I gave up on it.

It's not that the weird genre is in decline, but that the subject matter is not good enough, and the plot is not exciting or tense enough. It is mediocre. If you write the kind of brain-burning weirdness, many people will definitely read it.

The ending is a bit rushed, and there are some places that are just brushed off, which seems a bit unsmooth. Overall, it's okay. Come on, author, come on!

You can't read this book without some mental illness. Goldfinger is a split personality.