Douluo's Glorious Angel Reshapes the World

The author's subject matter is very good, starting from the description after the "Battle of Two Gods", and using the current situation of Qian Renxue and Wuhun Palace to write from a novel angle and clever conception. But when I looked through the book review section, it was terrible. I thought it might be: 1. The literary atmosphere is too strong, and the existing classical Chinese has a modern Chinese feel. Half written and half white, some self-proclaimed words, words of respect, and words of modesty. It doesn't quite fit in with our daily speaking habits, but the literary works are okay. But it's not very good for this kind of novel. It is best to use simple and common language that is easy to understand. 2. The psychological description of the characters is excessive and seems redundant. Think a lot, do less. 3. You can focus on depicting daily life and fighting with Tang San. Personally, I feel that the first point in this book is the biggest problem, and I hope the author will pay attention to it! ! ! Also, don't cut or cut 😓

Can the protagonist be made emotionally stronger? ? I feel like a licking dog

Guangzheng's dog-licking image is a bit uncomfortable to watch

Very well written update, bro.

Don't make it darker as you write. Don't rush and write slowly.

Not bad, the top group among fans.

Does the author have a single heroine, Cher?

It's harder to read than classical Chinese, I won't read it anymore

The author writes very well, but it's a pity that not many people read it.

Come on, well written. Excellent literary talent.