
Mortal's Beginning: Inheriting the Immortal Realm
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Hundreds of billions of years ago, a battle between immortals and demons caused a fairyland to break away from the fairy world, and the immortal king died in the battle. After the war, various immortals searched for hundreds of millions of years in the endless void, but did not get any clues. Until one day. An ordinary disciple of the Qingxu Sect of the Yue Kingdom picked up a strange token, and the mystery of this fairyland that had been missing for millions of billions of years was gradually unveiled. (Mortal flow, resource flow)
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Official(28)Scraped 18d ago
Shennong is dead!
I wonder if the author deliberately put poison in order to eat the subsistence allowance! People who haven't read the original work can also write fanfics! Without normal logic and basic IQ, I put poison in the first picture for you to see. You also want to sell the things you brought over from time travel. You are so awesome.
Isn't this SB protagonist going around to secret realms to fight for his life even if he can't finish all the treasures in his family? Isn't he stupid?
I don't understand. We already have the Immortal Realm, why do we still want to go out and wander around, and why do we still need to go to people in the transformation stage to look for S?
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A piece of grass/air in the fairyland is a treasure in the spiritual world (mortal world)
The eldest brother has inherited the immortal realm. Are you sure this is a mortal stream? You shouldn't be writing about the kind that has top-level skills and top-level training resources, but the main character is useless and slow to practice, right?
If there is a fairyland, then you can ascend to the fairyland even if you are a pig🐷. If you don't know how to drown the ball in the puddle, and if you have resources, then you are right to write Gou Daowen. If you are just a wanderer, you will be finished sooner or later!
A piece of grass in the fairyland. A handful of mud. It would also be a treasure in the spiritual world and the mortal world. Also hanging out everywhere.
This is a short story written by a student from a certain school. It can only be said that the writing style and plot of an elementary school student are even worse than that of an AI ghostwriter. It is not completely nonsense, but it is almost nonsense. It feels like a primary school student has read the first part of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and combined it with his own impressions of other fragmentary encounters with mortals. It is already semi-original. Various settings are seriously inconsistent with the original work, and the details of the plot are childish and rough.
I don't know if the author is a child, but he has died. If this doesn't work, that won't work. Then, if you contribute your immortal realm, won't the immortal cultivator become what you are satisfied with? What's the difference between what the protagonist does and Han Li? This is a typical example of only allowing state officials to set fires and not allowing people to light lamps. He is a hypocrite, not to mention that cultivating immortals is originally a fight with heaven and earth. People fight. If you don't fight, why are you cultivating immortals? Mortals still have to fight, let alone cultivating immortals. This is the idiotic saying about why not eat minced meat. Emperor Jin just has little knowledge, and the protagonist has been a low-level monk and still has this idea. Why don't you create a world, do whatever you want, and still practice immortality. Do you know why many worlds of cultivating immortals have spiritual roots? This is completely a limitation of heaven and earth. There are only so many resources and spiritual energy in heaven and earth. If everyone has become an immortal, can heaven and earth bear it? Just like the earth, it can only bear a population of 20 billion. If you ask it to bear a population of 100 billion, can it sustain it?
Big brother, he has top-notch skills, infinite spiritual stones, and the best immortal realm. Why do you still linger on this world?
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Official(28)Scraped 18d ago
Shennong is dead!
I wonder if the author deliberately put poison in order to eat the subsistence allowance! People who haven't read the original work can also write fanfics! Without normal logic and basic IQ, I put poison in the first picture for you to see. You also want to sell the things you brought over from time travel. You are so awesome.
Isn't this SB protagonist going around to secret realms to fight for his life even if he can't finish all the treasures in his family? Isn't he stupid?
I don't understand. We already have the Immortal Realm, why do we still want to go out and wander around, and why do we still need to go to people in the transformation stage to look for S?
author?
A piece of grass/air in the fairyland is a treasure in the spiritual world (mortal world)
The eldest brother has inherited the immortal realm. Are you sure this is a mortal stream? You shouldn't be writing about the kind that has top-level skills and top-level training resources, but the main character is useless and slow to practice, right?
If there is a fairyland, then you can ascend to the fairyland even if you are a pig🐷. If you don't know how to drown the ball in the puddle, and if you have resources, then you are right to write Gou Daowen. If you are just a wanderer, you will be finished sooner or later!
A piece of grass in the fairyland. A handful of mud. It would also be a treasure in the spiritual world and the mortal world. Also hanging out everywhere.
This is a short story written by a student from a certain school. It can only be said that the writing style and plot of an elementary school student are even worse than that of an AI ghostwriter. It is not completely nonsense, but it is almost nonsense. It feels like a primary school student has read the first part of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and combined it with his own impressions of other fragmentary encounters with mortals. It is already semi-original. Various settings are seriously inconsistent with the original work, and the details of the plot are childish and rough.
I don't know if the author is a child, but he has died. If this doesn't work, that won't work. Then, if you contribute your immortal realm, won't the immortal cultivator become what you are satisfied with? What's the difference between what the protagonist does and Han Li? This is a typical example of only allowing state officials to set fires and not allowing people to light lamps. He is a hypocrite, not to mention that cultivating immortals is originally a fight with heaven and earth. People fight. If you don't fight, why are you cultivating immortals? Mortals still have to fight, let alone cultivating immortals. This is the idiotic saying about why not eat minced meat. Emperor Jin just has little knowledge, and the protagonist has been a low-level monk and still has this idea. Why don't you create a world, do whatever you want, and still practice immortality. Do you know why many worlds of cultivating immortals have spiritual roots? This is completely a limitation of heaven and earth. There are only so many resources and spiritual energy in heaven and earth. If everyone has become an immortal, can heaven and earth bear it? Just like the earth, it can only bear a population of 20 billion. If you ask it to bear a population of 100 billion, can it sustain it?
Big brother, he has top-notch skills, infinite spiritual stones, and the best immortal realm. Why do you still linger on this world?










