Mountain and Sea Lantern

The story is really exciting if you don't use your brain🧠, but it's unreasonable to force too many small details into the problem. 1. Just talking about the protagonist's first copy, a sneak attack on the disciples of the largest sect is like killing a chicken. There is no difference between the so-called genius and ordinary people. Anyway, he will be killed in one go. 2. The protagonist won the first place in the first dungeon, and his skills have been demonstrated. He also defeated the real successor of the big sect, Situ Qingqing, the daughter of the boss, in a duel. However, when he went out to the second dungeon, he was looked down upon and thought to be garbage. Is this reasonable? ? There are also those supporting characters who were expelled from the sect who are completely brainless. They feel at ease after receiving the benefits, but they are just a little worried. Their speeches and actions are illogical. 3. The author likes to forcefully find logic and reasons for various supporting characters' misunderstandings of the protagonist's actions. The reader looks confused, can you believe this? A normal person would be very wary of the protagonist's words and deeds after seeing him perform so many unnatural actions, and would not easily believe them. However, the supporting characters would make up their own minds and make up for it. To sum up, it was uncomfortable to watch. I thought it was exciting before, but there were too many poisonous points later on. I couldn't stand the arrogant leader in the second copy.

1. The whole novel is full of dark knowledge, cleverness, and self-righteousness. I will give up after reading this🧠 2. I always like to write about the supporting roles of female characters. I died of poisonous poison because of the female supporting character named Bian😘😘 3. The old author always likes to claim that the protagonist is affectionate and righteous, and the relevant plots don't seem too poisonous, but they are just weird.

Feitian is really a classic, and the next one is not as good as the other one! ! ! Flying Pig's Knuckle grows from the beginning to the end, and the changes in character and scheming are clearly visible! ! ! Don't just assume that every start is perfect and you're smart. Start with growth, not deficiencies.

Dao Lord is still at his peak, half-immortal is a bit far-fetched, and the writing of Shan Hai is a bit messy.

To be honest, the best is the first half of Feitian. The second half is getting worse and worse. The overall best is probably Half Immortal. Unfortunately, there is no Immortal Chapter. I don't like Dao Lord very much. I can't appreciate it. This book is actually very good. Although there were some mistakes in some places, the author quickly adjusted it. In fact, it's not the content but the rhythm. If there are ten thousand words per day, it won't be better. After all, it's very uncomfortable and unpleasant to write a copy when the climax suddenly disappears. But overall, it's okay so far. In principle, once the outline is set, you don't have to worry about going astray. I hope it can have a semi-immortal rhythm. The most important thing is to update it quickly. As for those at levels one, two, three, and four, don't worry about going astray. Go and raise the level first.

Daojun is the best novel I have ever read, and Half Immortal is also good. Lao Yue's novels made me find them tricky, and I can't read anything else.

Each one is more rubbish than the last. It becomes unreadable after dozens of chapters. Each character is more stupid than the last. It's so substandard.

What scares me the most is reading the novels written by Catch Up. I only read those pages every day. Apart from Yue Qianchou and Mao Ni, I really don't know whose online novels I should read. I must read every book written by them. Mao Ni seems to have not written a book for a long time. Only mortals can read Wang Yu.

It's the worst-written book, with repetitive words and a lot of useless verbosity. This is not a kindergarten, okay. There's no need to explain things that everyone knows at a glance. Are you messing with the word count? . I'm ready to give up on this money talk.

The writing is really good, and the progress is not slow, just two or three updates a day, so that readers can enjoy reading it!