American Comics: I, the Containment Object is Exposed at the Beginning

Jiraiya was rewarded with the power of six paths when he was taken into custody for the first time. After all, the author has a father in his works. But! ! ! He's already in the Six Paths, and he's still the same as before. He was taken into custody in a sand village for fear of triggering a war. . . . Chiyo Otsutsuki or Rasa Otsutsuki? There are countless other poisonous points, large and small, and you will be poisoned half way through without any thought. Summary: 💩It's drugged, and the character is completely ruined.

I had this experience with a grandson: At seven years old, you enter elementary school. On the day you entered school, you were bullied by a fifth-grade child. You can't beat me, so I swore bitterly in my heart, thirty years to the east of the river, thirty years to the west of the river. Thirteen years old, you are at the peak of sixth grade. After years of martial arts training, you have the aura of a naughty kid every time you breathe in and out. Like those fifth-grade kids, even three of them are no match for you. At this time, you meet "the strong ones in the junior high school realm. Even the weakest junior high school strong men, their strength is definitely not matchable by you. And in this realm, you have enough financial resources to buy two packs of spicy chips! It's so scary. So you make up your mind to enter the junior high school realm. At the age of sixteen, you have achieved the junior high school realm. Through years of study, Study hard. You no longer look down on your classmates at the same level. The usual high school level is the direction that a strong person should move forward. At the age of eighteen, you discovered the reason why there are so few strong people in high school. It turns out that due to the limitations of the laws of heaven and earth, only a few people in each generation can pass the college entrance examination. Those who pass will completely lose their mortal bodies and enter the realm of university. Those who fail will lose this opportunity and become adults. In ancient times, some of them could become the most powerful people and obtain the Great Dao. It's almost difficult. You must seize this opportunity. After graduating from college, you suddenly find that the people around you are all college students. In their eyes, your girlfriend who has been in love for four years is like an ant. The family promised your girlfriend to a young man from a big family business. You were forced to leave your girlfriend temporarily. You only remembered that Lihua Daiyu had made a three-year appointment with you. You recalled the shame you experienced that day in elementary school. The veins on your hands were roaring. When I return, I will stain the sky with demonic blood. In order to become stronger in a short time, you choose the Internet. From then on, you joined a big company and spent your time studying on the toilet. From then on, you discovered a shocking secret and started your own business. , Encountered dangerous situations. From Beijing to Shanghai and then to Shenzhen, I met strong people who worked hard in the adult realm, received life experience from the mysterious old man, and talked with geniuses who died young after graduating from college. Three years later, the situation is calm, do you think he will come to the woman's home? At this sentence, my girlfriend felt a little bitter. She had refused many blind dates arranged by her family in the past three years. Now she was almost at her limit. The sun was about to set. Is it just a disappointment? At this time, a huge and trembling breath came to my girlfriend's house. The mother-in-law's face turned slightly - - Change, their family has been in business for many years, but in the end it is just a small branch of the family. She has never forgotten the voice of Bentley, the patriarch of the big family, but this voice is different. Suddenly something came to mind, and his face turned pale. This is impossible. Even if I try hard for half my life, I can't do it. Father-in-law and mother-in-law, you are all right. A man's voice came out. Suddenly, the house was silent. The mother-in-law asked cautiously where the residence was. The mother-in-law lowered her head in shame to prepare for the wedding. Needless to say, a year later, a man named Ma with glasses was riding. - A penguin visited. After some greetings, you were invited to enter the new map Zhengdao League (Internet Conference). When you entered, you found that there were about dozens of people present, and they all had unfathomable abilities. You could hear that I had no interest in money. I had not received a salary in a month. I was blind, and I didn't know whether it was beautiful or not. You couldn't help but be stunned when you recalled what you saw along the way.

The subject matter is okay, but the format is small. Contained objects can be a great danger to a world. But when it comes to the multiverse, it's obviously nothing. If it is not strengthened, what is the difference between using a novice weapon and entering a dungeon? The containment should be strengthened and another world should be buried with it. Only in this way can the crisis of the multiverse be reflected.

I won't add a few more chapters today , it's not enough to read🐶

I'll give you an idea. If you want to see if it's feasible, just use the backrooms. You can write about it, which is to teleport people from other worlds there, how long they can survive there, and how many monsters they destroy, and then give rewards so that people from different worlds can cooperate with each other.

You just keep writing about the arrival of the contained objects, with no gaps, and the protagonist doesn't take them out except waiting for the reward at home. Why did you write him as the main character? You might as well just make a group portrait and write about the arrival of the contained objects in the heavens. Just delete this protagonist.

The front part is okay, but the back part is poor. Moreover, the quality is really low, and the strength of the foundation is not shown at all.

Although it can be very exciting if it is well integrated, your protagonist barely shows up, and there is no main plot. You always expose monsters for others to fight. It's okay at first, but it becomes boring after too much!

This is equivalent to telling you what the weakness is, and then where it lands, and then a bunch of people conquer it and then repeat it endlessly. The plot has a strong sense of fragmentation and is very repetitive.

Many book friends felt that the writing was not good because of the reasonableness of the content and the setting. But when I saw the fee, I was surprised that the pace was so fast. I read dozens of chapters without any spare time for description. I just wanted to see what kind of contained objects would be in that universe, and the objects would be contained when they arrived. There seemed to be no ups and downs. The protagonist seemed to be a character from each universe, growing, upgrading and becoming stronger during the containment process, but the actual description was a bit lame. On the surface, it just gives the golden finger of a single person from other novels to the protagonists of each universe, and then pretends to be deceived by saying that there is a protagonist. In fact, the golden finger of this male protagonist is pitifully weak and useless. He has not encountered any difficulties and does not describe life. So, what is the significance of this protagonist? It is more interesting to directly say that the containment society developed a brand new golden finger before the destruction to help other universes not to make the same mistakes.