Mysterious Resurrection: Controlling the Illusionary Ghost at the Beginning
About This Novel
The protagonist travels through a mysterious recovery and directly controls a powerful ghost named Phantom Ghost at the beginning. Hallucinations kill people, hallucinations and ghosts. As long as you dare to fantasize, I can take your life. Chu Liang: If you are my enemy, are you sure that everything you see is true? Dreams, reality, fantasy, which one is real? What happens when a ghost has hallucinations? That year, Yang Jian was not a ghost controller yet... That year, the headquarters had just been established... That year, Ye Zhengang was rated as the number one ghost controller in Asia... And that year... There was an additional ghost controller named Chu Liang in the country...
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Official(20)Scraped 8d ago
Don't write the first chapter. It's a waste of time to write the first chapter. The ones above are your trumpets!
The protagonist is as bug-free as Two-Arm
The book is very nice. It's the author. Your name suits you very well.
Trash, can't even control his own supernatural power, write chicken feathers
I think we can let the protagonist go back in time and let various people from the Republic of China do the same thing with him
There is a three-minute reader in this building
He said it looks good between 20 and 35, but I don't think it's necessary to watch it.
The main character looks like a retard. Taking in two ordinary people is the younger brother, and they started raping them at the beginning.
It's well written but I have some suggestions.
The overall pace of supernatural events can be slower, focus on the description of the environment, and capture the sense of oppression and tension in the original work. In addition, we need to carefully consider the characters and dialogues of the original characters. First, there are too many dialogues between them, which are inconsistent with the characters established in the original work. Second, their predictions about the protagonist's various predictions are too bland, such as knowing the characteristics of many ghosts and supernatural locations but not doubting them. On the whole, it's okay. There are original ghosts and plots, and the protagonist's ability system is self-consistent. It's just that it's not as scary as the original work, and it doesn't feel as intrusive.
Don't be silly, the plot behind it is okay.
When writing fan fiction, read the original work carefully
Rating
Community(0)
Official(20)Scraped 8d ago
Don't write the first chapter. It's a waste of time to write the first chapter. The ones above are your trumpets!
The protagonist is as bug-free as Two-Arm
The book is very nice. It's the author. Your name suits you very well.
Trash, can't even control his own supernatural power, write chicken feathers
I think we can let the protagonist go back in time and let various people from the Republic of China do the same thing with him
There is a three-minute reader in this building
He said it looks good between 20 and 35, but I don't think it's necessary to watch it.
The main character looks like a retard. Taking in two ordinary people is the younger brother, and they started raping them at the beginning.
It's well written but I have some suggestions.
The overall pace of supernatural events can be slower, focus on the description of the environment, and capture the sense of oppression and tension in the original work. In addition, we need to carefully consider the characters and dialogues of the original characters. First, there are too many dialogues between them, which are inconsistent with the characters established in the original work. Second, their predictions about the protagonist's various predictions are too bland, such as knowing the characteristics of many ghosts and supernatural locations but not doubting them. On the whole, it's okay. There are original ghosts and plots, and the protagonist's ability system is self-consistent. It's just that it's not as scary as the original work, and it doesn't feel as intrusive.
Don't be silly, the plot behind it is okay.
When writing fan fiction, read the original work carefully
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