
The Will of Fire Cannot Save the Ninja World
by Eight Swords
About This Novel
The Valley of the End. Uchiha Miya looked at Namikaze Minato opposite: "Where the leaves are flying, fire also grows endlessly?" "The leaves are flying and burning, who is the fat one?" "Written as leaves, it is just pronounced as leeks." "The will of fire cannot save Konoha, let alone the ninja world." (PS: Naruto fan, there is a golden finger but not a system, rebelling against the village in the middle period, revitalizing local senjutsu)
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Official(65)Scraped 11d ago
Finished reading
The story is quite good, the protagonist did everything we wanted to say, which is quite comfortable. I just feel that the golden finger of the protagonist and the eyes are not very powerful, and the concept is very vague. There are only nine magatama in the eyes. The protagonist has seven, but still can't win over the third generation? If this continues, will the Nine Magatama Sharingan still be unable to defeat the samsara eye patch? After all, the samsara eye spots beat the five shadows, but what about the six spots behind them? Three magatama is for observing the enemy, six magatama is for observing oneself, and nine magatama is for observing the world. Good guy, everyone has various skills, so you can only watch? It feels like you were able to weaken the golden finger, and then it became a golden finger, which is useless. You have seven magatama! It's almost over! Why can't you even handle Minato and Kushina? The more I write, the more I feel that four stars is too much. . . Otsutsuki on the moon also came out. At this time, the original Otsutsuki who can use the reincarnation eye chakra mode has not been born yet. They should be using big eyeballs now, so according to this, they should not dare to go to the ninja world, right? The most likely possibility is to summon meteorites to hit the ninja world. Okay, let's just say that. There is no specific details about World War II. I don't know how to get the reputation. The protagonist is promoted to jounin and jumps up immediately. The chunin jumps directly. The excessive plot is too rough and blunt, and the plot is beyond recognition. If it continues like this, another hundred and eighty chapters should be completed, right? It is estimated that the total number of chapters does not exceed 350, which is generally unsatisfactory. Finally, I would like to say one last thing, why do the current protagonists want to change the ninja world? In the first two days, I saw someone who wanted to endure it and extinct it. Are you digging your own ancestral grave? You are a ninja, you are a vested interest, and you are also a time traveler. Your original world is modern, and you have traveled to a world where you can live forever? Wouldn't it be nice if you can practice with peace of mind and pick up Tsunade, or even go pick up Kaguya Otsutsuki? What kind of mentality do you have?
I want to know who the heroine is, preferably multiple heroines
Minato must die
Minato is disgusting, so disgusting, the protagonist is perverted
Just make fun of it, but it's boring to take it seriously.
There is nothing to say about Sasuke's talent. As for the night of the genocide, he only opened one magatama. How could a ninja student like him get so much chakra to support more than double magatama? Even that little chakra couldn't sustain even one magatama, and Sasuke never knew he had opened his eyes. The Sharingan is also supported by chakra. Don't be misled by some novels. Some ninja students just open the kaleidoscope or something like that. The moment they open their eyes, the ending can be immediate. The chakra is drained and they die.
Is Substitution Jutsu a space ninjutsu?
I don't know where the author placed 4F. Their master can fly thunder god. Since the substitute technique is space ninjutsu, wouldn't the second generation know about it? This is a real scientist. He can channel the undead and use infinite explosions. If he didn't realize that the Substitute Technique is Space Ninjutsu, then the Substitute Technique cannot be Space Ninjutsu. If the Substitute Technique is Space Ninjutsu, the students in the school will know it, but not 4F? In the final analysis, the author is out of his mind and used a blinding E-level ninjutsu to compete with the S-level Flying Thunder God. Spiritualism is the real space ninjutsu. It is better to study this directly than to study the substitute technique.
Personally don't like it
Since you are a time traveler, you should be more mature and not play with a group of children as a human being, right? You can't even pretend to be cool, you're also trash, that's enough
The character has collapsed and there is no taste of Naruto
How would you describe this book? It feels like a cover-up novel with the names of the original characters. Just the name is the same, but the characters give people a different feel. The third generation, Danzo, Orochimaru, Minato, Kushina. . . The personalities of many characters do not match the original work. It feels like they bear the names of the original characters, but their behaviors and personalities are that of another person. The essence of those characters is not written at all, so that there is an extreme lack of sense of substitution and it is very confusing. To put it simply, it has no internal flavor! Of course, this does not mean that the characters must be consistent with the original work, but at least the transformation of the characters must be a process. The novel must have the flavor of Naruto in the early stage, and then as the plot develops, it will gradually move towards the feeling of a fan story that the author wants, so that readers can enter the drama and have a sense of immersion. After all, this is a Naruto fanfic! ! ! Unfortunately, the "Naruto feeling" given by this book from the beginning is very hazy and unclear. As the plot develops, the combat power system rises and falls, a bit collapsed. It is difficult for people to identify with the protagonist's strength, especially the plot of destroying Kumogakure. Although the Third Raikage is not present, the others give people an extremely "waste" feeling. Even if the author asks the protagonist to drive a Gundam to crush Kumogakure, I will believe it! But no, just releasing the Eight-Tails made Kumogakure completely useless. . . Even the Kyuubi Rebellion did not cause Konoha to collapse so miserably. What's more, this is the Kumogakure Village after World War II. It did not participate in World War II (in this fanfic, Kumogakure did not participate). The author himself said that Kumogakure currently ranks first in strength and has vaguely surpassed Konoha. As a result, the Eight-Tails ended like this, and that's it?! The logic of combat power cannot hold water, and the protagonist's strength cannot convince readers. It seems that the protagonist is very strong, but his strength is not shocking. Instead, the protagonist is strong because everyone else is useless. Yes! That's what it feels like! Therefore, the characters do not have the essence of the original character, and coupled with the collapse of the combat power system, the novel feels very fragmented, and this becomes more and more the later.
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Official(65)Scraped 11d ago
Finished reading
The story is quite good, the protagonist did everything we wanted to say, which is quite comfortable. I just feel that the golden finger of the protagonist and the eyes are not very powerful, and the concept is very vague. There are only nine magatama in the eyes. The protagonist has seven, but still can't win over the third generation? If this continues, will the Nine Magatama Sharingan still be unable to defeat the samsara eye patch? After all, the samsara eye spots beat the five shadows, but what about the six spots behind them? Three magatama is for observing the enemy, six magatama is for observing oneself, and nine magatama is for observing the world. Good guy, everyone has various skills, so you can only watch? It feels like you were able to weaken the golden finger, and then it became a golden finger, which is useless. You have seven magatama! It's almost over! Why can't you even handle Minato and Kushina? The more I write, the more I feel that four stars is too much. . . Otsutsuki on the moon also came out. At this time, the original Otsutsuki who can use the reincarnation eye chakra mode has not been born yet. They should be using big eyeballs now, so according to this, they should not dare to go to the ninja world, right? The most likely possibility is to summon meteorites to hit the ninja world. Okay, let's just say that. There is no specific details about World War II. I don't know how to get the reputation. The protagonist is promoted to jounin and jumps up immediately. The chunin jumps directly. The excessive plot is too rough and blunt, and the plot is beyond recognition. If it continues like this, another hundred and eighty chapters should be completed, right? It is estimated that the total number of chapters does not exceed 350, which is generally unsatisfactory. Finally, I would like to say one last thing, why do the current protagonists want to change the ninja world? In the first two days, I saw someone who wanted to endure it and extinct it. Are you digging your own ancestral grave? You are a ninja, you are a vested interest, and you are also a time traveler. Your original world is modern, and you have traveled to a world where you can live forever? Wouldn't it be nice if you can practice with peace of mind and pick up Tsunade, or even go pick up Kaguya Otsutsuki? What kind of mentality do you have?
I want to know who the heroine is, preferably multiple heroines
Minato must die
Minato is disgusting, so disgusting, the protagonist is perverted
Just make fun of it, but it's boring to take it seriously.
There is nothing to say about Sasuke's talent. As for the night of the genocide, he only opened one magatama. How could a ninja student like him get so much chakra to support more than double magatama? Even that little chakra couldn't sustain even one magatama, and Sasuke never knew he had opened his eyes. The Sharingan is also supported by chakra. Don't be misled by some novels. Some ninja students just open the kaleidoscope or something like that. The moment they open their eyes, the ending can be immediate. The chakra is drained and they die.
Is Substitution Jutsu a space ninjutsu?
I don't know where the author placed 4F. Their master can fly thunder god. Since the substitute technique is space ninjutsu, wouldn't the second generation know about it? This is a real scientist. He can channel the undead and use infinite explosions. If he didn't realize that the Substitute Technique is Space Ninjutsu, then the Substitute Technique cannot be Space Ninjutsu. If the Substitute Technique is Space Ninjutsu, the students in the school will know it, but not 4F? In the final analysis, the author is out of his mind and used a blinding E-level ninjutsu to compete with the S-level Flying Thunder God. Spiritualism is the real space ninjutsu. It is better to study this directly than to study the substitute technique.
Personally don't like it
Since you are a time traveler, you should be more mature and not play with a group of children as a human being, right? You can't even pretend to be cool, you're also trash, that's enough
The character has collapsed and there is no taste of Naruto
How would you describe this book? It feels like a cover-up novel with the names of the original characters. Just the name is the same, but the characters give people a different feel. The third generation, Danzo, Orochimaru, Minato, Kushina. . . The personalities of many characters do not match the original work. It feels like they bear the names of the original characters, but their behaviors and personalities are that of another person. The essence of those characters is not written at all, so that there is an extreme lack of sense of substitution and it is very confusing. To put it simply, it has no internal flavor! Of course, this does not mean that the characters must be consistent with the original work, but at least the transformation of the characters must be a process. The novel must have the flavor of Naruto in the early stage, and then as the plot develops, it will gradually move towards the feeling of a fan story that the author wants, so that readers can enter the drama and have a sense of immersion. After all, this is a Naruto fanfic! ! ! Unfortunately, the "Naruto feeling" given by this book from the beginning is very hazy and unclear. As the plot develops, the combat power system rises and falls, a bit collapsed. It is difficult for people to identify with the protagonist's strength, especially the plot of destroying Kumogakure. Although the Third Raikage is not present, the others give people an extremely "waste" feeling. Even if the author asks the protagonist to drive a Gundam to crush Kumogakure, I will believe it! But no, just releasing the Eight-Tails made Kumogakure completely useless. . . Even the Kyuubi Rebellion did not cause Konoha to collapse so miserably. What's more, this is the Kumogakure Village after World War II. It did not participate in World War II (in this fanfic, Kumogakure did not participate). The author himself said that Kumogakure currently ranks first in strength and has vaguely surpassed Konoha. As a result, the Eight-Tails ended like this, and that's it?! The logic of combat power cannot hold water, and the protagonist's strength cannot convince readers. It seems that the protagonist is very strong, but his strength is not shocking. Instead, the protagonist is strong because everyone else is useless. Yes! That's what it feels like! Therefore, the characters do not have the essence of the original character, and coupled with the collapse of the combat power system, the novel feels very fragmented, and this becomes more and more the later.























