Fighting Through the Sky and Falling in Love

I just hope that the Qingcheng Juelian of Fighting Against the Sphere will be written better and better. 1. Judging from the author's title: Xiao Yan and Qingcheng are in love for life and death. When facing the most dangerous time, Qingcheng used her whole life's strength to let Xiao Yan merge with Qingguo Qingcheng to form the legendary divine water and fire. A new generation of continental order was created, and a harmonious and beautiful continent emerged where hundreds of schools of thought flourished. He carries the responsibility on his shoulders without flinching, but in his heart he has his own undying love - Qingcheng. 2. From the perspective of the plot: The author's idea all along is to cancel the protagonist's invincible aura, and has repeatedly emphasized the state of a hundred schools of thought. The idea is good, but the priorities are still confused. The author added many characters and relationships in the early stage, almost omitting Xiao Yan's part. In the later stage, he only wrote about the protagonist, forgetting all the characters that were foreshadowed in the early stage, or writing them as supporting roles. Typically fantasy novels are written as martial arts suspense novels. Let's take a look at the important characters: 1. Xiao Ming, Xiao Yuting, Xiao Wanqing, Xiao Yu'er, Xiao Ming, Xiao Yuting, Xiao Wanqing, Xiao Yu'er and other people who met when they first entered the mainland, as well as the team that upgraded and defeated monsters in the Xiao clan, etc., Have all been written down. It can also be said that in the Lingzhou chapter, the three major families have not been written since Xiao Yan came out of Lingzhou. Later, when he came back to detoxify and take care of them, they were all mentioned in one stroke. In the early stage, I focused so much on the sisters Xiao Wanqing, thinking they were involved in a love dispute, and the Xue family, Xue Xun'er, who was one-third of Qingcheng's characters, was also written off. 2. In the early stage, a series of characters in the Lan family were completely written according to the protagonists, and then they either failed or were not written at all. Murong Qingcheng - As the woman who attracted Xiao Yan's heart in the Creation Continent, as the heir to Qingcheng's pure heart, she was also written in the early stage and then disappeared. This book focuses on the two strategic characters: Wise Fox and Cunning Rabbit. They were so powerful in the early stage, but disappeared later and ceased to function. The author can actually write it from the perspective of the protagonist Xiao Yan, and use the main plot to drive the branch plots. It can not only take care of the protagonist Xiao Yan, but also take into account other angles. They can develop together, increase Xiao Yan's adventures, increase auctions, add some adventures, and some evacuations. Write these characters and the new characters and various relationships. 3. Xiao Yan's confidante: 1. Yun Yun: Only after reading the later part did I know that she had a chance encounter with the God of Music and he was her apprentice. Why should I introduce what happened? We are all Dou Shen's apprentices, can we be stronger? . . . . . At least it has something unique. 2. Nalan: The author wants to change her love for Yan Xiao and give her a destination. Now that Yun Yun has come to Jingxin City to become the master of the palace, should she also follow her teacher Yun Yun? I feel like I have disappeared 3. The Little Doctor: The author completely made Xiao Yan's most important confidante in the fight and the one who least wanted to express his feelings, the poisonous body with whom they have been together for the longest time made into the most ordinary character. There was not even any dialogue about being alone, and it was completely written out. . . . . . 4. Ziyan: As the Taixu Ancient Dragon, the Dragon King only appeared as a bodyguard. . . . . . . 4. Xiao Yan's wife: 1. Childhood sweetheart Gu Xun'er: As one-third of Qingcheng's characters, she is a character who can directly communicate with Qingcheng's teacher. It felt like she went from the Emperor Spirit Mirror to the Immortal Spirit Mirror overnight, but she failed immediately and even lost her soul. . . . . . At least it's okay for now, and he finally returned in his soul state when Xiao Yan was in the Fairy Spirit Mirror. But at least he is no longer the protagonist. . . . . . 2. Cai Lin: Nine-color sky-swallowing python, okay, I won't say more, it is also a supporting role, I will mention it in a few words. . . . . 3. In fact, I pay a lot of attention to Xiao Xiao, but it is a pity that it is mentioned in one sentence. At least I have to write about Cai Lin and her adventures, experiences, and profound training in the demon clan to find the one she loves (husband/father)-Xiao Yan. 3. Let's talk about the protagonist - Xiao Yanyi: First of all, the soul is a person from the Blue Planet, so he has the memory of two lives, and has been tempered on the Dou Qi Continent. In order to save his master, relatives, father and people he cares about since he was young, the Dou Zhe has gone through too many hardships, and step by step he has become the Emperor Yan - Xiao Yan. No matter how strong he is on the Creation Continent, at least the character he has accumulated over a long period of time will not change. He is calm and unique, not impulsive, and has his own personality charm. No matter how weak his strength is, he does give people an admirable spirit. In the early stage, the author directly wrote a person who did not understand the ways of the world, acted on his own impulse, and did things without thinking. . . . . . I hope I can change. I can be beaten and abused but I will never admit defeat. I am an admirable hero. 2. Soul realm: There should be a clear hierarchical realm. Rather than having the same fighting spirit level. The author describes the Emperor's peak soul as having two purposes. Then it can be written that the soul of the Emperor's Supreme Peak is just the starting point, and can be divided into four stages: Emperor Mirror - Immortal Mirror - Heart Mirror - Divine Mirror. 2. Clan pattern: Xiao Clan's nine-stroke family pattern (dark red). At least the function of the clan crest should be introduced - the Three Mysterious Transformations of Heavenly Fire: after obtaining the clan crest, there is no need to use it anymore. Borrowing Sky Fire can completely bring out the strength of the Three Mysterious Transformations of Sky Fire, but it can be mastered at each stage (first level, second level, third level) by virtue of the clan pattern, but the advantage is that it will not be weak. This point is clear. The author wrote that the secret method still has the three mysterious changes of heaven and fire. . . . . . 3. Xiao Yan bloodline: a unique bloodline formed by the fusion of Xiao clan bloodline, ancient clan bloodline, and dragon and phoenix bloodline. Nature has a special role. 4. Medicine Cauldron: The author has written more than 2 million words. Has Medicine Cauldron ever been used? Does it serve as an introduction? I haven't used it yet, so why am I a level 5 alchemist? ? At least, we should write more about refining medicines. Up to now, we have only written about mermaid essence and blood and other very few things. We have basically not written about them. It can be said that we have not written down the names of medicinal materials, how precious they are, their functions, and their locations. Not only that, there are not even a few prescriptions, at least they are effective. We need to write more about elixir recipes, medicinal materials, medicine cauldrons, and alchemist conferences. Since the protagonist is so weak, refining medicine is even more difficult. There are many medicinal materials, elixir recipes, exercises, elixirs, etc. In the auction. The author has written in one stroke the first level, then the second level, and then the fifth level. This requires a process. . . . . . If you write more, you will naturally know how the immortal alchemist achieves a breakthrough. . . . . . The elixirs in this book have no names. . They all flew out. . . . At least it has to be refined. . . . . Five: Weapons and equipment based on Tudou: 1. Xuan Zhong Ruler: given to his apprentice Xiao Yan by his mentor Yao Lao, it is made of flame black iron. It is extremely hard and heavy and has the magical effect of suppressing fighting spirit. 2. Skill: Burning Technique: It is an unnamed technique that Yao Chen obtained in the ancient cave. Later Yao Lao named this mysterious technique "Burning Technique". The original Fen Jue was only a low-level Huang-level technique, but it can be advanced by swallowing strange fires. After devouring the Pure Lotus demon fire, it evolved into a heaven-level advanced skill and merged with the twenty-two different fires of Dou Qi Continent to form "Emperor Yan". The author only mentioned the integration of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor Flame, and then advanced to the Emperor level technique, but nothing more after that. The effects of each type of sky fire will be superimposed after the fusion. They have special functions and special colors. The author did not write about them. Sky fire is the essence of this book. There must be a sky fire list. Since the author has added the battle of water and fire, there must be a sky water list. So what is the superimposed effect of merging sky fire and sky water, attack, defense and retreat? It is necessary to use a special function when it is, rather than after fusion, it is useless to improve the strength. The Water and Fire Combination Technique should at least be an advanced technique. The author has never introduced this technique. After fusing the sky, fire and water, water and fire can be compatible with each other, water can bring fire, and fire can bring water, complementing each other. Self-created fighting skills: Buddha's Wrath Fire Lotus → Buddha's Wrath Reincarnation → Buddha's Wrath Emperor Flame Lotus (this is Tudou's own creation). At least Xiao Yan is constantly improving and innovating at every stage. The author said that there is a sky fire in the middle and a sky water on the side to form a dying fire lotus. At least it is a world with the terrifying heat of heavenly fire and the overbearing coldness of heavenly water. When a beautiful lotus comes out, it is a heaven of ice and fire. Its power depends on the author's ideas. Dragon and Phoenix Ancient Armor: A self-defense skill obtained by injecting dragon and phoenix essence and blood into Xiao Yan's body from Zi Yan. It is a self-defense skill exclusive to ancient dragon masters, and is also one of the most powerful armors in the world. The author probably forgot this. . . . . . Flame Emperor Body: A fighting skill that can only be used after becoming a Dou Emperor. Taking heaven and earth into the body, its power is unpredictable. The author also forgot. . . . . Strange Fire Ancient Ruler: The fighting skill used by Xiao Yan after entering the Dou Emperor. Its power is comparable to the Soul Emperor's Emperor-killing Ghost Blood Blade. It is a mysterious thing that exists in the ancient times. Even the ancient strong people can rarely see it. It is a legendary fighting skill. It is summoned by 22 kinds of strange fires and then kills the Soul Emperor. This is a fighting skill, and the author has written it into a weapon. .

It took me a few days to read it during the Chinese New Year. I wrote a book review when it was 300 chapters long ago! But after Xun'er died, I discovered that this book can still be read! The main plot resurrects Xun'er! Branch line: fight monsters and upgrade; form a group I have a few suggestions: Make some medicine! Let's do the auction! Work on your skills! Do the exercises! Now that there are more pupil skills, ice blood, etc.! The author can do it too! And there is a particularly unformed idea. Since the clone has attacks and skills, why can't the clone cultivate? Xiao Yan can separate and practice together, double his growth, and do all kinds of tricks. Yanxian should also have his own skills😘 There is another unformed idea: In addition to the fire attribute, the Flame Immortal also has the wood attribute: Can you do something about the wood attribute? After all, whether it's a potato or a potato, I haven't seen any description of the wood attribute so far! Support authors to build groups and expand their influence, and don't be afraid of being criticized! There are countless people who criticize potatoes😘

Many people's comments are that Xun'er is dead and the heroine is dead. There is nothing good to watch anymore! With all due respect, is Xun'er the heroine? Qingcheng is absolutely in love, is Qingcheng empty? Also, this author is not Tudou, nor is he the author of Fighting to Break the Sphere, nor is he a follow-up! Why must there be more characters from the past? Xiao Yan came here after becoming Emperor Yan. Is it possible that he wants all those people to be like this? Isn't it okay that the important people like Cai Lin and other heroines are already here? Don't be too greedy! What's more, since it's a new book filled with old people, do you want this book to always live in the shadows? If you want to give advice, it should be good advice. For example, if there are too many families, some people and some series should be a little more detailed. It doesn't matter if it's longer! I feel like the current progress is good, but it's a bit too fast! Many people were killed when the Blood Tomb appeared before they could show off their skills. It was a pity, and this should be what many people found depressing! Although the plan cannot keep up with the changes, those who are still alive can write more exciting stories about them in the future. For example, Xiao Wanting of the Xiao Clan, she is not in Holy Spirit City... She should not be dead! The Cunning Rabbit and the others have all appeared before, and have gone into seclusion with the Qi Sect. The Lan Family Xuantian and the others are waiting!

I hope the author can resurrect Xun'er and write more about the original characters. The first part is just to leave foreshadowing, and it should be updated a little faster.

Resurrect Xun'er

Fine. The update speed is a bit too much

I read this book mainly because of the fantastic ideas of Tianhuo Tianshui. The idea is very good, and it can also be said that this is the essence of Dou Po Cang Qiong. But the author estimates that he has not even thought about the names of each of the 20 types of Heavenly Fire and Heavenly Water, and what are their functions? And since it can be fused, what is its function? What is the effect? Didn't think it through either. Although the top few Tianhuo and Tianshui can be mysterious and even legendary, and it is understandable that they do not explain it, the following ones must be explained clearly. The Tianhuo and Tianshui that the super powers must compete for must have someone introduce them to the Tianhuo Ranking and Tianshui Ranking. Currently, the Heavenly Fire and Heavenly Water that Xiao Yan has mastered only introduces the function of the Fallen Star Flame, which is to summon flying stones from the sky, restore the stars, cover the spirit-killing aura, and detoxify the purifying water. Nothing else was explained. Water of life? Bone Ghost Fire [completely unaware of its function]? Tuoshe Gudi Yan is still effective even though it is fused? As for the fusion technique, the author has a good idea. Based on the Burning Jue, he has expanded the Metamorphosis Jue and the Water-Fire Regeneration Jue, but what is its function? As we all know, Burning Technique can fuse flames, complete the synthesis of flames, advance skills, and improve strength. It can be said that it is the most exciting part every time when it is fused, and the author rarely writes about it. I also forgot about the advancement of skills. It can be said that the Burning Technique is the main skill of the protagonist, so starting from the Blood Tomb Chapter, the Water and Fire Technique will be the main skill of the protagonist. But with the fusion of Sky Fire and Sky Water, the author only introduces the improvement of strength. What other effects and functions were not mentioned? Since the self-created fighting technique is also based on Tudou's and is fused into Water and Fire Lotus, its effect must be stronger than Burning Technique. It was only mentioned in the early stage that Burning Technique evolves into the Emperor level and there is no relevant introduction. Xiao Yan's attack in this book only uses water and fire lotus, and only uses sky fire, and only flames. The special function only uses summoning flying rocks. Tianshui is useless in Xiao Yan's hands? Sky Fire is at least innovative and has a special effect on medicine training, thus creating a new realm for level 6 medicine practitioners. It can be said that the dual cultivation mentioned in this book is really difficult, and I have barely managed to practice medicine. It can be said that the author wrote too many seductions and fights, and lost the core things, heavenly fire and heavenly water.

Let Xun'er be resurrected, give me a thumbs up if you agree

Although your writing of Xiao Yan is not as good as Tudou's, and there are very few scenes where Cai Lin appears, I have tolerated all of this. The only thing that I can't bear is that you actually wrote Xun'er to death. If you want this book to become more and more popular, then the author I give you a suggestion is to resurrect Xun'er, because everyone hopes to resurrect Xun'er, so please meet everyone's request.

There are a lot of typos here. Are you a student?