Mortal: Zhang Tie's Skilled Panel

The first little poison point is 0. He often murmurs to himself and laughs like a child. The second major poisonous point This is the biggest poisonous point of mortal fan fiction. . Han Li doesn't know the function of the little green bottle yet, so you just said it directly, and Han Li will laugh later. . The author wrote that the idiot was just waiting for the Moju people to kill Han Li, but it was not you who killed him, so the plot correction will be fine and you can get the little green bottle. The third little poisonous point: You know it on the third card (standing)? ? How old is he? He didn't know until around 16 years old. Han Li didn't know about the Changchun Kung Fu until later, and it was previously called the Unnamed Kung Fu. Fourth Don't write so much when giving blessings through the practice system. It's too dramatic. Just go to the end and write one sentence, and it's enough to practice to a few percent. With your way of writing, how many numbers can you write in 1 million words? 5Th Your three spiritual roots can enter the sect normally. Even if there is no Immortal Conference now, there is no need to rush. Slowly cultivate now (16th level) and 18 years old. If you add the system, you will be at the 13th level. Your target is the Foundation Establishment Pill. That couple of bitches haven't entered the sect yet. Where did you get the Foundation Establishment Pill? I had to forcefully write this plot, and I entered a dangerous place like the Foreign Affairs Hall. The protagonist mumbles to himself, shakes his head and often laughs out loud. Can't he find other words to replace it? So dramatic, so childish. You can't even see the protagonist until later (the growth of mature IQ)

Author, you don't want to write that the devil can't defeat Yue, right? Wouldn't this be too unreasonable? In the later period, Yuanying was in charge, and there were still many Yuanyings who attacked the Yue Kingdom together. It is impossible for Yue country not to lose its family and people!

The author's sister is pregnant. Jiejiejie

The front foot relies on the two levels of Elephant Armor to jump and run, and the back foot has just broken through the two levels of talent😕

You don't have to work as cannon fodder with the Ascension Order. It's simply not your golden finger. You can practice on your own to the 12-13th level of Qi training and use the Ascension Order to join directly. Isn't it more convenient? You can also learn to draw talismans on your own outside. Proficiency is not just about practicing skills.

I don't know if I'm still practicing the Elephant Armor Kung Fu, which has such serious side effects.

When I first started watching, I gave it four stars. The qualifications of the Three Spiritual Roots. I remember that the Immortal Ascension Conference seems to be enough to be qualified to join the seven sects normally. Why should I join the Foreign Affairs Hall as a casual cultivator? Moreover, the Foreign Affairs Hall has a very high casualty rate. This is a bit to force the plot for the sake of the plot. It is not very logical. It is just as normal to join the sect for Chen Qiaoqian's Foundation Establishment Pill.

I don't know why, but the protagonist doesn't take it hard, even if he has the chance.

Update it, update it, update it, update it

It's so well written, I feel it's much better than the average fanfic.