Huang Xiu

Can Huang Shirong stop writing, and don't accept others, just keep describing how beautiful and thin her waist is. Very disgusting

The royal family also writes so innocently and romantically, as if they are a family of 250. The character of the protagonist is not likeable either. I didn't see any deliberate moves, only submissiveness. There is no decisive killing. All I saw was an old protagonist with no fighting spirit. You are not suitable to write about a protagonist who practices royal skills. It's better to write about gangsters, but the main mentality is wrong. The protagonists you write are too homogeneous. To be honest, this reflects some of the author's own personality, and you can't jump out of it.

The more you go to the back, the more outrageous it becomes. It has always been written that the emperor has to show courtesy even if the Grand Master is so powerful. There are only 19 members of the entire royal family, but in the end, more than 20 people were killed casually. What is even more outrageous is that the Grand Master is not strong enough to lift a real poison.

I didn't believe it was that bad, but I realized that it was a Buddhist novel. It was a bit frustrating and not good to read.

It's unremarkable, there's too much nonsense, it's all nonsense, it's useless, every class has the Ninth Heaven, what a joke, the Grandmaster also has the Ninth Heaven? Look at the upgrade speed, there are thousands of them.

The combat power is a little bit broken. At the beginning, the innates were all very good. A group of princes and grandsons struggled to become innates. Later, the innates were not as good as dogs. Grandmasters crawled all over the floor. The grandmaster in his twenties written earlier seems to be astonishing, but the following masters have no threshold at all. The younger sister who has not practiced martial arts formally for a year or two has become a grandmaster directly. The younger sister must be 16 or 17 years old. We still don't know how our combat power will collapse in the future. There will definitely be more parallel import masters than dogs...

It's not bad, it's good enough. The plot is reasonable. The protagonist's IQ and golden finger logic are online. The emotional aspects are handled well. It's not the type that makes people feel that their IQ is insulted.

The small world view is okay, but it is too holy. A person who pursues immortality is like a nanny. The emperor refuses to give up his position and renounces his own practice. Why don't you mess with him? The clone is too detached and out of touch with the main body. A large number of plots are written about the clone, without any mention of the changes in the main body. Water word count? Furthermore, the emperor of the big world is also a fool? What bullshit arrangement, a son-in-law, rebirth, the whole country will perish if you leave it? Licking a dog!

Happy Mid-Autumn Festival to everyone! I wish you all have love in your heart and light in your eyes every day! Be happy every day!

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