The Title of the Book "full-time Master" is "floating Clouds

Just write it. You didn't even write down what others liked. (￣ Ii ￣;) Suck slip (￣＂￣;) Look at your introduction. No one dares to enter. Time-travel articles are all cool articles. But you don't have this. You don't have the fighting aspect either. This is a game article. It's boring if there is no fighting. I haven't read it yet, so I read two. Time travel to full-time. At the very least, you have to be a professional player. If you don't have this requirement, no one will read it. At least you can show your face in the All-Star Game. If you can't write battle scenes, you can't write them. Then go for entertainment. If you can't write it, there are still relatively few full-time male protagonists. But I'm giving you a suggestion. If you can write the battle scenes, there will be no difference. If you want to write a fantasy novel, it won't work. And you should at least be a professional player and have a lot of fans like Fighting God. But your introduction scares them away. If you really love Glory, then just write it in the way I said. If you are willing to write, there will only be more people to read. Otherwise, others will say that you have no system. At least the protagonist will be able to grow up. Alas, there are too few people who write full-time. I only have one long comment for you.

Updated! That's great, I don't know how I persisted

Finally updated! ! ! I like this article so much, Xiao Xu's character is so close to my heart❤, I like it! ! ! !

There is no bright spot and a few random things are made up. Can't read

What does this book say? Fans. Let's just say it's original. You haven't created anything original. When it comes to game competition, you always end it right after you start it, and it's Ye Qiu's way of killing you, right? Let's not talk about this, after all, not everyone has the experience and talent to write fights. Let's talk about the plot. I feel that you are just a supporter when you are reborn, making Ye Qiu look more powerful. As a union under a professional player? You know you can pretend not to know, and if someone wants to recruit you, just let them do it? Say a lot and no one will guess that you know you? Are they mentally retarded? You are still mentally retarded. The same goes for brushing a copy. It will definitely exceed the limit? What's your technique? It's YY level technology. I don't even know how to make a copy. It seems that he was the first one to fuck Ye Qiu after his rebirth, right? Forget it, I'm too lazy to say it. When I come back from rebirth, just brush up the original work and add a passerby to enter? Interesting. There is no intention of competing at all. . Whoever returns it will definitely not be able to beat him. Then you can just provide for your retirement.

I hope the author can distinguish the main and supporting roles clearly

You are no longer the bitch you are, and you haven't updated it yet, so love will disappear, right?

Please update me. The flowers I've been waiting for have all faded, and I'm just like that lying rat.

Salted fish🐠is alive again! ! ! ! !

So what kind of feeling can make the protagonist act cool in the All-Star Game?