Law Enforcement Officer

I scrolled through the comment area and found that there are still people talking. To be honest, I am quite happy. Thank you all readers for your love. The most common comment I read is that the author is curious as to why he didn't say a word and didn't make a sound even after it was put on the shelves. Ha, to be honest, when it was 200,000 words, the editor looked at the backend data and informed me, "It can be cut. Let's change it to a different theme." I have actually studied fast-paced cool writing before, and I tried to apply those plots when writing this book, but I found that I just couldn't write that thing, haha. I can only write this kind of slow stuff, and I feel quite comfortable writing it, so I didn't plan to cut the text and focus on a rebellious character. Then a few days ago, I saw the editor asking me, "Aren't you going to put it on the shelves?" I thought to myself, if I wasn't asked to cut the article, it could still be put on the shelves? I asked him if he could go on board, and then he went on board... Unsurprisingly, the first order was sold out, but writing this thing is equivalent to finding a place to hang out and have fun. I am very satisfied if there are so many brothers who can follow the fun hehe (Thanks again to those brothers and sisters who patiently watch my nonsense every day). Let's talk about this subject. I usually can't sleep on high-speed trains or planes when I'm on a business trip, so I specifically found some hypnotic novel audios to listen to. Well, this is why I fell in love with the Cthulhu Mythos inexplicably (some of Lovecraft's books are really hypnotic). Then I thought, with such a grand and mysterious worldview and rich setting materials, why not use them, so I started writing this book. Oh yes, and there are also the old friends who give rewards. When I was fishing at work, I saw a pop-up on my phone saying "You have received 500 starting coins from a handsome guy." I was always happy haha ​​(how cool is that? It's even better than going to the Fun House). However, the function of thanking fans in the background of the software has been stuck and cannot be used. Maybe I don't know how to use it, haha, so I would like to express my thanks here to all the friends who give rewards! Line up and one person will give you a pout. Don't crowd the people behind you, they all have a share. PS. All the above content was originally intended to be written in the "Author's Notes" in the next chapter. As I was writing and writing, I found that there was only 500 words to write there, which was not enough for me to write, so I changed it to the comment area. It is really a big deal, and the comment area is also good.

I originally thought it was quite attractive, but the problem is that the author didn't handle the details well. I am not discriminating against the region. The author himself writes a Western-style fantasy novel, but his entire dialogue is full of northern-flavored local expressions. For example: what, whole, big tiger pussy, etc., There are many more that I can't remember at the moment, but anyway, I can tell at a glance that they are the author's own dialect. I have no problem with dialects, but, my author, you must be worthy of your own work, right? Your own setting is a Western-style weird detective style, so you should write it carefully and control the details well, and don't speak in dialect all day long. If there are more dramas, there will be more dramas. You can either write about the folk weirdness of the Northeast. For example, if you travel to the Northeast and there is a weird incident, what is the whole thing in your dialect?

Like the title, some people may say it is a slow-burning style, but you must first let the readers have the patience to read on. The protagonist is either being screwed or is on the way to being screwed. He almost relies on conspiracy and trickery to solve the problem. Your introduction sounds very awesome, but almost all of them are insulted by mortal NPCs. The author intends to write a mysterious masterpiece, but the hardware is not up to standard, which makes people impatient to read on. It may be that I don't read much.

The main character is really mean. He was repeatedly humiliated by a woman with no intelligence and still enjoyed it. I don't know why I wrote it like this, for fear of others reading it.

The writing style is okay, at least it's readable, and there's nothing too toxic about it. But the title of your book is seriously inconsistent with the introduction. You should make it clear that this is a mortal detective novel, exploring the Church of the Gramps, and you are also targeting the law enforcement officers. The Gramps and law enforcement officers have nothing to do with each other. It makes it feel like the law enforcement officer is a geek, otherwise I wouldn't have come in to take a look. Mystery novels in which a mortal detective relies on dreams to solve crimes are really terrible. What I hate reading the most are crime-solving and mystery novels.

The plot is too awkward to advance, and it all depends on the supporting characters to bring wisdom? In this context of the church's suppression, the protagonist is just a smart person? Do you still rely on early warnings in dreams? How about playing?

It's not good-looking, the relationship is a bit forceful and awkward, and the hero's character is, well, not good.

Which genius came up with this function of commenting after XX minutes of reading? Hahahaha, this is not much more practical than IP display (laugh)

Readers a, b, c, d. A: "I heard that Milo is here. He is a guard." B: "Which guard is always suspected of being a suspect and pushed back and forth?" A: "No! I heard that he is also an executive of the Raushzik family!" B: "Even if he is still a "gram executive", he is just an executive who is pushed here and there! Hahaha!" A, B, C, D: "Hahahahahahaha!" "

The protagonist is disgusting, the plot is disgusting, and the personnel are also disgusting