Lord Harland

The level is unclear. The skill level, simple archery, can now target people in Chapter 7 and 4. If you reach level 9, you won't be able to become a god. With 15 points of strength (one point of strength is 50 kilograms), if you hit someone with 7 or 8 points of strength, your hands will only be slightly numb. Don't say that others didn't use their full strength. If you can make one move on the battlefield, who can make the second move? I want to engage in legion style, but I am afraid that my personal force will be too strong. Open a single chapter and write down clearly the skill level, character level, and legion level.

Since you choose to write a Western fantasy, you should be serious about it and don't do anything for personal gain. This is not Blue Star, it is another rule. Existence is reasonable, so don't write about flowers. Western fantasy books don't care about crabs, so don't rush and follow the Blue Star rules!

It is written like a running account and lacks a sense of picture.

Seeing 155 to 156, the protagonist is like a lunatic, with all kinds of anti-metaphysics, all kinds of scientific explanations, all kinds of scientific linking metaphysics, the protagonist is still anti-self and anti-posterity things, a super holy mother, all kinds of sacrifices for their own interests, the income of farmers is higher than that of other urban citizens, the protagonist also popularizes breathing magic, popularizes enlightened thought and culture In this setting, the protagonist will not be a human being at all. His stepmother and father hold a banquet to increase his reputation, but the protagonist feels that it is too extravagant. He thinks that his group of wealthy farmers are too miserable and they have to increase wages, provide benefits, and reduce taxes. The protagonist thinks that he will also overthrow his parents' banquet after becoming a family. Summary: The protagonist is an unfaithful, unjust and unfilial person. He looks down on his parents, his own class, and his descendants. I have never seen such a shameless person.

Very poisonous. I really don't know how the author wrote it, suppressing the protagonist at every turn, and it feels like the rules are specifically for the protagonist.

It should be changed to start from the knights to unify the continent, so more people will watch. Time travelers cannot be people's subordinates. Time travelers should bring freedom to ordinary people.

It's not good-looking, even worse than the previous one. The characters in this book have no emotions, and they all speak in the same tone.

Is this book going to be finished? Is the author still alive?

The book is a good book, but all the good things are given to his wife and a father who doesn't like him? I'm speechless (#-.-). I don't care about Bai's own strength at all. I feel that the protagonist's strength is all the trump card given by the former time traveler. Otherwise, it's really frustrating.

This book is so addictive. You have cheats but don't use them. You give them away when you get good equipment. I have changed the outline several times. There is still no outline. I write wherever I think of it.