The Bandit of the Ming Dynasty

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Within the red line is Zhao Camp's current approximate actual control area.

This book is indeed one of the better history books I have come across in recent years. The IQs of the protagonists, supporting characters, and enemies are all online. The characters are full-bodied and three-dimensional. The story is smooth and readable. There is no blind climbing on the technological tree. It mainly relies on planning strategies. During the reading process, it can be seen that the author has a very deep foundation in the history of the Ming and Qing Dynasties, and the story is still very reasonable. However, I will talk about a few points that I feel are insufficient. I am a bit superficial. Please forgive me for any offense! 1. Emotional description, to be honest, this part makes me feel very embarrassed. I think the author may be deeply influenced by romance novels and TV series, and uses many description techniques from romance novels. I feel that this kind of writing method in a historical novel that is relatively tough and passionate as a whole seriously weakens the toughness and grandeur of the character. When it comes to the emotional description part, I feel that the character's emotional intelligence is low and the character's personality is weakened. I will try my best to use Qiong Yao-style writing in the future. I have long been disgusted by this kind of writing. 2. Regarding the choice of the principal wife of Pig's Foot Zhao, I think the author's choice was seriously wrong. As a person who is determined to compete for the world, it is very important to choose the principal wife. It must not only provide critical assistance, but also not because the background of the principal wife is too deep, otherwise it will seriously affect the stability of the future regime. For example, if Pig's Foot finally usurps the throne, what should be done with so many royal descendants of the Zhu family dynasty? When taking drastic measures, will you encounter interference from the principal? ? Affect family stability? ? This is an obvious problem. In addition, the problem of relatives intervening in politics is expected to be prominent in the future. For example, after usurping the throne and appointing a prince, if the son of the royal family is not successful, if you want to consider re-enrolling him, you will encounter a lot of resistance. Some ministers who have Ming Dynasty ambitions will definitely object fiercely! For important politicians, nothing is a trivial matter, including family affairs, because if the family affairs are not handled properly, it is likely to affect the political stability. In addition, the marriage of the ministers and generals under them does not mean that you have romantic free love. Sometimes pig's feet are needed to intervene, such as granting marriages. Whoever marries whom among their subordinates will have a great impact on the future political situation! ! ! 3. Regarding the description of human nature, we can see that the author's description of human nature is very successful in the description of famous figures in history, because there are historical books for reference. However, the description of human nature of the characters created by the author is very weak, such as pig's feet, not greedy for money, not lustful, loyal, generous, etc. The image of the characters is biased toward Gao Daquan, Yang Zhaofeng, etc., All of which lack the in-depth exploration of human nature, resulting in the description of human nature being vivid, but superficial! 4. Regarding the issue of checks and balances in the power structure, there is a lack of clear explanation. Without checks and balances, power will be unbalanced. Unbalanced power will definitely bring negative consequences. The author repeatedly mentioned a slogan: For Zhao Ying! To put it bluntly, it was for the sake of the collective. I think this slogan was very hollow in the environment at that time, and it was even a high-profile one. In the power structure of pig's feet, many people had a very low cultural level. Many people participated in the uprising just to get promoted and get rich and marry a spoiled wife. I think it is necessary for the author to specifically explain the issue of checks and balances of power. Looking at it now, it gives the impression that the people in Zhaoying are of high quality, everyone is obedient, does whatever they are told, and does not fight for power or gain. But does the author think about the reality? ? Too idealistic! 5. Regarding the development in the later period, I feel that there are no ups and downs in the later development. This is a very dangerous signal. If once it falls into the crushing flow, the readability of the work will be greatly weakened. For example, now we can basically defeat the elite troops of King Chuang, but will we have to defeat the Tatar troops again in the future? ? If it really becomes an invincible flow, readers' interest in reading will quickly decrease! If the author thinks what I said makes sense, you can leave me a message, and we can also add WeChat to communicate privately! Of course, I'm also very sorry. I didn't order all of this book and read some pirated copies. Please forgive me!

The title of the book has been changed from "The Legend of Peking Flying Dragon" to "The Bandit of the Ming Dynasty". I hope book friends will recognize the title and not get lost!

The military deployment of both sides in the first stage of the battle can be roughly scaled to 1:50000, for reference only.

This plot is just like shit. You can understand it when you think about it. Why are you pretending to be a grandson?