The Master of Mystical Arts

How did this score get so high? Terrible writing.

I can't stand this awful book. I hope the protagonist's family gets killed by someone else. I hope he can be at peace with it and not seek revenge.

Overall, it's still good, but there are too many typos and some suggestive parts. Listening to audiobooks in a crowded place can be quite awkward.

Too many typos, irresponsible.

This main character is completely out of their mind, incredibly stupid! They're terrible at the game yet love to play.

This is illogical. For an old man, a shrewd and experienced elder, and a master of Taoism, to decide to forcibly interfere in someone else's karma based solely on one side of the story is tantamount to transferring that karma onto himself. He deserves the backlash.

It was clearly a three-year journey, so why is it described as a one-year journey?

A master of divination! A young hero! An outstanding individual! A role model for the world!

How do I write it in the third person?

There were too many typos; I had to guess and read it halfway.