The Master of Mystical Arts

How did this score increase? Bad writing

I can't stand this crappy book. I hope the protagonist's family members are killed by others. He can also be more open-minded and don't take revenge.

Overall, it's a good read, but there are too many typos and slurs. It's very embarrassing to listen to the book when there are many people.

Too many typos, irresponsible

The protagonist looks like his brain is filled with water, he can be so stupid! He is good at cooking and also likes to play.

It seems very illogical. As an old man who has matured with age and is still an expert in Taoism, he only listened to one side of the story and decided to forcibly intervene in other people's #karma, that is, to transfer the cause and effect to himself. I deserve to be bitten back.

It was obviously a three-year trip. How can you say it was a one-year trip?

Qimen fortune teller! Young hero! Outstanding! A role model for the world!

How to write in third person?

There are too many typos, half-guessing and half-reading