The Master of Mystical Arts

Those who gave it a bad review probably only read a dozen or so chapters. The protagonist is still a child at the beginning, so of course it needs to be written in a childish style, but there are a few typos.

The ending wasn't perfect; the little fox died, and the fates of those around her weren't clearly explained. However, the plot was still acceptable.

Good deeds bring good rewards, and evil deeds bring evil consequences. This book encourages people to do good and walk the righteous path. A good book!

Firstly, this book is written in a very childish style, focusing on the protagonist's experiences from childhood to adulthood. I advise you fellow readers that a book like this is either a masterpiece or utterly worthless.

The writing is good, but unfortunately there are too many typos.

The ending wasn't perfect; the little fox died, and the fates of the others are unclear. We didn't see Zhao Ying's later regrets, but overall it was good. Thank you for your hard work!

Such childish writing style, it's not interesting to read, I'm dropping it.

Probably a newbie I believe you can write even better.

The beginning is somewhat like an essay.

It looks pretty good.