Sword of Coming: From the Start, Fishing in the Dragon Pearl Grotto-Heaven

So far, it's really well-written, better than other similar works. Comparing it to other works, yours is better; it doesn't feel like a system-based story. I feel it's better to avoid that here; a system-based text story would be better. A little bit of a cheat system is much better than a system-based one. Also, the updates are slow.

Stealing the protagonist's wife is disgusting; they profit from fanfiction and then force history into the readers' mouths.

There's no need to snatch Ning Yao, right? Don't you know that having a female lead in a fanfiction is a major taboo?

You can read it if you haven't read the original work, but some timelines will be messed up if you have. Did you write this based on the anime? I haven't watched the anime.

Yun Shu's story ends here. Thank you for reading, and see you in the next story.

Isn't this just simply stuffing Chen Ping'an's storyline onto the protagonist, and then changing the plot slightly?

How could Ruan Xiu leave Lizhu Cave Heaven so easily? How could she conceal the secrets of heaven? Even Jian Ma needed the lotus leaf given to her by Qi Jingchun to leave.

Without Chen Ping'an, is it still Sword Comes? That's complete nonsense.

The only feeling is that it's much faster.

A lump of writing by Chen Ping'an (with a cover).