Sword of Coming: From the Start, Guarding the Sword Qi Great Wall

Not bad, not bad, but the most important thing is to give it a more perfect ending. I'm feeling a little itchy.

This is a major conflict with Ah Liang.

It's good, but it would be great if you could keep writing.

Honestly, chapter 33 is absolutely toxic. If you're going to write a satisfying story, you should make it enjoyable from beginning to end. But then suddenly Chunhua gets raped, her clothes are torn off, she's on top of him, and you're feeding her red stones halfway through the enjoyment? Even if the male lead doesn't accept it, she's still a supporting female character, right?

The ending felt weird and abrupt; I suggest adding a side story.

All I can say is that it looks like a satisfying, wish-fulfillment story.

Dear author, you could first carefully examine the personalities of each character in the original novel, then create a fan fiction outline to speculate on each character's thoughts and choices. Also, in the world of Sword Comes, the laws of heaven and earth wouldn't allow such powerful natal flying swords or weapons to appear due to killing intent and malevolent energy.

It felt a bit short, but it was still okay.

It's terrible. The protagonist doesn't deserve this name. Contact them to change it.

It was good, I loved watching it, it's just a pity it's over.