The Spirit Spring by My Side

There is a huge gap between the previous one and this one. Abandon the pit.

After reading the author's last novel, I still feel that after finishing this novel, it ended hastily, which is far different from the previous one.

The male protagonist is too holy, the whole plot is very frustrating, the spiritual spring he carries with him is useless, no matter how much money he has, he has no ability to protect himself, he deserves to be beaten half to death by others, there are so many springs, but he doesn't know how to strengthen his body, practice martial arts, Mo Laosan, interrupt, I have accepted the revenge of this leg and haven't avenged it, and the same goes for the prison, someone rides on the head and poops, it is like a sick cat, a tiger can't show its power.

If it is brought out at will without paying a price, then given the protagonist's age of twenty and the city, it is easy for the protagonist to reveal abnormalities and easily cause trouble for the protagonist.

Exchange visits!!! I came to visit with my works "Four Universes in the Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying" and "The Chaos of the Universe". The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword can split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. The ax shook the eight directions and leveled the nine continents, hammering the sky and thundering on the earth. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. My writing skills are a bit weak, and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide, visit and help each other, and give you advice. I am very grateful...

Just scribbling, the cheapest blue crab costs more than 100 yuan per catty. Are there blue crabs in the northwest that cost tens of yuan per catty? The blue crabs are all live, I didn't see any frozen ones!

If you write like this, eighteen generations of your ancestors will jump out.

Exchange visits!!! I came to visit with my works "Four Universes in the Sky", "Xia Feng Zhan Ying", and "The Chaos of the World". The sword has been passed down through the ages with the industry, and the sword can split the world in troubled times. The spear moves vertically and horizontally like a dot of ink, and the stick sweeps down the demons in all directions. The steel whip that subdues demons shakes the five mountains, and the halberd is opened in two months and thousands of enemies are attacked. The ax sweeps the world like a whirlwind, and the hook cuts off all impermanent karma and eliminates it. The ax shook the eight directions and leveled the nine continents, hammering the sky and thundering on the earth. From now on, no one is lucky enough in the world, and warriors from all over the world have entered the world. My writing skills are a bit weak, and there are still many shortcomings. I hope that all the masters will come to guide, visit and help each other, and give you advice. I am very grateful...

Watch the sample, but don't watch it after you finish it. It's not that it will come out once or twice.

This article is actually quite to my liking, and I have been following it, and I have voted for it all my monthly votes. There are two things that make people uncomfortable. Nanzhu is a bit sentimental, and he is a bit ambiguous with all three women. He cuddles with one, and then unexpectedly goes to bed with that one. However, after all, Bai Yueguang is far away, and it is difficult to calm down. Hey! To be honest, I really don't like it! In addition, looking at the writing style of the whole article, speaking from the front, it is written very calmly. It is always difficult to find a way out of doubts, but it is awkward to find a bright future and a bright future. But from another point of view, it is a bit boring. As I walk, I can see the mountain peak that I am about to reach, but it is twists and turns, high and low, and I just can't reach it. In a hurry. It's really hard to have a hearty time! Hehe