I Have a Portable Farm

The boss is the boss, just write 3 million words

Let's sort out the core issues in the book one by one: First, the basic text is rough and full of errors and omissions. The book is extremely long, but proofreading is almost missing. Typos and grammatical errors can be seen everywhere, and the writing feels perfunctory. In order to increase the number of words, the author fills in a lot of irrelevant farming trivia. Even after entering the stage of cultivation, he still repeatedly piles up the details of various crop plantings. The main line is delayed and a large number of chapters are seriously watered down. Second, the characters and plot logic are seriously separated. The characters and the plot are often contradictory: the protagonist holds space spiritual water, is already a cultivator, is completely self-sufficient in materials, but runs out to purchase mineral water without logic; the heroine is so powerful that she can easily compete with professional instructors, but she turns around and is knocked down by an ordinary passerby with a sap. The emotional line of Guan Bingtong is forcibly interspersed, and the interaction is abrupt and abrupt. It is purely used to fill the space and has no real role in promoting the main line. Third, the issue of Marianization is particularly prominent. The villains such as the younger brother and Mr. Hu clearly intend to murder the protagonist. The protagonist clearly has the power to crush the opponent, but he repeatedly shows mercy and survives. He only relies on subsequent villains to cause trouble and the plot is repeated. Similar conflicts are repeated repeatedly, which makes the audience feel tired. Fourth, the worldview structure is unbalanced, and the combat power and power settings are collapsed. The story integrates the mortal society and the cultivation system, but the balance between the two sides completely collapses: the domestic elite special forces such as Lijian and Feiyu are outnumbered, and the entire team, except for the leader, has no innate masters. They are helpless in the face of foreign enemies, and the overall description weakens our armed forces; foreign opponents are wreaking havoc within the country, and the protagonist can only hide in his own vegetable garden to protect himself secretly. There is no corresponding check and balance at the national level, and the logic is difficult to reconcile. Fifth, after more than 200 chapters, the loopholes in the secret realm are more obvious. A large number of young monks in the Lingwu Realm have appeared collectively. The local authorities have no equivalent high-level experts to maintain the balance. The foundation for the peaceful coexistence of the two parties is completely missing, and forced coexistence is very inconsistent. Sixth, the subject matter positioning is confusing and the priorities are reversed. The work is under the banner of urban cultivation, and the core conflict should have revolved around cultivation, secret realms, and the game between various forces. As a result, most of the space is spent on trivial daily tasks such as tending the vegetable garden and selling fruits and vegetables. The main thread of cultivation is reduced to a side job, and the rhythm is reversed. Overall, the opening frame of this book is acceptable, and the plot of farming and business in the early stage is quite smooth. However, after writing 200 chapters, the author only focused on piling up the number of words and neglected to polish the logic, proofread the text, and balance the world view. Various loopholes broke out. I chose to abandon the book after reading 275 chapters. I hope it can serve as a lightning protection reference for readers who are ready to get into the pit.

After watching more than 300 episodes, I started growing vegetables every day. There's no sense of urgency anymore.

This book was renamed The Story of Foodie Cultivating Immortality.

The wisdom is reduced, the wisdom is reduced, the wisdom is reduced extremely!

Is this the best writing in recent times? If you only have writing skills, can you still get into college with this IQ? Even those who dropped out of junior high school wouldn't have such an IQ! [Fake smile][Fake smile][Fake smile]

After reading hundreds of chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. I feel so cowardly. I really wish the protagonist would be killed as soon as possible to settle the matter.

After reading about 200 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The farming at the beginning was okay. As long as you practice, you will practice. As long as you write about an incident that is opposite to the protagonist, you will collectively become wise. At first, the protagonist knew that someone was targeting him, and there were obviously many opportunities to catch him alive and ask the people behind the scenes, but the protagonist always killed him instantly! Then when the younger brother comes back to his family, he can lie to his family at will, and even if he becomes a gangster, he can get back with lies that cannot be lied again. How should I put it? The family can also explain it as being blinded by family affection, but as the country's most powerful official security organization, it doesn't do anything behind the scenes when it recruits members? Basically, anyone with eyes can see that he is a villain and can be accepted as a key training target! No wonder such an organization only uses four ninjas to kill one of them!

Just try to persuade a lot of people at the beginning, right? The protagonist was adopted by his grandfather, and his grandson was still in school and was a bad boy. The protagonist worked hard and worked multiple jobs to support him. He also responded to his request and gave him whatever he asked for. He even gave him compensation for work-related injuries when he was hit while delivering food. Is this reasonable? Can you see this?

Watching too much can lower your IQ.